[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Love the story! Can't wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
What is Alice’s problem? I wonder why she is so suspicious of Bella. I hope it doesn’t wind up in one or both of them getting hurt. I’d like to see them become trusted friends.
The ring is sooo gorgeous! Glad Bella said yes cause I agree that she will make the perfect mafia wife. Hope the family does too.
Sooo Tonya may have ratted them out to Aro. Hate to be Tonya if it’s true.
Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 19 Feb 2020 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Is there something we should know about Edward and Alice? She seems to really be overprotective of Edward.
Date: 19 Feb 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
beautiful ring, great story. Cant wat for more
Date: 19 Feb 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Beautiful ring. Hope Ed can straighten out Alice or we have trouble at some point.
Date: 19 Feb 2020 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Yay & what a gorgeous ring. I was so excited to see an update. So looking forward to finding out if Alice is for real & just concerned or is she possibly a bad guy.
Date: 18 Feb 2020 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
What a gorgeous ring as befits a Cullen wife!
Date: 18 Feb 2020 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
The ring is beautiful. Alice is being a little pain.
Date: 18 Feb 2020 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
I absolutely love this stoory and I cant wait for more. I love how Edward is finding all these treasures and about his family
Date: 18 Feb 2020 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Sorry my blood pressure was up last night and I had a migraine. That ring is gorgeous I love ❤️ it.
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”’‘
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2020 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
:)
Date: 17 Feb 2020 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
That is one beautiful ring. I hope Alice comes to except Bella.
Date: 17 Feb 2020 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Beautiful ring!
Date: 17 Feb 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2020 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Love it
Date: 17 Feb 2020 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
:}
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2020 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Edward and Bella are good little treasure hunters together. :) I'm very suspicious of Alice. If she doesn't get with the program, she needs to be dealt with. Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2020 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Oh my goodness with every chapter they discover something new about his family
Date: 16 Feb 2020 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Yes can't wait for Aro to go DOWN!!
Date: 16 Feb 2020 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
So appreciate the update. Loved the chapter. Hope Alice gets it together soon. She has always been my least favorite of the gang in any story. Thanks for the update Helen
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2020 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures
Love the occasional warm and fuzzy chapters. With the exception of Alice. Is she demented? ;) Great update.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
They are just too cool together. Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Woo hoo for finding some of his heritage.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
I'm sure Alice will come around eventually. Aro is def a live wire. Surprised he hasn't been taken down already.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this strong confident Bella.
Date: 14 Feb 2020 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017
Just a thousand questions....LOL
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
UGH! I have a love/hate relationship with cliffies! I hate that I love them. *Giggles*
Well I’m hoping she says “yes”, but there’s a little scared part of me that says, “Could she possibly say ‘no’?”. Can’t wait to find out.
This was an amazing chapter. I loved the description of the house and the rules. I think they can get Aro as long as they have all their “married” ducks in a row (hehehe).
Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
I can't wait to see what's next!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2020 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Thank you for the update..the house sounds fabulous..Im happy Edwatd will restore it..so they will get married..I can't wait for next update..until you post again
Date: 11 Feb 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
hurry. LOL
Date: 11 Feb 2020 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Will you be updating soon? I hope
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2020 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017
Hooked on this story saw it recommended on a d f ... Glad I took a chance
Date: 11 Feb 2020 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
I know she is going to say YES!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2020 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
I know she is going to say YES!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2020 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Love that Edward and Bella are working together. That they both feel the pull to each other. What in the world has Edward found?
Date: 11 Feb 2020 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
It is different to see Alice as not the friendly one. Most writers have Rose be the unfriendly one. I like what you ha e done.
Date: 11 Feb 2020 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loving Bella and Edward's reaction to each other.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Just commit to whatever it takes, you two!!! Aro needs to get what he so richly deserves and then some. I enjoy reading about this restoration. I can only imagine how grand this residence is and will be. :)
Date: 10 Feb 2020 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Great chapter, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
That was a truly evil cliffy. Bella will marry Edward, considering she loves him and also wants revenge on Aro. ;) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 10 Feb 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Loved it ! Can't wait to read next chapter, wonderful story great writing as always.
Date: 10 Feb 2020 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Yes!!! Yes!!! Yes!!!
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘
Date: 10 Feb 2020 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
I'm worried contactin' the utilities companies and that contractor might alert Aro before Edward's ready to take him on *nail bite!*
And you are evil to leave us hangin' LOL!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
You evil cliffie whore. Excellent update. Wish I was walking through the house with them.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2020 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Need more. I don't like waiting. LOL
Date: 09 Feb 2020 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Beautiful!
