Date: 14 Jun 2019 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
So Mike is just a pawn in the scheme. I bet they find his body hidden somewhere. I wonder what other weirdos were in her high school class. I hope Bella recognizes him when he comes after her. She's a smart girl. I don't think she would trust anyone from her class.
Date: 13 Jun 2019 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 29
Very interesting chapter! i have a few guesses as to whom this mystery person could be, but no matter who it is, i hope that they get their just deserts for what they have put Bella and Edward through. please write soon!
Date: 10 Jun 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward shouldn't have just hugged her close and let her cry. He should have told her how much she hurt him by shutting him out. She was being cruel to him. She needs to know she can't act like a bitch and expect him to be ok with it. He is going through the same crap she is. It was his paintings that got destroyed. His life was threatened. She needs to do a whole lot more than make him a dessert. She needs to show him that he is important and not just sexually.
Date: 08 Jun 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for this intense chapter! I loved it! Bella ad Edward are both stressed beyond anything and they have difficulties in coping. Both try to do it their way and they fail miserably. It's sad but it:s good for them as well. They learn that they need each other and can lean on each other. They experience that they must face their problems together - or they will overwhelm them. - Great chapter!
Date: 06 Jun 2019 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok. Being a 2nd amendment person I need to correct you. Fully Automatic Guns, Rifles are illegal and have been since the 1930s. Also, in Washington State there is a 5 day waiting period for background checks per federal regualtion. If you are going to mention gun laws and gun safety then please do so with the correct information.
Date: 06 Jun 2019 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
Mike is so crazy. I'm glad Edward had his paintings put up for safe keeping. I hope they find him fast, but in the meantime Edward and Bella can experience all the museums of Italy. They are so amazing. Maybe Edward will get inspired to paint again.
Date: 30 May 2019 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
Newton is so a dead man when they get him! like what the hell is his problem, just because he wants bella and she decided to be with someone who has changed for the better doesnt mean he needs to be a sore loser! People change and if we dont give others that chance to show it, then what does that make us?
Great chapter, Cant wait for the next one....hope they get Newton soon though!
Date: 29 May 2019 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the plot, so far. I do think you need a Beta. You have to learn their, they're and there. You also need to watch how much you make your words plural when it isn't necessary. Keep writing, you have a wonderful imagination.
Date: 17 May 2019 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella has 2 worries. At work she needs to worry about her creepy boss. She needs to document when he is inappropriate. Then there is super loony Mike, he needs to be found and watched like a hawk. He is getting very scary.
Date: 17 May 2019 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow! Great chapter, thank you! Jacob is an absolute douche with no regards for personal boundaries or the least of respect. And Mike is sick, obsessed and very dangerous. I'm glad, Bella's fathers are with her. She needs all the support she can get.
Date: 23 Apr 2019 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ugh! Mike is on a roll, it's disgusting! His actions make me shiver! - Thank you for the new chapter, it is disturbing, it is scary and very well written! I hope Mike will be stopped soon but I'm afraid his actions haven't reached its peak yet.
Date: 19 Apr 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder who took the photo and how Mike got it?! Has Mike spent how whole life obsessed with Bella? Mike is definitely trying to make his presence known! I am so looking forward to the art show. Can’t wait for the next chapter!