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Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 7, Feb 23rd - June 30th 1920

After I was born in 1949 my mother was in a hospital and received those type of treatments.  Her aunt worked there and discovered that the Dr. who delivered me did nto inspect the afterbirth correctly and missed part of it.  After she had a D&C tor correct the problem she was fine and came home.  She never spoke of it to me but my grandmother told me when I was an adult.  It is something I have wondered about sometimes but never asked her about it. 

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2020 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5, February 15th 1920

I think that you should have Alice remember everything she currently know, don't make her forget, I know you might be trying to stay true to canon but I'm curious what it could mean if Alice remembers all of it. even after being bitten by her sire, give it some thought

Author's Response:

Even though that would be interesting, this is part of a series were I tell each Cullen member's canon origin story, and the other two completed ones include Alice's memory loss.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2020 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4, Jan 21st - Feb 14th 1920

He does not fine the letter and the hired killer kills jis new wife for revenge.

 

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 November 19th 1917

Still loving this! 😊

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:36 AM Title: Prologue 1905 - 1910

Loving this!😊

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2020 11:54 PM Title: Prologue 1905 - 1910

Congratulations on your 10th anniversary as a twi-ffn-author!
I'm looking forward to your interpretation of Alice's life before Jasper and the Cullens.

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