Date: 30 Jan 2020 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a story. I'm think you made a genuine shot at capturing the characters and their experience. I love the tension and the build up of this story. The dilemma between Edward being her trigger yet her saving grace... but focus also being on the fact that she needed to want the change.... you can see the character develop in an honest way in such a short format while being believeable. Thank you for writing this story. You are amazing.