Date: 06 Aug 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am so sorry! I am that by aptured by Your story that I didn't leave a review yet. I love it! I like the relationship Bella has with Brady, I like her friendship with Jacob and I love that Bella a d Edward are back together! I am looking the Cullen reunion! And I loved the very sensitive way Edward talked twith Rose and Emmett. Thank you for this story!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
Definitely not too gory for a vampire.... ;) Carlisle's thought about Bella's writs and ankles actually helped Edward change her. So I guess he was needed there. I'm glad that Bella is fully vamped up now. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 02 Aug 2020 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Brady seems so accepting of everything he's learned about the lifestyle Bella has chosen, yet Jacob is still refusing to accept her new life. However, I can't see Edward being so friendly with Brady after knowing he had a physical relationship with Bella. I would think Jacob would at least throw that thought at Edward to get to him.
Date: 01 Aug 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm loving this story! Ok, not to be crass or anything, but when they have sex, no mention of a condom (prolly wouldn't hold up, ahem)but isn't Bella subjected to his sperm which has his venom in it, no? Yes, I know that is a terrible run-on sentence. Maybe she is having a very slow turning?
Date: 31 Jul 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Even though Brady felt all awkward, he was waaaaay better behaved than Jacob, the assmunch. And Alice is just being ridiculous. I'm all for Edward and Bella being alone together for another century. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2020 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow!!! The pack really made Bella feel welcome. How disappointing. At least tried to defend and stand by her. I'm assuming since Edward called Bella he had news of the Cullens coming to Forks since he said he was calling Alice. Or are the Cullens already back at the Cullen house?
Date: 04 May 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad to see an update. It's amazing to see Edward take steps to move their relationship forward. I'm assuming he's going to give Bella what she really wants for her birthday after reading the pre-birthday make-out session. Too bad Jacob rudely interrupted.