Date: 07 Sep 2020 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for this! I enjoyed the escape of reading it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2020 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thankyou for sharing your writing I enjoyed reading your story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2020 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thankyou for sharing your writing I enjoyed reading your story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for writing and sharing
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow Alice really took a chance there. Nice to see a more realistic fix then her being all perfect newborn.
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
Lol I don't remember that in the books. Must have been in the second MOTUcause I don't remember it.
Woo hoo for changed
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yea period play never interested me either but I've heard it helps with the cramps.
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jess is so pathetic, but every school has some of her.
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Brady is awesome. Glad Jake at least said goodbye.
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ah Edward's magic sperm. Lol
Date: 18 Aug 2020 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Guessing E's bodily fluids have started the change?
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
Lol for Edward embracing his hormone riddled body. Lol
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my they four of them in a room together is fireworks brewing
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oooh Brady is there... And Rose & Em too. Mickey mouse roll call
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
Glad Alice is being honest with her.
Date: 18 Aug 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lol of course Alice wanted details. Lol
Date: 14 Aug 2020 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Woo Hoo Hurricane Alice is back. Its true about bruising. I always have them and rarely remember when/where I got them.
Date: 14 Aug 2020 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow sounds like Robert needs a swift kick in the arse....and purse. WHat an arsehole.
Date: 14 Aug 2020 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow. Glad Rose talked to Edward.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
lol Gotta love how Carlisle lets Esme have her way.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can understand the guys not wanting to phase again but Sam is acting like a dick
Date: 13 Aug 2020 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad E is learning to trust himself with her a bit.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
woo hoo for E losing his V card
Date: 13 Aug 2020 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Brady is such an interesting character. You know you can post pic in your chapters right?
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad she spent some time w Jake. Lol for snitching attire from Rose.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Was wondering when Jake would find out.... So I guess he won't turn to a werewolf again?
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad he realizes that putting her off isn't going to work anymore
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is such a goober. Surprised Alice hasn't called yet.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
The age thing is a bit weird but what do I know. Lol for her needing to make sure she was real.
Date: 13 Aug 2020 4:13 AM Title: Prologue
Well at least She tried to move on.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
No truer words spoken... Meant to be together.
Sherry
Date: 08 Aug 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for this story! I enjoyed it so much!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2020 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella is still learning, but Alice shouldn't have done that shit wit Bella's blood. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2020 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm impressed on this take of Bella being a newborn. I like she's still exhibiting her basic instints but is learning to overcome them and fight for control. Job well done.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2020 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Not sure how Bella will handle being around humans if her own dead blood got her juices flowing.
Sherry
Date: 06 Aug 2020 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Not goryat all! Great!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad Bella and Jake could say goodbye this way!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am very sorry that Jake can't respect her decision. And I am glad that Brady is there for her. Thank you so mu h for imagining and writing about Rady! He is a wonderful character!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Is she gradually Changi g into a vampire due to her exposition th Edward's venom?
Date: 06 Aug 2020 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Jake! He has to let go of Bella. It is very hard for him. But he will get there... I like this story so, so much. Thank you!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad, Brady made it a! And I am glad that he will start working with Jake!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am so sorry! I am that by aptured by Your story that I didn't leave a review yet. I love it! I like the relationship Bella has with Brady, I like her friendship with Jacob and I love that Bella a d Edward are back together! I am looking the Cullen reunion! And I loved the very sensitive way Edward talked twith Rose and Emmett. Thank you for this story!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Definitely not too gory for a vampire.... ;) Carlisle's thought about Bella's writs and ankles actually helped Edward change her. So I guess he was needed there. I'm glad that Bella is fully vamped up now. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Aug 2020 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
What will happen on the plane? She could have all sorts of problems, with Edward being her only "medical attention" source.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella's hopefully last period..... I bet she's thrilled about that. And she's shimmering now too? She has to like the day so far. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2020 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
She's changing fast.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
At least Jake apologized for being an ass. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 04 Aug 2020 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good for Jake to come clean. He needed to say that for his own closure. So Isle Esme, guess that'll work, Thanks for the update.
Just a small FYI the Civil war was fought in 1861 in the 19th century.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2020 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
What a sad note to leave each other on.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2020 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was my second theory as to why her scent had changed. Brady is taking all this vampire stuff pretty well.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2020 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
Magic changine humans sperm.... I like it. Brady is a good friend to Bella. Jake is still an asshole prick. ugh.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Slow flowing blood? I womder what that means. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Aug 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well I was right. Not what could go wrong?
