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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2020 3:20 AM Title: (On) My Own

Ed Sr is such an arse

Reviewer: lrsmd18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2020 1:13 PM Title: My New Mate

Loved this chapter! Thank you :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2020 6:34 AM Title: My Deep Doubts

Wow what a moving chapter from a low to a high I love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 11:26 PM Title: My Deep Doubts

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 11:26 PM Title: My Deep Doubts

:) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2020 10:14 AM Title: My Deep Doubts

keep up the good work

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2020 9:22 PM Title: My Deep Doubts

Good for Quil!!!  Say it Bella, say it.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 6:49 PM Title: (On) My Own

Oh my oh my what does this mean



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Dun, dun, dun, dun

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:46 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 



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I am excited for the continuation. 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:46 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:46 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:45 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:44 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:44 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2020 5:44 AM Title: (On) My Own

Can not wait to see what is going on 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 2:13 PM Title: (On) My Own

Planning on kicking Ed Sr.'s ass!!!!

 



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I'll join!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2020 1:41 PM Title: (On) My Own

:) 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2020 4:22 PM Title: (On) My Own

Oh no! I felt my just as Bella did when I read the end of this chapter! And, wow, is Edward Sr. a piece of work, really dislike him! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully we get to see what Edward has been dealing with? Love this story! Take care and stay safe! Ciao

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2020 4:21 PM Title: (On) My Own

Oh no! I felt my just as Bella did when I read the end of this chapter! And, wow, is Edward Sr. a piece of work, really dislike him! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully we get to see what Edward has been dealing with? Love this story! Take care and stay safe! Ciao



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I know... Let's all go kick Ed Sr. ass. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 8:16 PM Title: My New Home

:)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Home

Wow oh wow how intense they are together but will they be able to fix nd anything out about the traps

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Home

Wow oh wow how intense they are together but will they be able to fix nd anything out about the traps

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Home

Wow oh wow how intense they are together but will they be able to fix nd anything out about the traps

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Home

Wow oh wow how intense they are together but will they be able to fix nd anything out about the traps

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 1:18 AM Title: My New Home

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2020 1:17 AM Title: My New Home

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2020 3:36 AM Title: My New Home

I wonder based on his own observation about Jessica's surprise, if someone is setting her up... Yeayea I know I'm saying something niceish about Jessica. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2020 10:34 PM Title: My New Home

These two never seem to catch a break.  Great update.  Can't wait for the new chapter of My Sun.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 9:37 PM Title: My Mother's Things

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:52 AM Title: My Mother's Things

Aww for hiim getting the house ready. Esme is such an awesome person

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:45 AM Title: My Support

Still unsure of Riley's intentions 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:36 AM Title: My Allies

Hmm Riley... Not sure what to make of him at the point.  Friend or foe... Hmmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:27 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Glad she went back to work. A little distance can be a smart thing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:20 AM Title: My Date Part 2

Ahh the plot thickens. I get that Carlisle is the alpha but he is really a jerk. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:09 AM Title: My Date Part 1

Hmm dunno know what Gramps is going to say about that.  Glad they got to go out. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 3:00 AM Title: My Shopping Trip

Glad they mostly had a great time. Ugh Rose is going to help the wrong side I'm afraid. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 1:53 AM Title: My Mother's Things

I am sensing some type of significance with the music box?  So glad she has Esme.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2020 1:50 AM Title: My Mother's Things

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 10:16 PM Title: My Mother's Things

Oh he had to move the grandparents out!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 9:45 PM Title: My Mother's Things

I loved it but what happened and I think Bella needs to look at the books and journals

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2020 4:03 AM Title: My Support

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 7:18 PM Title: My Cousin

Glad she talked Leah down off that proverbial ledge. Royce is going to be an issue I think. 



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I am so glad to see that you are getting caught up! I really love your comments!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 7:08 PM Title: My Reluctant Heart

Glad they are talking things out.  Lol for another interruption. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:54 PM Title: My Unanswered Question

 I'd feel upset if he didn't talk after her story too. The do need to learn to trust and have conversations. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:44 PM Title: My Insecurities

Getting rid of the past can be really difficult esp in your head. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:54 AM Title: Marking My Territory

Glad she put J is her place.... With witnesses. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2020 1:47 AM Title: My Wolf

Ah so the mating has brought out her true full wolf.  Jessica really has a death wish. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:29 AM Title: My Grief

Glad Charlie and B are talking about things.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:18 AM Title: My Sun

Poor Leah.  Glad she has B to talk to.  Yea Sam/Emily there was just icing on a crappy cake for her today.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 4:05 AM Title: My Video

Of course there is a video....LOL  Pact indeed.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:05 AM Title: My Support

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2020 1:04 AM Title: My Support

Loved this chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 11:46 PM Title: My Support

