Date: 23 Oct 2023 7:22 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Please update
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2022 6:19 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Someone better find out what the fuck the ruskies are up to!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2022 6:19 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Someone better find out what the fuck the ruskies are up to!!!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2022 7:38 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Charlie is not happy lol
Date: 28 Nov 2022 9:29 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
What does SAIC means ? sorry I'm not familiar with American words ;-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2022 3:55 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
This is going to get very complicated for them.
Date: 27 Nov 2022 8:20 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
A pleasure to read more of those two. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2022 1:07 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
:)
Date: 27 Nov 2022 12:36 PM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
I love this! ;)
Date: 27 Nov 2022 5:18 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Uh oh! I guess Charlie is going to have something to say about that. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 27 Nov 2022 1:41 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
So glad you are back. Can't wait to read more and what Charlie thinks.
Date: 27 Nov 2022 1:29 AM Title: Chapter Six ~ Confession
Thank you for the update! Loved the chapter!
Date: 22 Sep 2020 6:25 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Please update
Date: 28 Jul 2020 8:22 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Really good
Date: 28 Jul 2020 8:22 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Really good
Date: 26 Jul 2020 7:04 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
She called him Edward. Good!
Date: 26 Jul 2020 6:51 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Oh. How are they going to make it?
Date: 26 Jul 2020 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
Thanks, this is such a fun premise.
Date: 18 Jun 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Glad Edward is being honest with her.
Date: 03 Jun 2020 2:18 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Ich bin begeistert, bitte schnell Updates. Denk nicht ans aufhören diese Geschichte muss geschrieben werden😘
Date: 27 May 2020 7:21 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
This is starting out reaLly really good. Excited for next update!
Date: 25 May 2020 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
Love it
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2020 4:30 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I enjoyed this episode!
Bella is a very good president.
Date: 14 May 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
So happy she is not pissed at him for undressing her. I hope that there was a leak about what is planed
Date: 13 May 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Oh yeah #RavensFlock!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2020 1:20 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Ooooooooo
Date: 12 May 2020 3:21 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2020 12:54 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Edward and Bella are getting closer even though dickheads are all around them. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 11 May 2020 3:22 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
very excited to figure out the back story of her thinking he's been with someone.
Date: 11 May 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Thank you for the update. Looking forward to future updates.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2020 8:10 AM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
:)
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2020 8:09 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
:)
Date: 10 May 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Thanks.
Date: 10 May 2020 7:27 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
OMG!! I love this! Dying for more! ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2020 6:39 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Keep on writing
Date: 10 May 2020 5:48 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Oh yes, I enjoyed this chapter very much. Thank you.
So they still have feelings for each other. Great !
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2020 3:48 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
How long will they be able to restrain themselves?
Date: 10 May 2020 1:49 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
:):)
Date: 10 May 2020 1:39 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
oh boy.....here we go!!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2020 12:20 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Great update. Happy Mother's Day my friend.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2020 12:20 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Great update. Happy Mother's Day my friend.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2020 12:18 PM Title: Chapter Five - Football One?
Great update. Happy Mother's Day my friend.
Date: 09 May 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
They both have regrets they need to just get over it
Date: 09 May 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
OMG shit is getting real
Date: 09 May 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I am loving this so much and so glad they are back together at least in the same place
Date: 07 May 2020 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
I am loving it I wish our world was open minded enough to a women president and a gay vice love it.
Date: 02 May 2020 7:12 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Loving this story.
Date: 28 Apr 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
I am sobbing. Just get them together!!! Sometimes she is so damn pigheaded. Ughhh
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2020 6:46 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
It’s a very good fiction.
I love Bella as president and Edward to protect her.
Date: 08 Apr 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Love this story! More please!!
Date: 06 Apr 2020 11:44 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
I'm in love with this story already!
Date: 06 Apr 2020 11:44 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
I'm in love with this story already!
Date: 06 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 06 Apr 2020 2:59 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Loved it
Date: 06 Apr 2020 1:04 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
He has a job to do no bedding the new Pres.. not yet any how.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2020 11:13 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
They are both so so sad, but too stubborn to voice their past mistakes. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 3:19 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
That has to be so difficult for both of them. Loving this story.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:37 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
This is a special kind of love. Hopefully, it will work for them in the futur.
