[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
great wedding
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2021 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
very but I don't want this to end
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
just want to see Charlie get punished
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2021 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
he will be back
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2021 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
this is a great story the plot is very good. Lemons are a little tame but plot before lemons is never a bad thing
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2021 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is a regular Jon Taffer
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2021 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love the Charlie character from the movies so this is a little hard to read but I love the story
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
ahe yelling at Charlie
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
nice twist
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't wait to find out what her prkblem with Jasper is
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am guessing Bella is the cake lady, even if I an wrong I love this story
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2021 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
this is so good, very different
Date: 29 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Lovely wedding and start of the honeymoon. Awww for new baby
Date: 29 Jul 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29
Lovely wedding and start of the honeymoon. Awww for new baby
Date: 26 Jul 2021 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
What a nice wedding. Lots of cultural things for Edward to learn. Wonder if he went commando. Worked out that Rose had her baby right before they left. I'm curious to see what name she and Emmett decide on for their baby. So thoughtful of Edward to be concerned that Bella has her cuddles. Their future is looking bright.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2021 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
That was a fun wedding all around. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Jul 2021 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
love it love it you make me happy
Date: 14 Jul 2021 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 13 Jul 2021 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Kasi, I'm not sure how you do that daily? I'm 59, had two of my grandsons (5&4) in a hotel swimming pool for 1 1/2 hrs and was wiped out. Then helped their parents move out of and then into a new home. It took several days to get back home and wind down.
Remember, Family always comes first .
Great wedding and celebration.
Honeymoon will be a good adventure.
Thanks to both of you for sharing this story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2021 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Kasi, I'm not sure how you do that daily? I'm 59, had two of my grandsons (5&4) in a hotel swimming pool for 1 1/2 hrs and was wiped out. Then helped their parents move out of and then into a new home. It took several days to get back home and wind down.
Remember, Family always comes first .
Great wedding and celebration.
Honeymoon will be a good adventure.
Thanks to both of you for sharing this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2021 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
This always makes me wish I could take another trip to Scotland and stay for an extended visit.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2021 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh I love it more please
Date: 31 May 2021 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait to read about Edward and Bella's wedding!
Date: 31 May 2021 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Awww what a romantic weekend get away.
Date: 30 May 2021 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Things with Charlie finally got wrapped up. The restaurant and bakery/teashop are doing well. And Tanya came by to apologize. I don't think Edward needed to hear it but i guess it made Tanya feel better.
Date: 30 May 2021 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
The drama with Charlie is almost over, just sentencing. Hopefully he gets a very long sentence. He was limping coming into the courtroom. I wonder if he was punished by more than just Vicky. Now they can all move on. The promotion for Caledonia and Wee Caledonia went off great. Who knew Bella had these hidden talents.
Date: 30 May 2021 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow!! Vicky knows her stuff. She's been waiting, gathering evidence, talking to victims and their families. Charlie is f*****.
Date: 30 May 2021 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
What is Charlie up to now? I'm glad that Bella has all this support.
Date: 30 May 2021 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
I would love to see a picture of this cake. it sounds incredible. Bella is not used to all the praise, it's overwhelming her. The night ends on a good note.
Date: 14 May 2021 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 10 May 2021 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wonderful wedding plans. So sweet that Rose could get something special for her new date as well.
Date: 07 May 2021 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 28
I would definitely let Edward teach me and thing of two. Lol.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2021 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
A person has to have great organization skills and great friends/family to help plan events like weddings. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 27
So excited for both couples, Edward/ Bella and Jake/Jessica.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2021 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
Love Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Apr 2021 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
So happy to hear from them very sweet proposal . Thanks so much
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Apr 2021 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 24 Apr 2021 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
Finally!! He asked her and she said yes!!! I love it!!!
Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad you came back
Date: 24 Apr 2021 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love the proposal. So memorable for them.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 27
That was a great chapter. I loved how Edward used spots from Bella's favorite movie for their weekend away/engagement. That made it extra special.
Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2021 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
I loved it more please
and you all take care of yourselves and stay safe that is the most important thing
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2021 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
So happy to see another chapter!
He really went all out for the engagement surprise. Kudos to a man in love and not afraid to show it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2020 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am so happy for them all
Date: 07 Dec 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the update!
Date: 05 Dec 2020 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Dec 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Glad to hear Charlie is going to be out of her life now. Nice that Tanya and Kate came to apologize.
Date: 04 Dec 2020 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
thanks so much good to see Charlie is getting a little of what he deserves
Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
So glad that things are finally looking up for them. So excited to get this update.
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2020 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love how life is going along quite well for everyone. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 03 Dec 2020 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter as always I love all of your guy's stories and don't worry about how long a wait can be real life happens and it's been a crazy year can't wait to read the next chapter and have a good holiday season and be safe out there
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2020 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
I enjoy reading the ins and outs of the characters you created in this story. They feel tangible. Drama rules their world but the underlying current of persistence forges their bonds.
Date: 03 Nov 2020 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love Charlie going down.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2020 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love it everything went great and things are really looking up now it's time for the grand opening
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Charlie's submissive beaten posture doesn't fool me. I still don't trust the bastard. ugh....
Vicky is great. :)
Bella and Edward seem to be over any possible big humps.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
It's so cool that everyone has come to help out with the event handing out free food and having music and entertainment. That's a great way to get your name out there. Word of mouth is the best advertising. And they can have a baby, when they're ready of course. I am loving this.
I'm keeping y'all and your families in my thoughts and prayers and sending positive energy your way. Thank you for still making the time to write and share your stories with us.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
OMG! I love Vicky! She's the bomb. I would not want to piss her off!!! She's scary, but awesome! The amount of stuff she has on Charlie is amazing. He should most definitely listen to her. I wouldn't cross her.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Iove it and can't wait to see them have kids. I really hope she calls Vicki and James dad soon. I hope to see how the opening goes...how they work being part owners in each restraunt and head chef/baker of one. Maybe a little.lemons throughout. I really want to read about the proposal and wedding/honeymoon. Do Vicki, james, jimmy, and Jake all stay in america cuz they have their own restraunt back home.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
No need to worry, the updates are worth the wait!
Vicky is very scary,😁.
Hopefully Charlie will find out just how much predators are liked while in prison. He could use a few lessons from an inforcer!
Date: 30 Oct 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
Vicky is an awesome bad arse that I just love. Nice that E's dad came to support them.
Date: 30 Oct 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Glad Charlie took Vicki's threats seriously. But what was he deal in court? Loved the street fest they did for the new Grand Opening.
Date: 29 Oct 2020 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have very much enjoyed reading your stories, and as I've stated before I'm very impressed with your writing skills as they have develped. Thanks very much to all involved...
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
tHANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE..WELL DONE..UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
Soooo freaking love your Vicky. Glad Charlie will get what he deserves.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie is the crazy one.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE Vicky!!!!!!!! I would love Charlie's POV at the end of story. I would love to know why he has done the things he has done. Also would like to know the pain he will/is going to endure while he is in prison.
Date: 19 Oct 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Charile is too crazy to get off as he is the one acting completely irrationally and they have plenty of evidence. Vicki is a one scary women.
Date: 17 Oct 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! So I love Vicki and a Great if her also. Loved this chapter
Date: 17 Oct 2020 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 24
Vicky is my hero OMG love her. Charlie needs to rot in hell
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Has charlie always been this unstable o is he getting worse? Dam! i like bad ass Vicky. thanks for writing and sharing,
Date: 17 Oct 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 16 Oct 2020 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Finally!! Charlie has been taken away!! Vicky is Awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2020 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Kasi,
Thank you for all your hard work with all the hard times you are going through right now. This chapter had a lot in it but damn it was so worth the wait. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Until next time,
Elaine