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Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2020 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

The meadow

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2020 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awww I love this Charlie and Renee

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2020 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

I think you have a good storyline but need help forming your sentences and paragraphs correctly. There's a group on Facebook, Beta Babes, you can ask for a beta and/or pre-reader to help you out.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2020 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

 

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2020 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2020 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great start. Keep up with the hardwork.

 



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Thank you!! 

Reviewer: Ilove2luv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2020 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really like it,can’t wait to read more. They  both seem so sweet and can’t wait to hear about Edward background and why he moved to forks.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm so happy you enjoyed my story!! 

Reviewer: kridafanfic Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2020 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Proud of you, babe!



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Thank you!! 

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