Date: 05 Apr 2020 3:34 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
Snowshoe West Virginia baby!!! Yes!!! Been there done that. Ok since Edward was in the Marines why didn't Bella dance with him at the military ball???
KEEP WRITING âï¸ â¤ï¸ð’ð’ð”¥ð‘
Date: 05 Apr 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
I wonder how long the two of them arw going to be able to keep up this act they are putting on, and also what it will take for them to admitt their feelings for each other. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 04 Apr 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball
it breaks my heart to see them so broken but I'm happy to read you again, at last! LOL I had thought something had happened to you since you had not posted for quite a little while. I hope you're ok and safe. Take care, I look forward to reading next chapter
It is, but there will be a HEA for the couple down the road. I am hanging in there. Worried and scared every time I go to work. Thank you for thinking of me.
Date: 15 Mar 2020 5:23 PM Title: Chapter Three ~ One plus One Equal Death
WOW So many real life facts here. But that just makes your stroy more realistic, which makes it beter. I can't wait to see how they go about stopping this, and how Edward will save Bella. Not to mention how long it will take for those feelings they have pushed deep down inside their hearts to resurface.
Date: 10 Mar 2020 5:06 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I did enjoy the background on Edward and his decisions abd thoughts. Everything probably would have turned out differently id he had included Bella in his thought process. She probably would have supported him then. Men are so ugh.. sometimes. LOL. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Thank you for your review.
Date: 10 Mar 2020 3:50 PM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I absolutely love this!! I am a bit upset with Edward that he just went and joined the Marines without talking to the girl that he loved and planned forever with...I can't wait to read more! ;)
Thank you for your review.
Date: 10 Mar 2020 2:11 AM Title: Chapter Two ~ Protecting His Heart
I have no idea what was wrong with STARS, but the print was so damn small I was going blind reading it. Great update.
I think I have it fixed, because I hope you can see this!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2020 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
Woohoo Bella is a Democrat!!! Sorry I am a loyal democrat even though some of the crew is republican and independent that doesn't get in the way of our job. Ok so what happened between Edward and Bella???
KEEP WRITING âï¸ â¤ï¸ð’ð’ð‘ð”¥
Date: 01 Mar 2020 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Hail to the Chief
A promising beginning! I like it when Bella is a strong and confident woman not a damsel in distress who needs to be saved. I like that she is single and the first female president of the US and I appreciate it very much that there is a gay Vice President with a child with special needs. I can only dream that one day gender, race and sexual orientation won't matter any more whether in an election for getting a job,...