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:27 AM Title: My Magic

Glad Bella was able to do it. Thinking Jaime has something to do with the traps too.  Aww for Edward being her rock. Lol for Seth's video

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:17 AM Title: My Aunt and Uncle

Carlisle is just so welcoming isn't he... Not. Aro is Def observant. Loved Charlie's dominant side coming out

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 6:07 AM Title: My Idea

Hmm thinking Victoria has fingers in this trap pie. Jess is a twit

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:54 AM Title: My Spiderman

Yea Jessica and Victoria are going to be a problem.... Good on Jake intercepting Jess

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:44 AM Title: My Great Loss

Well at least she got to say goodbye. Carlisle has crappy timing.  Bella is going to take awhile to trust herself and E

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:32 AM Title: My Reassurance

Oh wow. The rock keep falling in their path. Nanna too 😕. Not liking Ed Sr T all. Wanker. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:22 AM Title: My Last Day

Aww for Pop's passing. Yummy playtime at the cabin. Lol for playful Jake

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 5:06 AM Title: My Decision

Glad they are talking more and opening up. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2020 4:56 AM Title: My Mate's Past and Future

Nice history lesson.  Not sure I'm liking Henry or Carlisle in charge of anything with all the hatred being spewed towards her

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 6:01 PM Title: My Support

I absolutely love this story! Such a great concept but I bring witches and wolves together, with our favorite characters! I love Bella and Edward in morning this story, they are a great couple! Can't wait to see where you take us as the story unfolds. I'm looking forward to the drama that I know is coming, and really excited for the traitors behind the scenes to finally get found and defeated! Looking forward to the next update! Take care and stay safe! Ciao 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 6:00 PM Title: My Support

I absolutely love this story! Such a great concept but I bring witches and wolves together, with our favorite characters! I love Bella and Edward in morning this story, they are a great couple! Can't wait to see where you take us as the story unfolds. I'm looking forward to the drama that I know is coming, and really excited for the traitors behind the scenes to finally get found and defeated! Looking forward to the next update! Take care and stay safe! Ciao 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 5:02 PM Title: My Support

Oh, I love this Aro, and the relationship he has with Edward and Bella.  Riley looks like trouble.  Smackdown time.  Great update.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2020 4:32 PM Title: My Support

Wow I love it 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 7:13 AM Title: My Request

They Def both have a lot to learn. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 7:04 AM Title: My Troubled Past

She Def has some things to get over. Glad E is getting her to talk. Still surprised Carlisle or E senior hasn't come looking for them. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:52 AM Title: My Turn

Glad they are talking..... At least a little. Lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2020 6:44 AM Title: My New Mate

Yea they Def have a lot to work through.  I'm surprised that Carlisle didn't go after them. 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2020 5:05 AM Title: My Allies

Hopefully you feel better soon! I'm jumping in my skin to see how you reveal what Riley did and how much his brother was involved. Good luck on the Golden Onion Awards!



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Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 9:54 PM Title: My Allies

:) 



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;)

Reviewer: born joyfull Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 3:27 PM Title: My Allies

Good chapter ☺️



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 1:56 PM Title: My Allies

I am with Edward, Riley is up to something.  He needs to be taken care of.  Interesting shift in alliances with Jasper looking to Edward as his Alpha, and the wolves uniting with the witches.  Hmmmm. can't wait to see where we go next.



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Thank you for leaving a review! We shall see! ;)

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2020 6:43 AM Title: My Allies

well well well Aro doesnt know either but hopefully they will work together to find out



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Hopefully!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 8:24 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

I loved it Edward can be so cute with Bella 

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:47 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:46 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: sweetness109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2020 4:37 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

Bella and Edward are getting to such a sweet place in their relationship, they really have grown a lot in the communication department! Alice is really growing as a character as well it's nice to see the change in her pervious biases and how she's willing to work on it and learn to be more accepting of Bella's witch half of the family.

Sorry to hear you aren't feeling well lentil or tomato soup always help me when I'm feeling sick, hopefully it works for you too. Get well soon:)!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:56 AM Title: My State of Normalcy

nice update

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 10:49 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

Shit Bella, take the escort.  James could strike at any time, anywhere.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2020 7:44 PM Title: My State of Normalcy

:) 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 6:37 PM Title: My Date Part 2

I am about done with Rose, James and the rogue witches! Why cant they leave the Betas alone! Good update. Proud of Bella

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2020 1:24 AM Title: My Date Part 2

good update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 10:39 PM Title: My Date Part 2

:) 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 9:18 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Put that dog down!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 8:43 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2020 7:28 PM Title: My Date Part 2

Wow oh wow that took a turn but I think Bella should go to the site and see if she can sent the witch

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2020 6:26 AM Title: My Date Part 1

great update

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2020 9:44 PM Title: Marking My Territory

Another good chapter. I love their first date so far can't wait to see what else they get into .

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