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2020 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm guessing she's pregnant.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Brady seems so accepting of everything he's learned about the lifestyle Bella has chosen, yet Jacob is still refusing to accept her new life. However, I can't see Edward being so friendly with Brady after knowing he had a physical relationship with Bella. I would think Jacob would at least throw that thought at Edward to get to him.
Sherry
Date: 01 Aug 2020 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Humm lots of venom ejaculate.
Date: 01 Aug 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm loving this story! Ok, not to be crass or anything, but when they have sex, no mention of a condom (prolly wouldn't hold up, ahem)but isn't Bella subjected to his sperm which has his venom in it, no? Yes, I know that is a terrible run-on sentence. Maybe she is having a very slow turning?
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Even though Brady felt all awkward, he was waaaaay better behaved than Jacob, the assmunch. And Alice is just being ridiculous. I'm all for Edward and Bella being alone together for another century. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2020 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Is this E/B/J going to follow Breaking Dawn? Jacob imprinting on E/B's child?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jacob is so ridiculous. I hope he DOES go away. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2020 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
I'm so glad that Rose isn't being a bitch to Bella. Jacob is though. LOL Brady and Bella were just as friendly as expected. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2020 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!! They're all coming together two at a time. Not sure how I feel about Brady going to live with Jacob. We shall see...
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2020 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
Much needed bonding time and reuniting. I'm curious if Brady is going to show up the same time as the other Cullens and how that's gonna go over with Rose.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2020 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
I had to laugh at Alice's noseyness about Bella and Edward's first time.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2020 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Alice was even shocked at the turn of events. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well all 4 were getting along until Alice and Jasper got a little preachy. I hope they shut up. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2020 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
How wonderful to have Alice back, and Jasper. I got amused at Edward readying to fight Jasper and they just reunited.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2020 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Brady; he's had a lot of crap happen to him. Bella definitely needs to tell him about Edward before he makes that cross-country trip to see her. Edward's becoming a very experienced partner.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2020 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well Jacob turned out to be a douchey shitty friend, but maybe Brad will continue to be a good one. Edward and Bella's sexy time was hot. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2020 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank you for the update..Hopefully the Cullens will be back together soon..until you post again
Date: 25 Jul 2020 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was a surprise. Whose next Esme? But she slipped in the beginning. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, a lot happened with the Cullen's since Edward left. Looks like it's time for the all to heal as a family.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2020 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Maybe Rosalie won't be so high and mighty now. A more humble Roalie that respects other people's decisions might be nice. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2020 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Everyone seems pretty happy and welcoming to Nella. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2020 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love how this chapter played out. Can't wait for more.
Sherry
Date: 24 Jul 2020 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awe, everyone is going to be on Edwards case, keeeping her a secret. But I agree w/ him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow!!! The pack really made Bella feel welcome. How disappointing. At least tried to defend and stand by her. I'm assuming since Edward called Bella he had news of the Cullens coming to Forks since he said he was calling Alice. Or are the Cullens already back at the Cullen house?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can (the majority) the wolves be bigger judgemental pricks? Ugh.... And I wish Edward would quit with his mopey shit. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Excellent writing about Edward's first sexy time. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2020 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Things seem to be going nicely at the moment. Is the other shoe going to drop and cause a frisson?
Sherry
Date: 21 Jul 2020 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
So pleased she could talk him down. Thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
I holding my breath that he didn't accidentally bite her in the throws of passion.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good story, keep on writing
Date: 21 Jul 2020 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. Wonderful. Thank you for writing
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2020 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
She's tearing him up by wearing Rose's clothes, lol. I'm sure B will be hearing from Renee soon.
Sherry
Date: 16 Jul 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
I enjoyed the 1st two chapters so much on fanfic I came over here to give the first 6 faster. Lol. Please post soon.
Date: 16 Jul 2020 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
I enjoyed the 1st two chapters so much on fanfic I came over here to give the first 6 faster. Lol. Please post soon.
Date: 14 Jul 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
He needs to get his shit together and grow up.
Date: 14 Jul 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is an idiot and Bella is a partial idiot.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2020 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Giving Bella time to fall asleep was probably Edward's intentions.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2020 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward still seems to be avoiding things and certain topics. If I was Bella, I would be wary. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2020 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Jacob is still annoying and a cock blocker. I do hope he doesn't stay that way. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad to see an update. It's amazing to see Edward take steps to move their relationship forward. I'm assuming he's going to give Bella what she really wants for her birthday after reading the pre-birthday make-out session. Too bad Jacob rudely interrupted.
Sherry
Date: 02 May 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonder if he came back alone or if the others will folow.
Date: 01 May 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoyable. Thank you
Date: 01 May 2020 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoyable. Thank you