Date: 16 Mar 2020 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great little story! The ending seemed a bit rushed, but I get it. Well done!
Date: 22 Feb 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
This was such an amazing story. I absolutely loved it! I'm looking forward to What's next!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2020 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
:) loved this story
Date: 15 Feb 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved your story!
Date: 14 Feb 2020 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for this wonderful story
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a very fun ride!
I thoroughly enjoyed your version of the original vampires.
Thank you for sharing this story.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
Why did Vlad offer surrender as an option?
Aro knows better than to think he will survive this attack unscathed.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wouldn't that be the best way to have kids, Haha. Already expressing themselves without the guess work.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Their plan is coming together nicely. Will Jessica let it slip that she is a good source to a legendary family?
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I really want to see the Cullens get involved somehow.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hm, the sacrifices were an unfortunate necessity. I think the rest of the Cullens should be informed at this point what to expect.
Interesting how Vlad has already mastered the English language when it wasn't around during his time. The devil is strong within him. Not the ideal creator.....
Date: 12 Feb 2020 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
The pressure is mounting.
Any chance the Volturi have been tracking the new couple?
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Little good it will do to keep this from the coven. They are already associated with Edward do they will become targets when the time comes.
I'm intrigued be the idea behind the process of raising Marya's father.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Little good it will do to keep this from the coven. They are already associated with Edward do they will become targets when the time comes.
I'm intrigued be the idea behind the process of raising Marya's father.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
The war is rumbling in the background.
Carlisle needs to be informed. He has the right to protect his coven.
How long will Edward be able to keep this emotional surge from Jasper?
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Does Bella think she is the only one trying to figure out what is going on around her? Does she think that Edward isn't aware of the true history of their kind?
Maybe Alice saw her coming and told Carlisle this female is searching for her family's legacy.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
If she crosses Carlisle, she will alienate Edward from his family. That will end up hurting him in the end. How will she justify that?
Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm hoping her venom in Edward's system will allow him to gather some of her secrets. Not that he will use them against her, but to find a way to ease her singular thoughts of reviving her father and mother.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hm, how long before her lies begin to flash with her new mate and his family?
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
As always another great story. Thank you for sharing your talents with us again.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
She can betray her mate. Besides, the seerer will anticipate some of her moves.
If they physically Nate, will Edward automatically be able to read her mind?
Date: 12 Feb 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hm, will she confide in Edward? Or, fight him to get what she desires..... Her father and mother.
Date: 12 Feb 2020 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh what an intriguing start.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hmmmm, an expansion could be done. js It was a fantastic story. I loved everything about it, with the exception that it had to end. Great job.
CoppertopJ
Denise Wilson Johnson
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
And now the shit hits the fan!!!! Wish I could hypnotize people like she does.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow Anthony Theron Dragulia, love the choice. And the fact he can understand and talk, as Mr. Spock would say.....fascinating.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
A feeder, father, mother, and mate went into a castle..... Just kidding. I am so loving this story girl!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad she has her parents back.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Baby!!!!! Who did you picture for Vlad when you wrote this?
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, so he is the nauseous one. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
So glad you wrote this Edward. Actually, I love all of these characters the way you have written them.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thank god he didn't brood, thinking she betrayed him.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think I really like your take on vampires. OMG, he knows!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
So close to the codex, yet so far from the codex.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Distraction is good. Say it with me Bella, distraction is good.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love the way this Bella (Marya) can lie so skillfully!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh her acting is good. Real good.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit, if Rosalie finds out, the shit is going to hit the fan. Picturing what she looks like in her true nature.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh shit, that was gruesome.