Great chapter, thank you.
Take care of you and stay safe !
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2020 5:24 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
What is it going to take to break the ice for these two?
Date: 05 Apr 2020 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
As always I get lost in the story. I am anxious to see what the next chapter brings, and when they will re kindle their passion. This story is magnificently written.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Snowshoe West Virginia baby!!! Yes!!! Been there done that. Ok since Edward was in the Marines why didn't Bella dance with him at the military ball???
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:43 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Wow, they really need to talk. Saw the dress on FB, it was gorgeous. As was the manip. ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:38 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Love it
Date: 05 Apr 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Bless both of them.
Date: 05 Apr 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Total sadness for them. I am proud of Edward for still being professional at his job! I can't wait to read more!! ;)
Date: 05 Apr 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
thanks for the update.. stay in and safe my friend
Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
I wonder how long the two of them arw going to be able to keep up this act they are putting on, and also what it will take for them to admitt their feelings for each other. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Just love this story! Can so feel their pain ☹️
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:14 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
:)
Date: 04 Apr 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
it breaks my heart to see them so broken but I'm happy to read you again, at last! LOL I had thought something had happened to you since you had not posted for quite a little while. I hope you're ok and safe. Take care, I look forward to reading next chapter
Author's Response:
It is, but there will be a HEA for the couple down the road. I am hanging in there. Worried and scared every time I go to work. Thank you for thinking of me.
Date: 01 Apr 2020 5:26 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Bella and Edward will have their hands full with this much evil.
Date: 18 Mar 2020 8:27 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
I don't like American football either, but dude you could've picked something more reasonable. People are going to know you've done something.
Date: 17 Mar 2020 5:09 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 17 Mar 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Tuberculosis is a caused by a Bacteria, not a virus
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2020 6:40 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Not football! That is a sacred day!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2020 4:23 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Holy Hell!! That shit is scary and is hitting a little too close for comfort considering our current President Nimrod. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2020 1:10 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
so this russian president wants to hit the superbawl then?! I hope they'll fail
Date: 16 Mar 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
I love it!
Date: 15 Mar 2020 10:27 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Really the Super Bowl that's just not right especially if the Saints are playing in it. Lol 😂
HAPPY ST. PATRICK'S DAY ☘️ & KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”’‘🦠
Date: 15 Mar 2020 7:08 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Very in the moment threat, you are top on it.
Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 15 Mar 2020 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
WOW So many real life facts here. But that just makes your stroy more realistic, which makes it beter. I can't wait to see how they go about stopping this, and how Edward will save Bella. Not to mention how long it will take for those feelings they have pushed deep down inside their hearts to resurface.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2020 4:53 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Can't wait to find out who the mole will be.
Date: 15 Mar 2020 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
OMG!! O.O
Date: 15 Mar 2020 3:31 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Oh wow. With the Cornavirus scaring everyone right now this hits close to home.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2020 1:25 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
Good job. Glad you continued to post.
Date: 14 Mar 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
What a surprise for both of them !
Excellent chapter, thank you for sharing.
Date: 13 Mar 2020 11:08 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 13 Mar 2020 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
Great start. Excited to keep reading more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2020 3:07 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
Great chapter, keep on writing
Date: 11 Mar 2020 12:56 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Mar 2020 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
This story sounds very interesting
Date: 10 Mar 2020 8:29 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
Cant wait for more. As long as you don't start talking politics. I am excited to read this. I am tired of politics being in all my entertainment. So... please
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2020 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
This commercial is a perfect example of why we put up with men. giggles..... fans self.... You can't live with them, you can't live without them. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I did enjoy the background on Edward and his decisions abd thoughts. Everything probably would have turned out differently id he had included Bella in his thought process. She probably would have supported him then. Men are so ugh.. sometimes. LOL. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2020 4:14 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
This could be very good or very very bad when she realizes who the head of her security detail is.
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Date: 10 Mar 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I absolutely love this!! I am a bit upset with Edward that he just went and joined the Marines without talking to the girl that he loved and planned forever with...I can't wait to read more! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
Date: 10 Mar 2020 7:57 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
Thank you! Edward is too noble to be real!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I have no idea what was wrong with STARS, but the print was so damn small I was going blind reading it. Great update.
Author's Response:
I think I have it fixed, because I hope you can see this!!!