Date: 18 Sep 2020 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hopefully sweet Bella will get used to the praise and compliments from people about her work.
I'm pleased about the restraining order on Charlie the abusive douche canoe.
Bella and Edward's sexy time was jealousy inducing. ;) At least I can live vicariously.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
I want to see Charlie get his just desserts. Extended prison time, huge monetary fines and the loss of all his businesses for a start. Then maybe he should get shanked in prison for being a child abuser. I'll probably think of more later...haha
Date: 27 Aug 2020 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, I have no doubt Charlie will be back. He didn't get all the money he wanted last time. But Joe is not there to tell him when Bella is alone. I hope Edward and all the rest keep a close watch on her and never let her be alone. Good thing Jimmy and Vicky will be around to help out and keep a close eye on things.
Date: 27 Aug 2020 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Seems there are a few working together to make the restaurant fail. But with Edward, Bella and her friends and family they are working hard to make itt succeed. I like the new theme, reflecting the Scottish heritage. I hope they catch Charlie soon because I would love to see his ass handed to him. Glad Edward finally had a chance to explain to Bella about his review of the restaurant as Anthony Masen and why he purchased the property next door.
Date: 07 Aug 2020 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Thanks for taking the time to add in the correct behavior a police officer should have and for noting all the officers who have done their jobs without abusing others..that was well said. All lives matter, but for THIS particular Issue, Black lives matter. č’Ť
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
So much can be worked through when people talk to each other. sighs in relief.... Hopefully Mike and Joe both went to the police station to confess as promised.
Edward and Bella can get closer now with those last truths out in the open.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Aug 2020 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just knew Mike had something to do with what happened. But I thought Jessica was involved too since she was dating him before. And now Joe was possibly the one who planted the rat. I was wondering why things had been moved around in the kitchen. I thought they would suspect something when they noticed it. Good thing Jasper and Edward had that talk. They should have had it long before but Jasper probably wouldn't have believed Edward. And now to find out that Charlie wanted to buy the place next door to Renney's Soul, what was thaat all about? Was he hoping to put renney's Soul out of business by hiring staff to make it better, doubtful. I more suspect he would have found some way to enter Renney's Soul perhaps by a secret entrance. He is out to destroy his daughter. I'm glad Vicky and Jimmy showed up to pitch in and get things up and running. Aro knows someone in the health department and Vikcy wants to have a go at them too so with all that they should be able to get the place up and running again soon.
Date: 30 Jul 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonder how much Charlie is paying mike and Joe to do his dirty work? Joe is dumb to give up the extra money that was promised if the restraunt did well. Back when Edward made security changes after Charlie hit Bella...didn't he put cameras up everywhere including the kitchen?
Date: 29 Jul 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
my only thought is when are we going to get an update?? Things definitely are coming to a head and heads are going to roll. Tanya needs to be fired for breach of confidence but I think she may have bigger things to worry about like if her daughter is okay or if Charlie has hurt her.
I hope Bella listens and forgives Edwards and as for Mike and Joe? They need to fry and that inspector needs to investigated to see how many bribes he's taken to shut down a restaurant.
Date: 29 Jul 2020 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ladies you have me every single time at the edge of my sit wanting to know what will happen next!!! You are Rock Stars!!!
I have loved every single chapter you post, sorry for not reviewing all of them, I'll try to do better in the future.
I loved this weeks chapter. Edward not giving up or feeling sorry for himself, he knows he messed up but is working to fix it.
I'm happy Ed&J, J&A had their respective discutions and would love to see how they move on from this curve life through at them. I'm glad J knows a lot about the truth now.
I feel sorry for Katie and a little bit for Tanya too, but all I can say is karma is a Bitch... I do hope Katie is able to move forward from this horrible experience, cause we all know that even if Tanya was oblivious Charlie is not to be trusted.
I really love seeing Carlisle in Cheff/Business mode. He did have very valid points.
Also good for Jessica for coming forward. I do hope something happens between her and Jake, she deserves someone good in her life not that piece of shit Mike. Can't wait to see him, Joe and Charlie pay for all their sins.
But what I was seriouly not expecting and just had me laughing non stop is Vicky and Jimmy just showing up at Edward's. My only thought as I was finishing to read the chapter was "Oh Lord, are they seriously going to let let Vicky loose on American soil? I don't think America can handle that!!!" can't wait to see her going all Scottish Mama Bear and I'm sure Esme is going to gang up with her!!! Let the mamas loose! They'll fix everyone up good and proper!
I hope you and your loved ones are doing well. Things on my part are as good as they can be all things considered. Sending you lots of love from your biggest Argentina fan and counting the days till the next update.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Charlie just got his daughter's place shut down. He doesn't have a key to the restaurant so who has he been working with? I'm glad Alice is having that much needed talk with Jasper. I think James and Jake can straighten thing out with Bella.
Date: 23 Jul 2020 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
So much on this chapter. I was wondering if Charlie was behind the missing food. But how did he in? Who is Katie.....maybe Jessica. When did Jasper meet with Charlie and why did Jasper not tell Bella that he had meet Charlie. I hope Jake and James can get Bella to listen to Edward. Oh, could Katie be someone from Aro's office. That would explain Charlie knowing about Edward signing papers. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think the health inspector is being blackmailed by Charlie how else was Remy soul never closed down when it was bad. I think the health inspector planted it. I also think Jasper is stupid and made things worse with his need to be loved....him being his own chef to his own place should clue him in that you be professional and don't bother someone at work.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella hears Edward out. I think Charlie, the health inspector and Tanya/Kate are behind the negative comments, planted dead rat and missing food. I even think there's an inside employee as well who may be working with Charlie. Could even be the fired cooks and Mike.
Edward & his family have more clout and resources. They all need to band together quickly and exterminate Charlie and company.
if Tanya told Kate who told Charlie about the next door property that was supposed to be kept private, you can trace it directly to Tanya who must have been snooping in her bosses business and should be fired.
The main thing is Bella should hear Edward out.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy Hell! I'm so very heartbroken for Edward and Bella both! I can't wait until it comes out that he was buying the place next to the restaurant for her to have a bakery, maybe that will make her understand how very much he loves her. I'm not going to bash him for not telling her about being Anthony Masen, he was worried it would drive them apart and people make bad decisions when scared, that people part of being human! I'm really going to look forward to Charlie and his crownies being taken down!! Can't wait for the next update! Take care and stay safe