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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 25

Vicky is an awesome bad arse that I just love.  Nice that E's dad came to support them.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

Glad Charlie took Vicki's threats seriously.  But what was he deal in court?  Loved the street fest they did for the new Grand Opening. 

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

I have very much enjoyed reading your stories, and as I've stated before I'm very impressed with your writing skills as they have develped. Thanks very much to all involved...

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

tHANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..WELL DONE..UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

Soooo freaking love your Vicky.  Glad Charlie will get what he deserves. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2020 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love loved it !

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2020 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

Charlie is the crazy one.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

LOVE Vicky!!!!!!!! I would love Charlie's POV at the end of story. I would love to know why he has done the things he has done. Also would like to know the pain he will/is going to endure while he is in prison.  

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!!!!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 24

Charile is too crazy to get off as he is the one acting completely irrationally and they have plenty of evidence.   Vicki is a one scary women.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2020 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter! So I love Vicki and a Great if her also. Loved this chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 24

Vicky is my hero OMG love her.  Charlie needs to rot in hell

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

Vicky is badazz

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

Has charlie always been this unstable o is he getting worse?   Dam!   i like bad ass Vicky.    thanks for writing and sharing,

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 24

Finally!! Charlie has been taken away!! Vicky is Awesome!! 

Reviewer: TwilightFann1969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 24

Kasi,

Thank you for all your hard work with all the hard times you are going through right now. This chapter had a lot in it but damn it was so worth the wait. Thank you, thank you, thank you! 

Until next time,

Elaine

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

love vicky

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: GuardianSakura Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

I love this story and this chapter was well worth the wait please be safe and take however long you guys need real life sucks sometimes 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Damn Vicki is bad ass I love it. I just hope this is the end of Bella's issues with Charlie, kinda scared that guy for the tests made her sign a statement giving Charlie her money....let's hope not.

Reviewer: dixiechickie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

I've been reading y'all's stories for a while now and I must say they get better and better! Good job, I'm so proud of y'all! This Vicky, man she's got balls of steel! Love her! Can't wait for Charlie to get what's coming to him...in every way.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Thank you for updating during the upside down way life has turned.
Charlie is so predictable. His attempt to draw them away and then ambush them has not changed. Vicky is wicked scary in her own vindictive way. Lol

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

I want to be Vicky  when I grow  up

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

good update

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 23

Things are coming along.  I'm wondering what Charlie is up to. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2020 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

New place sounds awesome.  Glad Marcus gave them the warning.  Woo hoo for sexathon. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2020 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Yeah! Loved the update....ready for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hot tub sex!!!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

Edward is awesome 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

So excited! Literally my drop everything to read update posts

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

The new building changes, layouts, uniforms and mixers (lol) all seem to be a success with the staff and owners.   :)      Marcus approved of everything and I'm pleased that he warned them more about Charie.

Present shopping was very couple-y.   ;)    Sexy time was hot and passionate and made me jealous of fictional characters.   hehehe,,,,

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Christmas and the opening are an exciting time for the entire group.
Charlie will try to find a way to extract more from his daughter.
Hoping Uncle James gets his wish.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

I would like to see Charlie hung by his balls

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

I am hoping they find that Bella is already pregnant!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love it things are going great and they are still careful it's perfect 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope they can catch Charlie or one of his minions in the act. He deserves all the bad things that can happen to a person. And then some!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

Wondering who finally takes out Charlie?
Bella finally having children will be the best possible ending.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully sweet Bella will get used to the praise and compliments from people about her work.   

I'm pleased about the restraining order on Charlie the abusive douche canoe.

Bella and Edward's sexy time was jealousy inducing.    ;)    At least I can live vicariously.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 22

I want to read how Vicky makes Charlie pay

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awe so happy for her

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love it and the lemon

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

Love it and the lemon

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

That was so good... I kept hoping Charlie wouldn't show up and ruin Bella's cake.  Loved it.  Thank you. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella is amazing now she just has to know it.  I hope Charlie goes to hell

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

I want to see Charlie get his just desserts. Extended prison time, huge monetary fines and the loss of all his businesses for a start. Then maybe he should get shanked in prison for being a child abuser. I'll probably think of more later...haha

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22

Charlie doesn't just need to be jailed, he needs so suffer - a lot.  Painfully

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2020 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2020 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2020 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it! 

