Date: 08 Apr 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does Bella know that Jasper is her brother? Did she leave the states because of a rift in the famSo many questions!!!!
Eric and Taylor need to go. Period. And Mike should be on the way out with them. I have a feeling mike has been skimming off the top and a good accountant will be able to spot that right away.
Date: 02 Apr 2020 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I feel like Bella was thrown into the deep end and doesn't know how to swim! I fell bad for her. I think her reason for being gone is a good one and one that I hope we will find out soon. Edward is very hard on Bella and not knowing all the facts. The employees have no respect for Bella and need to be taken down a peg or two. Bella is trying and is working on little to no sleep. Edward should see that if Alice is taking up for Bella then there is a good reason. Please update soon!
Date: 01 Apr 2020 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella obviously doesn't know how to run a restaurant. That's why she has asked for Edward's help. I wish he wouldn't be so impatient with her. She has not been running the restaurant like Edward seems to think, Charlie has. I also think Bella is tired. She has not made a good impression on him. The restarant needs to close for the evening, Bella and Alice and Edward need to sit down and make a plan of how to run the restaurant. Then they all need to go home and get some rest.
Date: 01 Apr 2020 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
I know Edward thinks Isabella was on a vacation trip. But I have a feeling it is a lot more than that. I feel like she has been in some kind of rehab or care facility, perhaps from an accident or something else. Sounds like Charlie cares for his daughter and that's why he spent 6 months with her. It's too bad that Charlie doesn't acknowledge Jasper. Perhaps he didn't know about Jasper, like maybe he was a result of an affair Charlie wasn't aware produced a child? So many thoughts going through my head. It is obvious that Edward doesn't care for Isabella even though he hasn't met her before. Edward reminds me of Gordon Ramsey.
Date: 30 Mar 2020 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hopefully there is a very good reason why Bella was away for so long. Is there a family member that has been ill or is it Bella? I hope that she isn't a spoiled girl and doesn't care about her grandmothers resturant, but I get the feeling she is far from spoiled. I hope that she will give Jasper a chance and give him the family he needs. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to find out why Bella has been away for so long. I understand she was upset finding out about Jasper but not to even come back for her grandmother's funeral. I hope Jasper doesn't lose Alice when the truth comes out. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 23 Mar 2020 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Somehow, I think Bella actually trusted her father to do right by her inheritance. And I think there's more to the finding out she had a sibling thing than we realize at this point.
l look forward to seeing where you take this!
Date: 21 Mar 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
What has Bella been doing while away?
Any chance she has been studying under a master chef?
She must be very angry with her father for his lying and cheating past.
Bumpy road ahead for this crew as they attempt to resurrect the once iconic restaurant.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can see why Edward wants to make a name for himself on his own. But why does he feel the need to date and sleep with cougars? And why did Isabella let her restaurant go downhill? Should be interesting story. He's already antagonistic toward Isabella.
Date: 20 Mar 2020 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was thinking about you two the other day and was hoping you were going to post another story. You are the best storytellers. I'm loving your first chapter and thankful you had Edward dump Tanya even before they got started.
Date: 19 Mar 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hopefully Edward matures some. He is kind of 'frat guy' douchey man whore. At least he drove and saw icky Tanya home. But maybe you are going for a Gordon Ramsey kind of feel for Edward. Hmmm....
Charlie is very annoying and kind of a prick. That is probably why Bella left. Her dad is an asshole.
I can't wait to read and discover more about her relationship or non relationship with her brother Jasper.
I'm hooked already. Thanks for writing and sharing.