amazing..would love to see more of this...even if its just random POV's..

~Tiffany

So, I was all impressed with myself this morning because I was actually going to be on time for work.  I managed to tear myself away from my computer on time BUT, then I read your summary.  I wanted to be your first review, but I couldn't be THAT late.  So, I come home intending to review it, and I find out I'll still be the first.  Man, people just suck.  You had 108 reads and not one of those lazy people could review.  Ugh, typical !!!  That's all it is-their laziness, don't take it personally.

Well, I loved it.  I love this premise, can't read enough of it.  Actually have written two of it myself.  I thought you did a great job.  The summary with 'her reaction' is what pulled me in.  Then, when I read 'her reaction', I was like 'holy crap, Bella, what the heck'?  I thought you wrote it extremely well...you could actually see them standing their spinning their locker dials, ha.  But after she rejected him, the raw emotion that you showed from both of them ...excellent.   I think you did a fantastic job with it.  I'd love to see you expand it.  But, I'm learning now how challenging it is to pull a whole story from a one-shot.  I'd love to see you try, but whatever works best for you.  Great job, going to go see if you have others now.

PEOPLE, HIT THE BUTTON, IT'S RIGHT THERE.  GEEZ, AT LEAST SAY, 'HI, GOOD JOB, I WAS HERE'.  Do you people have any concept how much thought and energy goes into every single chapter?  Hit the button, it's the least you could do for all of her hard work.