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Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2020 5:05 AM Title: My Allies

Hopefully you feel better soon! I'm jumping in my skin to see how you reveal what Riley did and how much his brother was involved. Good luck on the Golden Onion Awards!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 9:54 PM Title: My Allies

:) 



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;)

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:27 PM Title: My Allies

Good chapter ☺️



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Thank you!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:56 PM Title: My Allies

I am with Edward, Riley is up to something.  He needs to be taken care of.  Interesting shift in alliances with Jasper looking to Edward as his Alpha, and the wolves uniting with the witches.  Hmmmm. can't wait to see where we go next.



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Thank you for leaving a review! We shall see! ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 6:43 AM Title: My Allies

well well well Aro doesnt know either but hopefully they will work together to find out



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Hopefully!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:46 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:37 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:56 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

nice update

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 10:49 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

Shit Bella, take the escort.  James could strike at any time, anywhere.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 7:44 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 6:37 PM Title: My Date Part 2

I am about done with Rose, James and the rogue witches! Why cant they leave the Betas alone! Good update. Proud of Bella

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 1:24 AM Title: My Date Part 2

good update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 10:39 PM Title: My Date Part 2

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 9:18 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Put that dog down!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 8:43 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 7:28 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2020 6:26 AM Title: My Date Part 1

great update

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Another good chapter. I love their first date so far can't wait to see what else they get into .

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Another good chapter. I love their first date so far can't wait to see what else they get into .

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 9:19 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Awe he is so sweet and cute

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:58 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Working on editing it for now, but we shall see. Thank you for your awesome comments.

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:57 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 3:53 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2020 10:21 AM Title: My Date Part 1

Okay, I see gramps having a hissy fit already.  Great update, now to your page.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 7:47 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Thanks 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2020 12:17 PM Title: My Date Part 1

:) 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:01 PM Title: My Date Part 1

Love how Bella's relationship with the pack is progressing. Passionate logical badass Bella coming through. You are doing fabulous work with the story and its characters. It is crazy how much writing style can develop when writing frequently, that I can 100% agree with. Hopefully you can get My Stubborn Mate published at some point it's a great piece of work :)

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 4:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

great update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 1:48 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

Wow oh wow Rose won't let it go but I think Bella will prove her wrong

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 12:13 PM Title: My Shopping Trip

If I was Bella, I would want nothing at all to do with the pack.  I have never seen such a more dysfunctional group of bitches in my life.  Her and Edward need to pack up and move away.  Start their own pack.  And do not even get me started on Rosalie.  Love when an author can write to the point to encite such strong emotions in their readers.  Great job.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:09 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 11:08 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rose is the worst

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2020 9:40 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Rosalie is a bitch and is jealius of Bella. Victoria and the others are just bitches.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 2:28 PM Title: My Cousin

great update

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2020 12:34 AM Title: My Cousin

Hmmm Bella should always listen to her inner self 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:41 AM Title: My Cousin

The blood bond is strong in this one. 

Also, oh no, Royce King is going to royally f the already troubled and makeshift bonds between the Pack and Coven.

Badass witch Bella needs to hit us up with the good magics again. I love how more and more of a powerful woman she becomes in this story as the chapters pass.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 7:29 AM Title: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 7:29 AM Title: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 9:07 AM Title: My Cousin

:) 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:18 AM Title: My Cousin

Oh no! I hope she and Leah will be safe!! 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2020 2:18 AM Title: My Cousin

Oh no! I hope she and Leah will be safe!! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:15 PM Title: My Cousin

Hm, not sure I would see Paul again until after that 21st birthday.  Her experience with Sam and Emily has to have a heavy bearing on that decision.  Experience has shown her how painful it can be when the imprint is not the current love interest.

 

Not liking Riley or Royce.  Definitely something up with those two.  Stand guard BellaWolf.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:10 PM Title: My Cousin

So happy to be given this ch. 

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Date: 27 Jun 2020 6:10 PM Title: My Cousin

So happy to be given this ch. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 11:44 AM Title: My Reluctant Heart

Oh, I'm so, so sad I've come to the end of whats published! As you can probably tell, I'm enjoying this immensely. 

I didn't exactly take in when your last update was posted, but I'm thinking it was last week? So maybe this week or next week you will be on summer holidays.  I hope that's restful. I know my kids teachers were very glad to get back to school after I guess not quite two months of online learning. (Here in Australia most schools went back a few weeks ago.)

thanks for sharing your genius with us. I'll be very much looking forward to more!

 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 1:05 AM Title: Marking My Territory

Hot! 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 12:19 AM Title: My Wolf

Oh oh,Jessica is in for it now!

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 11:07 PM Title: My Video

So the only other person we know of who hates the pack is Marcus - is he still alive, I can't actually remember? Edward senior obviously has an axe to grind but I can't imagine him taking it out that way....

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:09 PM Title: My Aunt and Uncle

Dun dun dun! What will the pack say about that?! They will

bith make each other stronger, through their bond, but many, perhaps most of the pack will be suspicious of such power bony welcoming. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:01 AM Title: My Last Day

It's weird now, I don't know exactly when you published this chapter (does it tell me somewhere? I'll have to check), but clearly I'm getting closer to the present. We're working from home too, although in Australia things are all opening up again. The kids are back at school now, and we don't have much focus keft here, for the moment anyway. 