Thanks for stepping up and taking care of the child!! 

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

I sure hope they are anticipating all the hell Charlie might unleash.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love how protective Edward is of Bella. Charlie needs to be dealth with soon. He is evil. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

Sound like E's plans are coming together.  Glad b and j are talking. Yey for bakery and apt.

Reviewer: miss brickworks Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

I would like to hear the backstory of why he is so evil. I would also like to see Charlie get a well deserved beatdown

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20

Seems there are a few working together to make the restaurant fail. But with Edward, Bella and her friends and family they are working hard to make itt succeed. I like the new theme, reflecting the Scottish heritage. I hope they catch Charlie soon because I would love to see his ass handed to him. Glad Edward finally had a chance to explain to Bella about his review of the restaurant as Anthony Masen and why he purchased the property next door.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

So glad she and Edward are back together.  Also glad that she and Jasper are talking. Vickiis hilarious.  Lol. Can't wait to see Vicky in court and when she gets her hands on Charlie

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21

Progress on all fronts.
Charlie is an outlier, unsure when he will creep back in to their lives.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 21

That is one cute kid you have and when you have little ones time means nothing so no worrys I will be here.  I think Charlie is going to loose hi mind and I cant wait till he does.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love it wow what a great family to have 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you for update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Charlie is gonna try to kill her... Bella better get a will in place

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2020 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

good :)

Reviewer: nounoute Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2020 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

Merci beaucoup j'adore

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2020 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Sooo loving Vikky in this.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2020 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank you for update..well done..until you post again

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2020 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

They need to set some sort of a trap for Charlie; with police support of course.

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter. Thanks for taking the time to add in the correct behavior a police officer should have and for noting all the officers who have done their jobs without abusing  others..that was well said. All lives matter, but for THIS particular Issue, Black lives matter.  💛

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love this chapter!!!!!! Vicky is a trip!!!! Lol!!!!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love Vicki 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

I cant wait for vicky to get ahold of Charlie lol

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

So much can be worked through when people talk to each other.   sighs in relief....   Hopefully Mike and Joe both went to the police station to confess as promised.    

Edward and Bella can get closer now with those last truths out in the open. 

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 20

Wow oh wow karma is about to hit charlie in the face ha now I hope this is a new beginning for Edward and Bella

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am glad they are getting things straigtened out. I think Charlie is going to show up again but he will get what he deserves this time!!! lol

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

Omg - that was an awesome chapter! I LOVE Vickie!! I hope Newton follows through & Joe is history. I think Charlie is angry and he is going to retaliate without thinking & be caught! Love it! 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh Charlie is coming again

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

Aww maybe this restraunt will be his and the bakery will be hers...so they both own and get what they want

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

Did they follow up with the police to make sure Mike and Joe had turned themselves in?

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2020 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing Charlie get what's coming to him

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2020 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

I just knew Mike had something to do with what happened. But I thought Jessica was involved too since she was dating him before. And now Joe was possibly the one who planted the rat. I was wondering why things had been moved around in the kitchen. I thought they would suspect something when they noticed it. Good thing Jasper and Edward had that talk. They should have had it long before but Jasper probably wouldn't have believed Edward. And now to find out that Charlie wanted to buy the place next door to Renney's Soul, what was thaat all about? Was he hoping to put renney's Soul out of business by hiring staff to make it better, doubtful. I more suspect he would have found some way to enter Renney's Soul perhaps by a secret entrance. He is out to destroy his daughter. I'm glad Vicky and Jimmy showed up to pitch in and get things up and running. Aro knows someone in the health department and Vikcy wants to have a go at them too so with all that they should be able to get the place up and running again soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well at least they are all talking a bit.  Oooh Vicky's here

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow. So much going on.  Wonder how much Charlie is paying that."inspector" 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ugh again. Jasper is just so stupid and pushy. He's really oblivious when everyone tried to get off the Charlie train

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Jasper is really pushing way too fast and far.  Ugh, hope he finds out about the real Charlie soon. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

Yea Jasper needs to be told about Charlie sooner rather than later. 

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