[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2020 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am so happy for them all
Date: 07 Dec 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the update!
Date: 05 Dec 2020 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Dec 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Glad to hear Charlie is going to be out of her life now. Nice that Tanya and Kate came to apologize.
Date: 04 Dec 2020 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
thanks so much good to see Charlie is getting a little of what he deserves
Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
So glad that things are finally looking up for them. So excited to get this update.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love how life is going along quite well for everyone. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Dec 2020 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter as always I love all of your guy's stories and don't worry about how long a wait can be real life happens and it's been a crazy year can't wait to read the next chapter and have a good holiday season and be safe out there
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2020 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I enjoy reading the ins and outs of the characters you created in this story. They feel tangible. Drama rules their world but the underlying current of persistence forges their bonds.
Date: 03 Nov 2020 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love Charlie going down.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2020 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love it everything went great and things are really looking up now it's time for the grand opening
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Charlie's submissive beaten posture doesn't fool me. I still don't trust the bastard. ugh....
Vicky is great. :)
Bella and Edward seem to be over any possible big humps.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's so cool that everyone has come to help out with the event handing out free food and having music and entertainment. That's a great way to get your name out there. Word of mouth is the best advertising. And they can have a baby, when they're ready of course. I am loving this.
I'm keeping y'all and your families in my thoughts and prayers and sending positive energy your way. Thank you for still making the time to write and share your stories with us.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
OMG! I love Vicky! She's the bomb. I would not want to piss her off!!! She's scary, but awesome! The amount of stuff she has on Charlie is amazing. He should most definitely listen to her. I wouldn't cross her.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Iove it and can't wait to see them have kids. I really hope she calls Vicki and James dad soon. I hope to see how the opening goes...how they work being part owners in each restraunt and head chef/baker of one. Maybe a little.lemons throughout. I really want to read about the proposal and wedding/honeymoon. Do Vicki, james, jimmy, and Jake all stay in america cuz they have their own restraunt back home.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
No need to worry, the updates are worth the wait!
Vicky is very scary,😁.
Hopefully Charlie will find out just how much predators are liked while in prison. He could use a few lessons from an inforcer!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Vicky is an awesome bad arse that I just love. Nice that E's dad came to support them.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad Charlie took Vicki's threats seriously. But what was he deal in court? Loved the street fest they did for the new Grand Opening.
Date: 29 Oct 2020 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have very much enjoyed reading your stories, and as I've stated before I'm very impressed with your writing skills as they have develped. Thanks very much to all involved...
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
tHANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..WELL DONE..UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
Soooo freaking love your Vicky. Glad Charlie will get what he deserves.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie is the crazy one.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE Vicky!!!!!!!! I would love Charlie's POV at the end of story. I would love to know why he has done the things he has done. Also would like to know the pain he will/is going to endure while he is in prison.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Charile is too crazy to get off as he is the one acting completely irrationally and they have plenty of evidence. Vicki is a one scary women.
Date: 17 Oct 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! So I love Vicki and a Great if her also. Loved this chapter
Date: 17 Oct 2020 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Vicky is my hero OMG love her. Charlie needs to rot in hell
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Has charlie always been this unstable o is he getting worse? Dam! i like bad ass Vicky. thanks for writing and sharing,
Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 16 Oct 2020 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Finally!! Charlie has been taken away!! Vicky is Awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Kasi,
Thank you for all your hard work with all the hard times you are going through right now. This chapter had a lot in it but damn it was so worth the wait. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Until next time,
Elaine
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love this story and this chapter was well worth the wait please be safe and take however long you guys need real life sucks sometimes
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Damn Vicki is bad ass I love it. I just hope this is the end of Bella's issues with Charlie, kinda scared that guy for the tests made her sign a statement giving Charlie her money....let's hope not.
Date: 16 Oct 2020 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
I've been reading y'all's stories for a while now and I must say they get better and better! Good job, I'm so proud of y'all! This Vicky, man she's got balls of steel! Love her! Can't wait for Charlie to get what's coming to him...in every way.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for updating during the upside down way life has turned.