I hope you're safe over there. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 7:15 AM Title: My Mate's Past and Future

So I'm curious. Who's the beta of this generation? Jacob?

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 5:31 AM Title: My Reluctant Heart

I love it 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 4:53 AM Title: My Turn

Very nice! I was afraid they wouldn't get their time of seclusion. Or worse still that you would skip over it and start this second book a bit ahead. 

Reviewer: kayozm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 2:54 AM Title: My New Mate

Sweet! What's the cabin and why is it well stocked?

I love that Aro helped her/them, and was willing to leave the coven for her, by the way, i meant to say that last time. I couldn't quite decide how much I trusted him, but I think that cemented it. 

I still want to know what happened between Charlie and Renee, whether he imprinted on her (I'm assuming not, or surely there wouldn't have been the level of objections?), whether he still has an imprint out there?

And who is Sue, by the way? And how did Carlie die?

So many mysteries! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 7:54 PM Title: My Reluctant Heart

♡♡

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 10:19 AM Title: My Reluctant Heart

I love Leah!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:52 PM Title: My Reluctant Heart

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2020 5:08 PM Title: My Reluctant Heart

Not very comfortable with him going to see Jessica.  He better make damn sure she is aware that she needs to bback off or die!!!!!  Bella won't take that shit again.  Love me some Bella.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 9:17 AM Title: My Unanswered Question

I loved it I hope Edward will open up soon

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 9:16 AM Title: My Unanswered Question

I love it I hope Edward will open up more

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2020 9:15 AM Title: My Unanswered Question

I love it I hope Edward will open up more

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2020 2:17 AM Title: My Unanswered Question

*raises hand*  Me, me, I know!!!!



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Hahaha! Loved this!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2020 10:50 PM Title: My Unanswered Question

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2020 6:16 AM Title: My Insecurities

Bella, it's time to establish your place within the hierarchy. Rip out some throats girl.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2020 3:36 PM Title: My Insecurities

Good question!

 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2020 3:25 PM Title: My Insecurities

I am on pins and needles! Thank you for your update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 6:56 PM Title: My Insecurities

:) 

Reviewer: tiggerlady Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 6:08 PM Title: My New Mate

You are such a talentend writer, thanks for sharing your story!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 3:56 PM Title: My Insecurities

Oh shit.  Answer that question Edward.  

Reviewer: Devils Fate Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2020 12:48 PM Title: My Insecurities

A whole week for an answer.....

 

Awesome story.  I read the the book you said inspired this story because I'm enjoying it.  

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 6:39 AM Title: Marking My Territory

...I'm hoping there were no witnesses for Bella's sake. I don't think she could handle the embarrassment, but honestly that's kinda hot if they claimed each other in front of the pack too. 

Also, I truly need Bella to embrace her wolf, as well as give her wolf more leniency. To spend time getting to know and trusting her wolf because when they get together and are on the same page... when they acknowledge and trust each other, feel the same way... it's amazing! I love Wolfella. And honestly once Wolfella is more consistent I'm almost positive she could control her magic 1000% better and do it in both forms. 

As always, thanks for the lovely chapters, and I'm excitedly waiting for the next!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 3:41 AM Title: Marking My Territory

Wow she went beast mode on her 



Author's Response:

She did! So fun to write!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 11:28 PM Title: Marking My Territory

:) 



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:)

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 10:20 PM Title: Marking My Territory

I love how bella's developed into such a strong woman! Great chapter can't wait for the next one, you all create such a great story! Happy constitution day on Sunday, hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 10:19 PM Title: Marking My Territory

I love how bella's developed into such a strong woman! Great chapter can't wait for the next one, you all create such a great story! Happy constitution day on Sunday, hope you enjoy it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. Yes, I love that she is finally putting her foot down and becoming the strong woman we all know is there.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 9:23 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Hottest Lemon Award goes to you!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha! Why, thank you!

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 5:59 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Jesus! Happy Friday! Loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Lola74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2020 11:22 AM Title: My Wolf

I can't wait for the next chapter.  Read the first story and then continued to this.  

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2020 10:27 AM Title: My Wolf

well it looks like Jessica's wolf going to me Bella's wolf the hard way.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2020 1:52 PM Title: My Wolf

Go Bella!  Well I wonder what is going to happen next?  Bella's wolf is on a rampage and Jessica might get what is coming to her.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: Sunnishine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2020 10:01 PM Title: My Wolf

Finally! I've been waiting to meet her new and improved wolf. Can't wait to see her kick jessawolfs ass. Lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2020 2:02 AM Title: My Wolf

Oh snap Bella is coming into her own now what will she do 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2020 12:58 AM Title: My Wolf

Uh oh Jessica. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2020 10:14 PM Title: My Wolf

:) 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2020 7:48 PM Title: My Wolf

Very exciting! Thanks for the update

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2020 7:48 PM Title: My Wolf

Very exciting! Thanks for the update

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