Date: 09 Feb 2020 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
Glad I know your writing so well...I know the answer! Phew
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries
I love it
Date: 09 Feb 2020 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Love this chapter. I must say I have been reading your stories for years and your writing really has come so far! I have always enjoyed it but it has definitely developed in the very best way!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait for next update..until you post again..I hope they restore the hoyse to its old glory..with a few updates..it sounds beautiful
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Thank you for the update..well done..I can't wait for next update..until you post again..I hope they restore the hoyse to its old glory..with a few updates..it sounds beautiful
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Love it and can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2020 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2020 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
I loved this chapter. Anything found to get rid of Aro is great. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
So glad that you are still writing it. Love the flow and words.
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Wow, I wasnt expecting that
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2020 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Amazing update!
Bye Bye Aro
Date: 08 Feb 2020 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
All I want to do is bundle read this story so please please please update soon!
I mean, take your time but I hope you can feel the love and enthusiasm for this story!
Date: 08 Feb 2020 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 08 Feb 2020 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Dang! That was so excitin'...my goosebumps have goosebumps LOL!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2020 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
“Omertà” is the code of silence for the mafia, so I’m guessing it was familiar to Edward. Bella’s research sure did come in handy to help them figure out how to get that safe open. What’s in it must be something amazing. Can’t wait to find out what it is. I’m also so curious why the other families met there in that secret room.
I love this story and adore you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Aw you know we hate cliffs!!!
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”’‘
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2020 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
You're a great writer. This chapter read like some Indiana Jones type of shit. Loved it. Sorry for cursing, but it's really good
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2020 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Oh my oh my what is on that paper I cannot wait to see
Date: 08 Feb 2020 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Keep up the good work. I love it.
Date: 08 Feb 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Love this chapter. I must say I have been reading your stories for years and your writing really has come so far! I have always enjoyed it but it has definitely developed in the very best way!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017
Great chapter. Love that he is there discovering his roots.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Love the dynamics of alice. Not the usual at all. Bella is a little freak in the sheets.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is much more fierce than i expected.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017
Well that heated up fast!! I'm not complaining at all!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017
I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see E&B!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cullen aka superman.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 2:20 AM Title: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017
Perfect twist!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017
That'snot good at all!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2020 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
I love it more please
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
❤️
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Well that was certainly an interesting plane ride. Hehehe! The suite sounds lovely. And Bella has a bit of “kink” to her.
I sure do hope Alice does come around cause seems like Bella is part of the family now and there to stay.
And Aro is baffled and trigger-happy. A very dangerous combo...or does it make him easier to get to?
Another awesome chapter. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 03 Feb 2020 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Alice is just very protective of her family. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2020 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017
:)
Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Wow! What a hotel suite!! Beautiful!
Date: 03 Feb 2020 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Very good chapter..
Date: 03 Feb 2020 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Why does Alice not like Bella but Rose does?? That is weird. Sorry it's late but had to read during Super Bowl commercials. Lol 😂
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’’”‘
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Hmmm, was it wise to check in as Mr. and Mrs. Cullen? Not that Edward wouldn't want to make it real eventually LOL!
Alice turned out to be a deadly little thing and who could blame her? Let's hope Edward captures Aro alive so everyone can get theirs before the light leaves his eyes!
Date: 02 Feb 2020 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
(I seem to have missed reviewin' chapter 7...bad Rita!)
Bella is awesome, fittin' in instantly with everyone in Edward's Family but especially with him! He certainly won't be lettin' her go and I doubt she'd go anyway LOL!
So, it's off to Italy we go!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2020 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
I love that your Bella is not timid or meek. Hope she continues to stand up tp Alice. hehehe
Maybe Aro can keep killing off his own goons? That would be awesome. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2020 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017
Sick Aro, poor Quil. Lake Como, here comes Clo. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2020 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love it can't wait to go to Italy lol
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2020 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Interesting story, keep on writing
Date: 30 Jan 2020 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you! I like this feisty Bella who knows what she wants and goes for it!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2020 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wowsa! They are so hawt together! *wipes brow*
Rose and Emmett are a comedy duo. Bwahahaha!
Well let’s go see Granpa’s house. Off to Italy. I’m sure Bella will be most interested in hearing his whole story. Or at least as much as he knows. They can fill in puzzle pieces for each other.
Can’t wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee