[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2019 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Into The Woods
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Date: 05 Sep 2019 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 11: Into The Woods
OMg!! O.O
Date: 05 Sep 2019 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 11: Into The Woods
Please update quickly
Date: 05 Sep 2019 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Into The Woods
Emmett and the bear - so funny! I am glad he made it this time! But I fear for them. They have been found by the Resistance, what's going to happen? You are killing me here!
I absolutely appreciated the talk between Edward and Bella and I love the way he is hanging.
Date: 03 Sep 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
I so happy that the 3 of them are together. They can help each other so they will be successful. I hope Bella believes that Edward truly loves her. They need to learn to stop fighting over every little thing. They are both so stubborn
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
So happy she found Edward
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
So looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: Emmett
So happy she decided to save Emmett
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
She is brave
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
Thank you for giving us the insight to the ward
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
I'm hook
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
I'm so into this story
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Glad to hear they are safe
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:39 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Thank you for continuing the story
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
So happy to hear Edwards feelings towards Bella. Love love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy birthday.,Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward and Bella finally had a conversation..you gotta love Emmett.. until you post again
Date: 02 Sep 2019 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy Birthday!!! Thank You for sharing your work!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
What a pickle Bella is in. How would she even get Emmett out of that place?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
What a terrible way to be forced to live. Now I'm wondering if Bella will try to help Jacob or let him suffer.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
Bella has had more help along the way than I thought she'd have. She's stronger than she thinks.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
I was thinking Sam probably had something to do with it since the guards were ordered not to hurt Bella.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
That was brutal to read.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2019 4:30 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Bella's got determination.
Sherry
Date: 01 Sep 2019 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy Birthday, great story!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2019 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy birthday!! Thank you so much for posting can't wait til the nxt chpter!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2019 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy birthday!! Thank you so much for posting can't wait til the nxt chpter!
Date: 01 Sep 2019 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy Birthday! I LOVE when I see you have updated your story! Also so glad these two knuckleheads finally said their ILY’s! Anxiously waiting the next update!
Beadgirl!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2019 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
:) Happy Birthday
Date: 01 Sep 2019 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
OH MY!! This is fantastic!! I love this story and I am dying for more!! ;)
Date: 01 Sep 2019 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Yes I love this down to earth emmet
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2019 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
That’s funny- I love waking up to a new chapter of your wonderful story!!!
Thank you for sharing your incredible imagination and talent with the world. Hope you have a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY !
Date: 01 Sep 2019 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Happy Birthday to you!!! And thank you so much for this chapter and the whole story. It is one of these stories yu get totally pulled in and forget everything else. Thank you so much for writing and sharing! This story is awesome and excellent written.
And: I loved this chapter! Edward and Bella get to talk, really talk to each other. They confess their feelings. That will help them to push through. I adore Emmett. He is wise and a real friend. I am so excited for the next chapter. Thank you again!
Date: 01 Sep 2019 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
I am glad that Emmett is with them. But I fear for his life. I hope that he will be reunited with Rosalie, I really do. Now all imprisoned Diamond men are dead. Both sides fight extremely cruel. I am glad that Tyler showed that he is a human being with a conscience - even if he is dead now. And I hope that Edward and Bella will start to talk really talk and will discover what they mean for each other.
Great chapter, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2019 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
thank you for the update..well done..they are safe for now..I need them to make it to Mexico and reunite with their family..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2019 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
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Date: 30 Aug 2019 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
Wow. Timing is everything. Glad they got out
Date: 30 Aug 2019 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Red Ward
Wow. Timing is everything. Glad they got out
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2019 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
O come on.dont leave us hanging
Date: 29 Aug 2019 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
Stay strong Bella and find Edward. I can't wait until they get out of this discusting place. These people are crazy.
Date: 29 Aug 2019 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
Bella needs to unplug Emmett. Get him a uniform and give his bar code to a dead person, so no one will know he is missing. Once he is back to himself, he could help find Edward.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2019 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
Thank you for the update.,well done..let's hope Bella finds Edward and they make it to Mexico and Bella is reunited with her son..who won't know her😢..until you post again
Date: 27 Aug 2019 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
Great story. I wonder why the resistance didn't look into who was in the white and released people like Jacob his only crime was offending a diamond. I do hope Emily makes it out alive as well as Bella and Edward
Date: 27 Aug 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 8: N.S.R.
Emmett is great! I love him! The Diamonds strike back in the most horrible way, but it will only cause more violence. I don't think that the Resistance will buckle.
Date: 27 Aug 2019 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: Emmett
lol Those two are too funny together.
Date: 23 Aug 2019 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: Emmett
Wow! This chapter had me sitting on the edge of my seat and laughing. This was great. I love this series and have gone back to reread a couple times. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 Aug 2019 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 7: Emmett
Oh my! I love the team work! lol I am dying for more! ;)
Thank you for the update!!
Date: 23 Aug 2019 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
OMG!! I am all caught up and dying for more!! I can't wait for another update!!! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2019 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
HOLYSH*T!! This is fantastic!! I can't believe she is in!! I hope she can find Edward!! I can't believe Jacob was there!! I wonder if there will be anyone else she will recognize!?! ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2019 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
WOW!! She is on her way!! I am so proud of her that she made it that far! ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2019 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
WHATTHEEVERLOVINGFECKINFECK!?! OMG!!! I am dying to read more!!! o.O
Date: 22 Aug 2019 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
OMFNG!! *sobs* :(
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2019 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
Good job
Date: 21 Aug 2019 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
I’m like Bella. I would keep seeing Emmett over and over if I didn’t do something to try to save him. It’’s been quite a while since I had to learn to turn off my emotions to take care of my job. It wasn’t anything like this but I did transcription for police department and the child abuse stuff was quite difficult, especially in the beginning.
Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
Yes very creepy. The thought about the drugs on the workers is an interesting one
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
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Date: 20 Aug 2019 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
Wow. That is a tough decision
Date: 20 Aug 2019 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
This story is so powerful! The White Ward is so terrible, I can't describe it. How can someone work there and stay human? Embry and the others seem to have split a part of their personality apart. I wo der what Bella will do with Emmett. Will they even be able to escape? She can't save Jacob due to the atrophy, it would be a problem even for Emmett. Thank you for writing and sharing!
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
O wow.its getting good
Date: 18 Aug 2019 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
Wow wonder why they would keep Jake there once the resistance took over. She better hide that pic so she isn't recognized
Date: 18 Aug 2019 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
Wow Mrs cope is awesome! She was so lucky she found her
Date: 18 Aug 2019 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Wow surprised she made it back. You'd think they would have more out searching for her. Glad the baby will be safe now at least. Wonder if Sam will hurt her when she is found.
Date: 17 Aug 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
The White Ward is so much worse than I expected! And Bella is so tough! Now she has found Jacob. Will he continue to be a part in this story? I am wondering.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2019 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
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Date: 16 Aug 2019 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
Yikes You must have nightmares after writing this. Or is before?
Date: 16 Aug 2019 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: The White Ward
oh My god. this is like a drug.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2019 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
It's getting good
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
Thank you for the update..Bella is very brave or really stupid..Ij know she loves Edaard..I believe he loves her also just afraid of what others think because of there status..I hope Bella survives and she see's her son again..until you post again
Date: 15 Aug 2019 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
this gal is foolish. I would have stayed with the baby that Needed me. Not the fool who didn't.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2019 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
Love your story.
Date: 15 Aug 2019 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
The Resistance rdminds me of the French Revolution... And so many other revolutions. They want justice, but there is so much hatred, that true freedom has no chance - it's always only freedom for those who rule. And so many suffer as collateral damage...
I adore Mrs. Cope. She loves Bella and simply helps. That's who she is. She is true to herself and risks everything. It's good to see some humanity left.
And Bella : she is phenomenal and doesn't even see it. I fear fo her: the hardest parts are right before her. I hope for the best.
Date: 15 Aug 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
Bella is being so brave. I hope Edward and Emmett are here. I hope she finds a place to get cleaned up and stay while she looks for them.
Date: 15 Aug 2019 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
You have me a little worried. Every other time bella used the GPS you mentioned that she turned it off. This last time you didn't mention that she turned it off. I hope that she did and this isn't going to lead to capture.
Great chapter all in all
Date: 15 Aug 2019 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 4: Day One
I really love this story and look forward to the next chapter!
Date: 13 Aug 2019 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Awesome chapter
Date: 13 Aug 2019 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Uh-oh! Poor Carlisle!
Date: 13 Aug 2019 6:55 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Loved it
Date: 13 Aug 2019 6:54 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2019 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
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Date: 12 Aug 2019 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
really interesting. keep it up.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
I guess Bella has finally learned about who you can really trust. I wonder if Emily gave her accurate information.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Sam was on my list of possible leaders. I'm glad Bella got the baby to safety. It makes her rescue mission more believable
Date: 12 Aug 2019 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Sam ist the leader of the resistance??!! What a twist! Thank you for Rose's words. They meant so much to Bella.
But where is Bella to go now? She has to hide. Unfortunately Sam has turned her enemy now.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2019 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Thank you for the update..Well done..Bella is very brave..I hope Bella's eyes were playing tricks on her..I hope Carlisle is not dead..Can Bella really save Edward?..until you post again
Date: 12 Aug 2019 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: Friend or Foe
Sam no way WoW
Date: 12 Aug 2019 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Thank you for this chapter even though I could barely stand it. Carlisle was an exceptional man: decent, just, intelligent, without any conceit. He sacrificed himself for the possible resurrection of his son. I adore him. And I am glad that he was there when his grandson was born, that he was able to meet him and to help Bella.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
OMG not Carlisle that was a shocker
Date: 12 Aug 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
WOW Bella will get to him
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Wow.good update
Date: 10 Aug 2019 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Oh no Carlisle?!?!Poor Esme.
Date: 10 Aug 2019 2:32 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Wowsers.... I was afraid that would be whereE would be taken. Bet Jake is loving that. Hmm wonder where mother and sister are
Date: 10 Aug 2019 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
....my heart is hurting for a fictional character. I'm sitting here
Reminding myself, its okay its just a story.
A wonderful story, so far
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2019 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Poor Carlisle
Date: 08 Aug 2019 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
I can't believe they killed Carlisle. Bella better get her head straight and find Edward.
Date: 08 Aug 2019 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Those bastards. They had no right to kill him. Matter of fact they had no Igor to take them as prisoners.
Date: 08 Aug 2019 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Oh no.. you said character death. I was hoping for Tanya etc.
Date: 08 Aug 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 : The Curtain Call
Oh my I am sooo glad she had her baby but so sad for carslie he was a great man father grandpa and husband so sad for esme