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Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2020 9:11 PM Title: Plagiarized

Good luck to you Marie, and thanks for the story xo

 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:53 PM Title: Plagiarized

Dear Marie Carrio, I send You my best wishes! I enjoy Your stories so much: they are written in an excellent way, there is passion a d wit in Your writing. You have been badly betrayed. My thoughts are with You. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:47 PM Title: Plagiarized

Legal action is NECESSARY!
Plagiarism is a crime.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2020 8:01 PM Title: Plagiarized

I'm so sorry to hear this.  You began a collaboration with an inferior writer in good faith.  Instead of learning from you and developing her writing skills she stole your words.   What a lowlife, lying leech she turned out to be.  Please follow this through, I know you've said this story wasn't written for money but anything she has made clearly does not belong to her.

Please don't let this stop you writing

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:30 AM Title: Epilogue

Fantastic parting chapter.
Glad they had a chance to thank this who helped them in their journey to adulthood.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Unexpected end to the reunion for the Cullens. Edward said is peace. Now for the rest of their future to pan out they need to graduate high school.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Will Edward follow through with the request for emancipation from his parents?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 20

The idea that you're not alone in your sorrow is a very deep seeded need in all of us.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

Finish school should be their next agenda item.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm hoping Emmett will figure out the feds are search the boarder crossings for the young runaway couple.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

Fleeting friends are another interesting part if life's road trip.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 16

Of course the dead end trail would find new life just as the teens decide to continue the journey.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

But they didn't even consider the use of a condom!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm leary of this new plan but also agree that Emmett's location needs to remain guarded.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can't imagine one of my daughters having to deal with a sexual assault of any form.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

That was too close to becoming a statistic.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hm, Charlotte isn't her real name. The Blacks must have known that by using other people who's lives are in a similar situation E&B's travel would remain a secret.
Did the check out clerk at Target call in Bella's sighting to the FBI?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

Life experiences do not truly equal maturity. They have too much to figure out regarding their journey to Emmett to mess with their first sexual intimacy encounter.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Life outside the protected bubble of parents rule is harsh.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

A tense moment, but quick thinking and sticking as close to the truth as possible helped.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

Trust is difficult to earn as well as give if your past has had little to reference.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 2:59 PM Title: Epilogue

I am glad they got to see Kate and Gary again.

Thanks for sharing :D  It was a wonderful story :D

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Ha, Jacob is an old man. Glad he was right where E&B needed him.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

No id's and no transportation will put them in a bind.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward should have destroyed the phones so no signal could be triangulated. Their where abouts has at least been given as Champagne Illinois.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Where will E&B finish highschool?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

What made Emmett plan an option for Bella to get away?

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Young love! :D

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Young and in love doesn't set them up to face life's brutal challenges.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2019 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this 

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