Date: 25 Feb 2020 7:27 AM Title: An Imprint
I'm very excited for book two!! Aro ended up being much more caring than i expected.
I have loved reading all of your reviews! I've been experiencing the book through your comments :-). So glad that you enjoy it!
Date: 07 Feb 2020 9:11 PM Title: A Council Meeting
I love the story. Its really well written⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. But I feal a bit cheated. The story isn't over. It's not completed. I know some when the publish(this is publish quality ❤️❤️) then they put the story in more then one book. Often because the story is to long, to get more money or because it has some good natural endings. This is definitely not that. I really feel cheated because it doesn't feel like a good place to end the book. I hope you don't take this as a bad thing it isn't. I just try to tell that if I had payed for it I would need a little bit more before I would not feel annoyed... And it's not a oh I better buy the other book kind of annoyed. But more a... They are trying to cheat me kind of way. This is really a good story. Hope you will get published one day if that what you wish for🤞 thank you for letting me read your story for free. I loved it. Best of luck to you.
Hi there! Thank you for leaving a review! I've been trying to prepare my readers through the authors notes, but I do get what you are saying. If I do publish (something that isn't really a priority right now), I will definately think about it. For me I felt like the book needed a shift. Hope you enjoy book 2!
Date: 18 Jan 2020 7:31 AM Title: An Imprint
I would love to see Bella be accepted by her Coven at large and see her meet more witches. I feel like there's the possibility for Edward to see how the Coven treats Bella and draw comparisons within the pack, but more importantly see first hand the strength within Bella. What exactly she's capable of. It seemed hinted at, so I'll throw this out as well -- Bella using her powers in wolf form. Rosalie will probably challenge Bella, so seeing Bella whip her butt would be great too. Not much else I'd look forward to or specifically that the hints and foreshadowing hasn't lent to me believe that I'll get to see it.
This was great and I'm looking forward to book 2. I'm torn, I'm happy that I'll be here at the beginning, but I also prefer reading with a buffer. Though, as long as it updates consistently I'm happy.
Cheers to your inspiration hitting you like a truck and to the completion of a wonderful story. 20/10 would buy the series and fall in love with new characters and your style of world building if ever published.
With roses in full bloom,
I seriously had to take a picture of this review and share it with some friends! Your words really mean a lot to me, thank you!
Date: 17 Jan 2020 7:47 AM Title: An Imprint
Loved it! I just love everything u did with this story! I would like to see more of the witch side and there elements explained and how the pack handles that. But I loved everything u did with this story and I know the next one is going to be just has good.
Date: 17 Jan 2020 4:19 AM Title: A New Home
I'd like to know everyoneev reaction to their mating. I would like to see Rose get her comeuppance. I would also like for her to remember that only her family stood by her and defended her. Alice sat on the sidelines and Carlisle was going to abuse his powers by forcing her to leave and the hateful things the senior Cullen said.
Date: 16 Jan 2020 11:37 PM Title: An Imprint
Loved it! For now, I'm just glad Edward and Bella completed the imprint! Later, I'll want to know what the heck Rosalie meant when she used the line from Twilight saying their 'entire family will be implicated' if the two of them start something.
Edward totally redeemed himself here, I think....
Date: 16 Jan 2020 8:37 PM Title: An Imprint
She's the stubborn one?!?! Sadly I don't trust Edward, or Rose or Carlisle or Aro at this point. I hope now that the imprint is done (can you say forced marriage) she'll leave just to spite them all. Esp cause you know that Rose and Carlisle are going to go ballistic.
Thanks for writing and sharing
Date: 14 Jan 2020 5:24 AM Title: A New Home
I’m thinking Bella is significantly more powerful than she realizes and so is Edward and that is why they could imprint both as wolves and finally as themselves. Maybe there is something to her being able to not submit to Carlisle? Really love this story.
Date: 12 Jan 2020 4:24 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Wow! My heart is pumping and can't wait for all to get their just desserts for their prenudices. Whew really know how to build emotions. I am on tender hooks waiting for what's to come.
Thank you for leaving a review! Sorry I have to leave you on the edge of your seat, but final chapter is being posted on Friday.
Date: 12 Jan 2020 12:05 PM Title: A Council Meeting
Edward can definitely go pound sand. I hope he suffers way more than Bella while she's in Italy. Poor Charlie though. How can he stay with the Pack after this betrayal? Good chapter, even though it stung.
Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 7:36 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
We're almost at the prologue. Is she going to hear things from him that make her walk away because she feels less than or because they are awful to her. Rose and the rest of the cullens are full of crap and Edward better choose her or else. I'm tired of her taking everyone's crap. She is more powerful then the wolves or the witches combined. It's called hybrid vigour. When you combine two thing that are usually fairly homogeneous within themselves, the new thing usually is much heartier because it takes on the strengths of the two. Bella has already floored the witches with her power and I think the fact that she is mating with Edward before her 21st should tell the wolves her power.
Thank you for leaving a fantastic review and I LOVE your thoughts! Thank you!
Date: 11 Jan 2020 3:11 AM Title: A Broken Friendship
What is going to happen? I am sitting on the edge of my seat reading this! Poor Bella this is all so hard on her. Seems she is alway left in the dark about alot of things. Thank goodness for Leah. Please update soon.
I hope you forgive me for putting you guys through the emotional wringer! Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 10 Jan 2020 11:30 PM Title: A Broken Friendship
I suddenly can't stand Rosalie. What a turncoat she turned out to be. I'm also a bit miffed at Edward. He seems to want it both ways.
Leah is a rock star. Love her! The main thing I'm hoping for now is for Bella to find her backbone, showing a bit of strength and power to the doubters around her.
:-) Thank you so much for leaving a review!
Date: 08 Jan 2020 1:08 AM Title: A Close Call
Gah, another fantastic chapter that leaves me wanting for more, y'all are doing a great job with this story! I hope y'all had a grrrreat(as Tony the Tiger would say) holiday!
We are getting closer!
Date: 06 Jan 2020 3:12 AM Title: A Connection
I'm so excited to find a good wolf story!
I've been switching back and forth all afternoon between reading on fanfiction, then coming here to check out the pictures. Fabulous job so far. The relationship between Edward and Bella is compelling and is sure to have some frustration ahead. I'm looking forward to all of it! Just don't torture us too much. lol.
Date: 02 Jan 2020 1:49 PM Title: A Visit to The Den
Edward is so amazing. Bella needs to be honest with herself and her coven. Riley needs to realize he doesn't stand a chance. Edward is the one. I can't wait for the official imprint at her birthday.