Date: 12 Jan 2019 6:42 PM Title: Prologue
I like how you've started this and your writing style is really good. If don't mind a suggestion - I recommend you look into a beta reader because you do have some grammar errors that could use fixing, but awesome start.
Date: 09 Jan 2019 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well that interesting. However I dont hear any true remorse and he never apologized. I hope she is politely civil and aloof. He has to man up. I really hope he has some hoops to go through before she even considers him and doesn't fall all over herself the minute he looks in her direction.
Date: 09 Jan 2019 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
He needs to grovel in the gravel!! I'm just saying that he was soo very horrible to her, that he shouldn't be thinking about making her his for a summer quicky. But to earn her forgiveness.
But I seriously hope that she run's far, far, far, far away from him. He doesn't deserve her at all!