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Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 2:26 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Oh hells no this idiots will get it once Edward finds out uuu

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Seriously? Way to give us a heart attack! I'm going to have faith, that everyone will be ok, and Edward will get to Bella! Please don't leave us hanging long!

Take care and stay safe!

 

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 10:57 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

You can hide at the station we'll protect you!! KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”’‘

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 9:33 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Edward is going to lose his shit. Royce and Eleazar both better go into hiding.  Eleazar and his whole family are crazy.  What makes them think that just because they took Bella around with the babies that now Edward is going to want Irina????  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 8:29 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Thats where u end it omg!!!----- more more

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:53 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

This doesn't sound good. I still don't understand why Edward would want Irena. You can't make someone love you and marry you. Besides Edward is already married. It makes no sense.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:48 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

That's interesting.   So Charlie all Charlie wants is sons

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:45 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

Eleazar is delusional if he thinks Edward would ever marry his bitch of a daughter even if Bella isn't there.
I wonder what nut job Charlie is planning to do to Bella once he has her?
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:44 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

OMG, I hope Royce and Eleazer, Charlie too suffer a painful existence at Edward's hands.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2021 6:43 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

You need to go into hiding

Reviewer: cincy223 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2021 3:42 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Thank God for Mark!  Glad they married without incident 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2021 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Ha! Royce and Irina were both thwarted but damn Irina is totally insane, as in Looney Tunes nuts!!!

Well, thanks to Mark's stubbornness, with beautiful weddin' went off without a hitch *woo hoo!*

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 10:00 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

I love this Esme too, yay they're married.  Go Mark standing up to Royce. Irina is nuttier than a fruitcake.

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 8:03 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Loved it!! Happy the wedding went off without a big problem. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2021 4:31 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Woo hoo for married. Irina is such a delusional biatch. Riley is gonna get himself killed.... And he needs to be Along with Eleazar. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 7:23 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Thank you for the update..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 6:56 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Glad to see they are married before the drama starts! Love this story and can't wait to see where you take us from here! Thanks for another amazing tale. Stay safe and healthy! Ciao 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 6:33 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Finally. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 4:13 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 4:04 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Uuu love esme mother’s love and Robbie was perfect to give Bella away Jajaja trash was out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

I love it

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 2:05 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Wonder if Edward has a feeling that Royce is up to something with Elezar that's why he put Mark with Bella instead of him???

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘’

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 1:25 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Yes, they are married! I hope someone finds out about Royce treason and about Eleazar's plans. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2021 12:53 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

Despite Royce and Irina they got married.  Loved this chapter.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Lovely thought minor dearest

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 7:01 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Edward will do anything for her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

That will take down the tough guy lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2021 1:49 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2021 1:54 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Loved that they got her chest.  Now if we could just get rid of Carmen and Irina!!!!  Stupid bitches.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 6:31 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Loving it.  I love Esme had arranged to get the chest for Bella.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 4:45 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: biblepam Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Between Riley, Irina and her family, poor Bella isn't going to stand much of a chance.. I smell trouble brewing...till laters, Pam

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2021 2:39 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

I adore your stories. I cannot wait to read the next chapter!  Thank you so much for writing. 

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 10:57 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

It's insane of Irina and her family to believe Edward would ever marry her even if, by some miracle, they took out Bella and the babies...perish the thought *shudder!* I guess that means they are nuthouse level insane!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 9:02 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Glad Esme and Edward made sure Bella got her grandparents things. Always love Esme but there at the end......oh my. Lol.  Loved her even more .

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 6:39 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Carmen is going to get herself and her daughter killed I think.  Yes for them getting Bella her chest.

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 6:11 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

He's not your Edward, Irina and the will stay married!!!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘’

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 5:57 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

great story,thanks

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 5:46 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Great as always

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2021 5:20 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Carmen and Irina are both bitches. I hope Bella and Esme get to kill them

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2021 4:13 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

I'm so curious how Esme's gonna retrieve Bella's box! Either it will entail a confrontation with her parents or a thief in the night will spirit it away. I'm kinda partial to a real sit down talkin' to LOL!

