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Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

EXCELLENT PLOT ! It could become a much longer version but as it is, it's a full story. It stands on it own and that's amazing for such a short story. Congrats.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm so glad!

Reviewer: Auror21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2019 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I’m really not trying to be mean here, but do you speak english as a second language? There are so many grammatical errors and missed pronouns it was hard to read. I highly recommend a beta or a re-edit if you plan to continue this. The basic idea of the story has merit.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment and reading.
I'm sorry for the mistakes, I'm not so good in English. It's not my native language, and I have no one to check it out. I will be glad, if you have time, you will write me mistakes and how to correct them.

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