Date: 18 Oct 2020 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 49
Loved the ending of this chapter. Actually all the chapter. So Carlisle was not dead.....but he is now. Between Carlisle and Esme it is a wonder that Edward is so normal. Lol. Alice not so lucky.
It's remarkably true.
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG! LOVED IT! That was crazy! I wonder who they just shot! I know Edward will be okay, but are they going to be taken hostage or will backup arrive in time? Can't wait until next week!
There are so many options!
Date: 15 Oct 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG!!!!!!!! Esme.....Wow. I really did not see that. She was one cold hearted bitch....Queen Bitch. Ok, but who is shooting at Edward and Bella????? Hope you update soon.
So much going on!
Date: 02 Oct 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 44
Finally I was getting very frustrated. I am glad you didn't write it with Bella asking for a divorce. This is how it should have been from a long time ago. It shouldn't have taken so long for the I love you's
It's merely how I saw it happening, and there was no catalyst for her to go back to Forks before this.
Date: 24 Sep 2020 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 41
I don't blame Edward for wanting revenge. So Carlisle poisoned everyone. Did Alice help him? Did she know what he was going to do? I can't believe he just left. Why didn't he say goodbye? I would be pissed.
They think it was him. Edward wouldn't have been able to walk out if she was awake.
Date: 21 Sep 2020 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 41
This was a well written chapter...
Heck yeah, Edward needs to lay down the law
Let them know that he will not stand for any of their
Disrespectful BS! Otherwise they'll keep testing him
I agree with you.
Date: 20 Sep 2020 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 41
Well.... he's goin' on a rampage with every right. So it was Carlisle. That sneezy little rascal. It doesn't surprise really. Where's Esme? Haven't heard from her in a while. I cant wait for Charlie 's and Renee's reaction to baby Quinn.
Thanks for the update.
He sure thinks it was.
Date: 18 Sep 2020 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh no! How heartbreaking. Both times something has happened to the, one of them has had the feeling that something was going to happen. I think they need to pay closer attention to their gut instincts. Can't wait until next week and see what some of the fallout will be.
It's true, they have the instincts for it but it's yet to save them.
Date: 17 Sep 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh wow.... that's heart breaking, I hope they get through this because and they don't bottle up the grief. I think it's the Santiago's cause they did say that he didnt mind the rules to harm the women and children but still I have this nagging feeling. How can Carlisle and Alice betray the family. Esme is a puppet in all this.
Wonderful as usual and please update soon like maybe tomorrow or the the day after.
Lol, sorry about not updating early.
Date: 15 Sep 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 39
Wow! I certainly didn't see that coming. As bitter and angry as Carlisle is I can definitely see him selling Edward out to the other Families. What about Esme? Is she involved in all of this too? Can't wait for the next chapter. I love this story!
Thank you so much!
Date: 15 Sep 2020 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 39
oh my!! Thank you for the update..well done..What is going on with Alice & Carlisle? Did Alice know Bella was pregnant and didn't tell her brother? why would a sister do that to her brother? until you post again
Alice has reasons, probably not good ones.