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2021 3:49 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Hahahah! Looks like Esme has gained two more daughters in Alice and Rose! It's a damn shame there's a fox in the henhouse they don't know about...yet! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2021 5:25 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Awwww.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2021 2:01 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Sweet chapter.   Lol got Esme's plans to get the lace.  I don't doubt her for a second. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2021 4:03 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

:) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2021 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Oh no

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 7:10 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

LOL, they all have a healthy fear of their women.  Esme is so sweet, loving it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 3:58 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Loved the talk between Emmett and Bella.  

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2021 2:48 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Awwww you the Cullen man are wiped Jajaja love where esme tells the girls that she’s got lace for all her boys love it

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 11:40 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

Great as always

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 9:34 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen ~ Blood History

:):)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2021 2:44 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Poor Bree getting taken advantage of.  30days is pretty short but doable.. 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2021 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

OMG I hope the Cullens notice the moles. Please update soon.

Reviewer: vickilee Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2021 12:48 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Waiting patiently for the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 9:31 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 9:15 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Ugh no harming pregnant women and babies. Please!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 10:10 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Cant wait for the wedding I hope she gets to walk 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Thank y ou for the update. . Well done..I hope Marcus fails to get Bella..Until you post again 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2021 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

So Royce is the mole

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 8:15 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Is Royce Bree's boyfriend?????? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 7:37 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Oh my. I HAVE GOT to get caught up with this story. Irina is a whiny bitch.  

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 3:50 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Wondering if Eleazar will get Charlie involved too!!

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’‘”’

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 3:39 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2021 3:27 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Oh wow...

I am happy for Edward an Bella.  

Eleazar has me concerned.  

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2021 11:50 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

Well damn.......

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 1:11 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Will they get her and what will they do to her

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2021 3:20 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Ugh! Royce sure snatched up the opportunity to get his hands on that key and the code! This cannot end well *eeek!*

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2021 1:48 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2021 2:43 AM Title: Chapter One ~ First Blood

Loved it can't wait to read more! Your stories are always amazing 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2021 9:06 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Royce is the mole!  Oh I cannot wait for Edward to tear him a new one!

Eleazar and Irina are both devil's!

 

Cannot wait for more :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2021 9:25 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

freaking me out and cant wait for more

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 5:11 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Thank you for the update...I hope Edward is aware of what he let happen..I hope it's  a set up and they catch Royce in the act along with  Marcus .  I know they are aware there is s mold..until you post again ..well done

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 3:55 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

No harming pregnant women and babies born or not please

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 4:15 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Oh my Eleazar.... Wondering if Royce is a mole.  Ack

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2021 2:49 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Omg!  He is cahoots with Charlie.  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 9:57 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

UGH.. no harming pregnant women. Polese. lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 7:23 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

:) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 5:08 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Love their interaction Royce he’s probably the mole eleazar is probably talking to Charlie oh boy he’s going to get it if anything happens to Bella or the baby’s

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:53 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Royce is the mole. Betcha

KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’‘’”

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:12 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Damn!  Freakin cliffhanger!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

I bet that Royce is the mole

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2021 12:22 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Royce is the mole and Charlie is probably who he was talking too. I really hope they don't capture Bella. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2021 11:32 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

So Royce is the fucking rat!!!!!!!!  

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2021 7:06 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Love your story. Hope you update more often. 

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2021 1:01 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

I hope Bella stays safe and they don't get her or hurt Bella. I cannot wait to see Edward's men make Irina and Eleazar and the traitor pay.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2021 3:14 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

So good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2021 7:37 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

:) 

Reviewer: louanne61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2021 11:35 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Please don't let them hurt the babies. I had a lot of stress with my 4th pregnancy. She was still born. Even after 27 years I still think of what I could have done to stop it happening. Although I went on to have a son nothing will ever replace Toni.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 11:36 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

I'm loving this story so much.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 4:21 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

OMG that is no cool people will die messing with Bella cant wait for more

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2021 12:50 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Says the Ho..

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Oh no

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 7:40 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Oh shit

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 7:56 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Eleazar is a bastard and Irina is a bitch.

Reviewer: Rita01tx Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 2:26 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Somebody's princess is a spoiled, stinkin' brat who needs her ass handed to her and then locked up for life in the worst insane asylum imaginable...maybe in Russia LOL!

 

In the meantime, I sure hope the Cullens run regular deep checks on their personnel 'cause they're in trouble if it's true about the mole!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2021 7:59 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

I love them together!! Oh no!! I hope Edward is ready for what seems to be coming!! lol Please update soon!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2021 6:26 PM Title: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Ack Irina and her machinations. 

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