Date: 14 May 2019 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is going to be a very long road to a HEA. I can say that only six chapters in and I am ready to throttle both Edward and Bella. Bella because she agreed to this ridiculous marriage and for not telling Edward that she wants a husband who will love her and not sleep with other women, whether they are married or courting/engaged! I want to throttle Edward because he thinks it's okay to sleep with other women when he is engaged or married to Bella, whether the marriage is fake or real, because he thinks that Bella is honestly going to be okay with him sleeping with other women, and because he is marrying Bella as a sort of revenge against his grandfather for sending him away! Ugh expect a lot of reviews of me ranting at these two characters for just being dumb, oblivious, and not just sitting down and talking with one another!
Date: 14 May 2019 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bella is being a bitch. Maybe she would be treated better if she would try to be nice.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2019 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Don't mind the long delay of heat because so many of the stories people write quickly turn into hallmark movie scripts. The anticipation lures the reader in. But leave g them with cliff hangers and waiting along time for the next post causes a lot of us to stop reading. So that k you for the quick posts. This such a great theme and can't wait for the next post!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2019 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Don't mind the long delay of heat because so many of the stories people write quickly turn into hallmark movie scripts. The anticipation lures the reader in. But leave g them with cliff hangers and waiting along time for the next post causes a lot of us to stop reading. So that k you for the quick posts. This such a great theme and can't wait for the next post!
Date: 14 May 2019 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! In my opinion, Edward cares for Bella and wants to restart their friendship. But he simply can't comprehend where she comes from. He doesn't understand what it really means to be an overweight woman of the working class. And he is blinded by his own anger, resentment and bitterness. He sees himself as a victim and wants revenge. To him, to help Bella with their deal means he is the knight in shining armor that deserves her thanks. He can't see what their deal will cost Bella. Add to that that he is hurt by Bella's rejection. Things are going to be rough between them.
Date: 14 May 2019 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
I would be hurt 2 to marriage where I want my husband but he’s with someone else she needs to tell him she has always had feelings for him Question will Edward ever tell Bella he’s true feelings I think the same as Alice he does love Bella he just hasn’t figured it out
Date: 14 May 2019 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. However, on another note I don't think I can handle reading about Edward sleeping with other people while married to Bella, whether it be a fake relationship or not. They're still married and I don't like the idea of him cheating. Any way you can promise me that Edward actually turns into a decent person and doesn't sleep with anything that has legs and a pussy while with Bella? Also any way that he potentially lied about sleeping with a ton of girls while in London over those six years he was gone?? Sorry I'm happily ever after girl.
Author's Response:
While I can’t promise he won’t sleep with anyone during their courtship, I will say he won’t sleep with anyone while they are married...can’t believe I’m sharing that. Anyway, this story will be longer so it will take the whole story part one and two before you get your HEA. Hope you can hang in there. Sometimes Edward needs a little redemption.
Date: 10 May 2019 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think Edward cares for Bella more than she thinks. Alice is probably right. He wants to be with her and not controlled by his family.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2019 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Nope -_- still coming along for the journey! Still love this story and as you more or less stated-the beauty (or bella's weight) is in the eye of the beholder. Please keep posting. Love it!
Date: 10 May 2019 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
The way you've written Bella I doubt she will ask Edward to be open and honest with her about his reaction to Jacob. I'm curious about that too. Is Edward jealous that Bella might be attracted to Jacob? I wonder why he doesn't ask her does it have to be Jake or would she be ok with a trainer he picks?
Date: 10 May 2019 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you! Edward's character develops more depth. I like it very much. He is hurt and bitter, he hurts Bella and yet he comforts her and cares for her deeply. She doesn't trust him, I understand her very well. I don't think that Edward knows about Bella's feelings for him and I don't know how deep his fee3for her are at the moment. I just guess that everything will stay complicated for a long time.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2019 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Two crazy kids have a lot to overcome... Hope she loses the weight because she really wants to.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG,!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY! I love it even more because you are using a chubby Bella hence, sharing all her insecurities that go along with being that size.
I've been stopping what I'm doing to read each chapter as soon as you post! Please keep them coming and please consider publishing this as an ebook if you do, I would love to share it on social media as I have a lot of friends who would e joy it.😁
Date: 09 May 2019 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great story and funny! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2019 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Glad Jessica was sent packing. But afraid she's going to start more trouble. Glad E won't let her hide.
Date: 08 May 2019 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
I feel so bad that Bella doesn't have any self worth. I hope Edward can change that and it becomes a real marriage because he does care about her.
Date: 08 May 2019 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for this chapter! "I love the way Edward puts Jessica in her place and I really love that Bella stands up for herself. Bella is so conflicted and Edward's knows her so well. I hope that Bella will be able to face her insecurities and that she will learn to trust Edward. And I hope that his friendship with her is for real, that he really cares for her and doesn't let her down as soon as they fight or something like that.
Thank you for your update!
Date: 08 May 2019 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
I totally agree with Bella about this world
Date: 08 May 2019 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awww and wicked witch has flown out for now I think Edward deep down he really likes Bella and as he gets to see her more often he 2 will fall for her I don’t like to think he will be messing around with other women but he needs to figure it out on he’s own I hope no one ever finds out about he’s plan
Date: 06 May 2019 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'd like to find out why this world thinks working for a living is a drain on society
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2019 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh soo hooked and truly hope you don't slow down. If you did, it would cause this grown woman to melt into hysterics! 😭
Date: 05 May 2019 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
And so it begins... A proposal out of convenience. Or is it more? Bella has feelings for Edward and he remembers everything about their shared childhood. This will become very interesting soon. I'm hooked! Thank you!
Date: 05 May 2019 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ugh! Workout with Jacob Black and all of his platitudes. That sucks! But Esme is great! I adore her! You are creating some very special characters here! Thank you!
Date: 05 May 2019 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a beginning! And what kind of society in which this story takes place! I'm intrigued! I love the friendship between Bella and Alice and I love the way her father treats her with love and respect. I really dislike her mother and most of all her sister! But:a mother should always stand up for her child and love unconditionally.
Date: 05 May 2019 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wowsers.... Wonder what Alice will say /do. Wish I could see Jessica's face
Date: 05 May 2019 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
No need to worry, I'm already hooked:-)
Date: 05 May 2019 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really loving this. Can't wait for Jessica's reaction
Date: 05 May 2019 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Dont worry we are hooked 😃
Date: 04 May 2019 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Jess is such a skank.
Date: 04 May 2019 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another awesome chapter 11
Can't wait for the next one1
Date: 04 May 2019 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is getting really good. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Can't wait for next update.
Date: 03 May 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great plot, I love it!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2019 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm wondering is edward going to be a jerk?
Date: 01 May 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story1 please keep posting the chapters when you can
Date: 01 May 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
wowsers. sounds like Jessica is someone I'd love to throw under a bus. Poor B
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2019 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 01 May 2019 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! This is an interesting start! I can't wait to read more of this story! ;)