Date: 13 Oct 2019 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Woman's Place
Communication skills -20% these two. Or rather Edward's, he never listens but expects to be listened to. I understand the societal dynamic, but even so there are examples of men taking into account what the women around them have to say.
Date: 11 Oct 2019 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Woman's Place
Bella caused all of this crap. She thinks she would be weak if she needs help. Edward is sacrificing himself because he loves Bella. Bella doesn't understand love. She wants power. She messes up and Edward cleans up. He truly is too good for her.
Date: 11 Oct 2019 11:09 AM Title: Chapter One: The End
Thank you for another great chapter - it was well worth the wait! I love how you worked motorcycles into the story, especially Bella’s description of riding behind Edward (a nod to SM’s running scenes?). Look forward to seeing where you take the story from here :)
Date: 11 Oct 2019 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Woman's Place
Oh! Edward is blindsided by his view of women, his want to protect Bella and his views about the crumbling system they live in. He wanted Bella to understand that they are a team, now he makes the same mistakes as she did. I hope Bella and Emmett will be able to save him. - I am very excited about Bella's inner development. She matures immensely.
Date: 30 Sep 2019 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 18: Enlightenment
I was actually afraid that Boyce's son was going to turn out to be Sam. I'm proud of Bella for sticking to what she believes is the right thing to do. Boyce has shown them kindness and generosity, so it's only right to show him the same thing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'll be here waiting regardless of how long it takes. I hope work doesn't run you down too much.
Date: 30 Sep 2019 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 18: Enlightenment
Thank you for this great chapter! In my opinion it's one of the best do far (but I am absolutely addicted to this story!) Bella stops fighting herself and stops judging the changes she is going through and starts to accept her changed personality - I would call it a changed Bella, since it is parg new and part old Bella. Bella learns that it is good to have a partner if you want to make it to the end. And then there are the books about the former U. S. and the climate change. I adore how you fit these topics into the story! This. Way the story becomes so much deeper! Thank you so much!
Date: 26 Sep 2019 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 17: Jessica
That last line was what my great grandma told my great grandps when he beat her. It hasbeen passed down to all the women in the family to remind them that they don't have to take bad treatment! I taught it to my girls when they were young and just loved reading it here. It remineded me of my great grandma. THANKS
Date: 26 Sep 2019 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: Jessica
Wow! Jessica redeemed herself at the end. I understand that Bella has to change in order to cope with the situation she is in, but I think of her decisions as kind of kamikaze. She can't do it on her own. I wonder what it will take for her to see that she has friends she can count on. I hope she will get there.
Date: 21 Sep 2019 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 16: My New Order of Business
When the establishment threatened and then kill the children and Emily I thought the Newtons were involved but only in the defense against the uprising. It's looking like Michael is playing both sides and trying to emerge in a situation where the Newton's rule the world
Date: 20 Sep 2019 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 15: Someone I Once Knew
Bella is so stubborn and hardheaded! I agree that she needs to stop and think. Maybe her father can get her to see reason. I can’t see her being able to save him as well. I LOVE this story. I’m always so excited when I get an alert for a new chapter. I’m so looking forward to Saturday evening!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2019 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 15: Someone I Once Knew
What an escape! I am breathless. I like the dialogues between Edward, Emmett and Bella, the way they discuss things and become closer. They are under a lot of stress and cope differently with it. But now I am really scared. Bella is so stubborn, I guess she wants to save Charlie. That is so dangerous. I fear for her and the life of her companions!
Date: 18 Sep 2019 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
Oh cool they're going to do something that creates intimacy and the bond all of them create won't be broken... unless you kill off Emmett, I mean Bella and Edward will have a deeper and better relationship, but there will always be an undertone of melancholy...
Date: 18 Sep 2019 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Weighty Decision
Okay but do these people get a faur trial before ending up here? I mean outside of being sent by some weathy asshat? Also bruh, this place is creepy af, what kind of society is this??? I just thought it was a caste system until this place.
Date: 17 Sep 2019 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Sweet Summer
thank you for the update..well done..I'm happy they got to eat and clean themselves properly. Sleep in a bed...now why would the Resistance find them?...I'm hopeing it friendly people..until you post again
Date: 09 Sep 2019 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Last Good Man
I can't see a way for the Resistance and the Diamonds ever coming to a solution and coming together as one. I'm guessing Bella must have fell back down the mountain at the end of this chapter. I can hardly wait for more.
Date: 07 Sep 2019 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
OMG!! They finally told each other how they feel!!! I loved this chapter so much. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
I hope you had a wonderful birthday! I’m a fellow Virgo ♍️. My birthday isSeptember 4.
Date: 05 Sep 2019 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Into The Woods
Emmett and the bear - so funny! I am glad he made it this time! But I fear for them. They have been found by the Resistance, what's going to happen? You are killing me here!
I absolutely appreciated the talk between Edward and Bella and I love the way he is hanging.
Date: 03 Sep 2019 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 10: Sanctuary
I so happy that the 3 of them are together. They can help each other so they will be successful. I hope Bella believes that Edward truly loves her. They need to learn to stop fighting over every little thing. They are both so stubborn