Wondering who finally takes out Charlie?
Bella finally having children will be the best possible ending.

I want to read how Vicky makes Charlie pay

Love it and the lemon

That was so good... I kept hoping Charlie wouldn't show up and ruin Bella's cake.  Loved it.  Thank you. 

Loved it can't wait for more 

Bella is amazing now she just has to know it.  I hope Charlie goes to hell

I want to see Charlie get his just desserts. Extended prison time, huge monetary fines and the loss of all his businesses for a start. Then maybe he should get shanked in prison for being a child abuser. I'll probably think of more later...haha

Charlie doesn't just need to be jailed, he needs so suffer - a lot.  Painfully

:) 

I sure hope they are anticipating all the hell Charlie might unleash.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

Sound like E's plans are coming together.  Glad b and j are talking. Yey for bakery and apt.

Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.

Thank you for update..well done..until you post again

Progress on all fronts.
Charlie is an outlier, unsure when he will creep back in to their lives.

I love it wow what a great family to have 

Charlie is gonna try to kill her... Bella better get a will in place

Merci beaucoup j'adore

Sooo loving Vikky in this.

They need to set some sort of a trap for Charlie; with police support of course.

Love this chapter!!!!!! Vicky is a trip!!!! Lol!!!!

:) 

I cant wait for vicky to get ahold of Charlie lol

Wow oh wow karma is about to hit charlie in the face ha now I hope this is a new beginning for Edward and Bella

Omg - that was an awesome chapter! I LOVE Vickie!! I hope Newton follows through & Joe is history. I think Charlie is angry and he is going to retaliate without thinking & be caught! Love it! 

Aww maybe this restraunt will be his and the bakery will be hers...so they both own and get what they want

Did they follow up with the police to make sure Mike and Joe had turned themselves in?

I just knew Mike had something to do with what happened. But I thought Jessica was involved too since she was dating him before. And now Joe was possibly the one who planted the rat. I was wondering why things had been moved around in the kitchen. I thought they would suspect something when they noticed it. Good thing Jasper and Edward had that talk. They should have had it long before but Jasper probably wouldn't have believed Edward. And now to find out that Charlie wanted to buy the place next door to Renney's Soul, what was thaat all about? Was he hoping to put renney's Soul out of business by hiring staff to make it better, doubtful. I more suspect he would have found some way to enter Renney's Soul perhaps by a secret entrance. He is out to destroy his daughter. I'm glad Vicky and Jimmy showed up to pitch in and get things up and running. Aro knows someone in the health department and Vikcy wants to have a go at them too so with all that they should be able to get the place up and running again soon.

Wow. So much going on.  Wonder how much Charlie is paying that."inspector" 

Jasper is really pushing way too fast and far.  Ugh, hope he finds out about the real Charlie soon. 

Oh wow Good thing Peter is on their side.  Wow Charlie and Esme... Didn't see that one coming

See I knew it.  Bella knows about the Masen thing.  Jasper is really too puzhy

Glad they are spending some time together outside the restaurant. 

Loved it can't wait for more 

Can't wait

nice update

Some ass are going to feel the heat OMG 

Charlie in for world of pain (I hope)

I had a feeling Mike was involved somehow, but the Joe person was a bit random. Poor Jessica. Maybe Jake will make a better boyfriend?
Lovin' Vicky and James.

Thank goodness some much needed discussions and apologies happened.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Ladies you have me every single time at the edge of my sit wanting to know what will happen next!!! You are Rock Stars!!! 

I have loved every single chapter you post, sorry for not reviewing all of them, I'll try to do better in the future.

I loved this weeks chapter. Edward not giving up or feeling sorry for himself, he knows he messed up but is working to fix it. 

I'm happy Ed&J, J&A had their respective discutions and would love to see how they move on from this curve life through at them. I'm glad J knows a lot about the truth now. 

I feel sorry for Katie and a little bit for Tanya too, but all I can say is karma is a Bitch... I do hope Katie is able to move forward from this horrible experience, cause we all know that even if Tanya was oblivious Charlie is not to be trusted.

I really love seeing Carlisle in Cheff/Business mode. He did have very valid points.

Also good for Jessica for coming forward. I do hope something happens between her and Jake, she deserves someone good in her life not that piece of shit Mike. Can't wait to see him, Joe and Charlie pay for all their sins.

But what I was seriouly not expecting and just had me laughing non stop is Vicky and Jimmy just showing up at Edward's. My only thought as I was finishing to read the chapter was "Oh Lord, are they seriously going to let let Vicky loose on American soil? I don't think America can handle that!!!" can't wait to see her going all Scottish Mama Bear and I'm sure Esme is going to gang up with her!!! Let the mamas loose! They'll fix everyone up good and proper!

I hope you and your loved ones are doing well. Things on my part are as good as they can be all things considered. Sending you lots of love from your biggest Argentina fan and counting the days till the next update.

Bisous,

R. 

I guessed that Mike was somehow involved with Charlie. Filthy scum the lot of them!

Now to get it fixed and start the investigation into Charlie and all his minions.

Wow, Charlie just got his daughter's place shut down. He doesn't have a key to the restaurant so who has he been working with? I'm glad Alice is having that much needed talk with Jasper. I think James and Jake can straighten thing out with Bella. 

Charlie has his minions. Wondering if the inspector was a cake?
Can Carlisle help fix this mess?

You asked all the right ?  I want to know OMG would someone just kill Charlie 

Really good

So much on this chapter.  I was wondering if Charlie was behind the missing food. But how did he in? Who is Katie.....maybe  Jessica. When did Jasper meet with Charlie and why did Jasper not tell Bella that he had meet Charlie. I hope Jake and James can get Bella to listen to Edward.  Oh, could Katie be someone from Aro's office. That would explain Charlie knowing about Edward signing papers. Can't wait for more.  

I knew someone was going to tell her he was Anthony Masen before he did!!! OMG! Jasper thought he was sleeping with Alice??? lololol What a mess!!

I hope Bella hears Edward out. I think Charlie, the health inspector and Tanya/Kate are behind the negative comments, planted dead rat and missing food. I even think there's an inside employee as well who may be working with Charlie. Could even be the fired cooks and Mike.

Edward & his family have more clout and resources.  They all need to band together quickly and exterminate Charlie and company.

if Tanya told Kate who told Charlie about the next door property that was supposed to be kept private, you can trace it directly to Tanya who must have been snooping in her bosses business and should be fired.

The main thing is Bella should hear Edward out.

Wow that blew up fast now will they be able to fix everything will Bella forgive Edward and will they find a way to stop Charlie once and for all

yikes