Charlie is so predictable. His attempt to draw them away and then ambush them has not changed. Vicky is wicked scary in her own vindictive way. Lol
Date: 16 Oct 2020 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
I want to be Vicky when I grow up
Date: 06 Oct 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 06 Oct 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
Things are coming along. I'm wondering what Charlie is up to.
Date: 04 Oct 2020 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
New place sounds awesome. Glad Marcus gave them the warning. Woo hoo for sexathon.
Date: 03 Oct 2020 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yeah! Loved the update....ready for the next chapter.
Date: 02 Oct 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hot tub sex!!!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2020 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
So excited! Literally my drop everything to read update posts
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
The new building changes, layouts, uniforms and mixers (lol) all seem to be a success with the staff and owners. :) Marcus approved of everything and I'm pleased that he warned them more about Charie.
Present shopping was very couple-y. ;) Sexy time was hot and passionate and made me jealous of fictional characters. hehehe,,,,
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2020 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Christmas and the opening are an exciting time for the entire group.
Charlie will try to find a way to extract more from his daughter.
Hoping Uncle James gets his wish.
Date: 01 Oct 2020 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
I would like to see Charlie hung by his balls
Date: 30 Sep 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am hoping they find that Bella is already pregnant!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2020 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love it things are going great and they are still careful it's perfect
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2020 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope they can catch Charlie or one of his minions in the act. He deserves all the bad things that can happen to a person. And then some!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wondering who finally takes out Charlie?
Bella finally having children will be the best possible ending.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully sweet Bella will get used to the praise and compliments from people about her work.
I'm pleased about the restraining order on Charlie the abusive douche canoe.
Bella and Edward's sexy time was jealousy inducing. ;) At least I can live vicariously.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 18 Sep 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I want to read how Vicky makes Charlie pay
Date: 17 Sep 2020 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awe so happy for her
Date: 17 Sep 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it and the lemon
Date: 17 Sep 2020 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it and the lemon
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was so good... I kept hoping Charlie wouldn't show up and ruin Bella's cake. Loved it. Thank you.
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Sep 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 17 Sep 2020 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is amazing now she just has to know it. I hope Charlie goes to hell
Date: 17 Sep 2020 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Enjoyed it!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I want to see Charlie get his just desserts. Extended prison time, huge monetary fines and the loss of all his businesses for a start. Then maybe he should get shanked in prison for being a child abuser. I'll probably think of more later...haha
Date: 16 Sep 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Charlie doesn't just need to be jailed, he needs so suffer - a lot. Painfully
Date: 29 Aug 2020 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 28 Aug 2020 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!
Thanks for stepping up and taking care of the child!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
I sure hope they are anticipating all the hell Charlie might unleash. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Aug 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love how protective Edward is of Bella. Charlie needs to be dealth with soon. He is evil.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Sound like E's plans are coming together. Glad b and j are talking. Yey for bakery and apt.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
I would like to hear the backstory of why he is so evil. I would also like to see Charlie get a well deserved beatdown
Date: 27 Aug 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Seems there are a few working together to make the restaurant fail. But with Edward, Bella and her friends and family they are working hard to make itt succeed. I like the new theme, reflecting the Scottish heritage. I hope they catch Charlie soon because I would love to see his ass handed to him. Glad Edward finally had a chance to explain to Bella about his review of the restaurant as Anthony Masen and why he purchased the property next door.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for update..well done..until you post again
Date: 27 Aug 2020 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
So glad she and Edward are back together. Also glad that she and Jasper are talking. Vickiis hilarious. Lol. Can't wait to see Vicky in court and when she gets her hands on Charlie
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2020 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Progress on all fronts.
Charlie is an outlier, unsure when he will creep back in to their lives.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
That is one cute kid you have and when you have little ones time means nothing so no worrys I will be here. I think Charlie is going to loose hi mind and I cant wait till he does.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love it wow what a great family to have
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for update..well done..until you post again
Date: 26 Aug 2020 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Charlie is gonna try to kill her... Bella better get a will in place
Date: 16 Aug 2020 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
Merci beaucoup j'adore