Date: 17 Mar 2019 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is really acting stupid. All Edward is trying to do is keep her safe. She needs to grow up and quit acting like a child all the time.
Date: 09 Mar 2019 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Mar 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Fiesty Bella is still there. She is just falling in love and doesn't know what to do with that new knowledge.
Date: 03 Mar 2019 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2019 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 20
Keep on writing, Bella is all over the place
Date: 01 Mar 2019 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I just forund this story while at work today and could not stop reading.......Wonderful story.....Great Writing...........Love it........THANK YOU
Date: 25 Feb 2019 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella's stubborness is going to get her killed. She needs to trust Edward to take of them.
Date: 18 Feb 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
UGH, who is it???? You are killing me
Date: 18 Feb 2019 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is such a handfull. She better be glad that Edward is patient and loves her so much.
Date: 11 Feb 2019 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love it!!!
Keep up the great work. And I love this Bella!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2019 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update...well done...Hopefully Bella will beable to be more honest with Edward....Will we ever find out what Edward has that (who ever is after him) they want? I wonder how long has Edward been looking after Bella without her knowledge? I can't wait for next chapter, until you post again
Date: 07 Feb 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella actually has more issues than Edward. He is so sweet and would do anything for her.
Date: 04 Feb 2019 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella needs to try and understand Edward. She really doesn't understand love. She should eat better before she has diabetes. Edward wants her around. Why is that so horrible! She needs to at least try and not be a pain in the butt.
Date: 30 Jan 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella needs to loose the attitude. Just because you love someone mean you have to tell them everything the second it happens. Edward deserves the right to process information and run his business. Bella certainly hasn't told Edward everything about her life.
Date: 29 Jan 2019 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Of course, Edward knows. He has his whole world wired. Bella should have just been honest. Edward really likes her. He would do anything for her and would protect Rosalie.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2019 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG ! I Love your story can't wait to read more. I never laughed so much reading a book !Thank you so much for writing this. You made my week better.
Date: 27 Jan 2019 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
hmmm . . . can't wait to find out. was it a test or did e just know already???
Date: 27 Jan 2019 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, a dreaded cliffee!! Please post soon!!
Date: 27 Jan 2019 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
I thought he might have known. Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 25 Jan 2019 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love this Bella and Edward. Bella is in her every is good time now no matter what she says and does and Edward is very subtle with how he is getting her to play into his hands. You always do a great job with these two thank you for letting me get away twice a week with them.
Date: 24 Jan 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella might need some therapy. She is crazy. She has to tell Edward the truth, but after the reunion. He is probably very nervous.
Date: 24 Jan 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this Edward and Bella is just comic relief.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella should have told Edward and he would protect her and Rosalie. She should have never done what they wanted.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hope she gets over herself and falls for Edward. I think he is so sweet and kind. He is just shy and socially awkward, but a good person.
Date: 22 Jan 2019 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is the weird one. Has she lived under a rock her whole life? Do they not have a school in Forks?
Date: 22 Jan 2019 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
I actually like this quirky Edward. Bella is rarely my favorite, but this one is so bizarre. She doesn't know even normal things.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2019 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
I’ve read all night now! It’s nearly time to get the kiddos up for school. Great story, so it’s worth a couple power naps later today. Love these two!
Annie B
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2019 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay can she just once not down herself? I'm going to need Edward to tell her he really likes her. And when is she going to come clean about what she did?
Date: 12 Jan 2019 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
good. seems e is waiting for b to take role as his mrs. thinking b needs to come clean soon
Date: 09 Jan 2019 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story. Bella is a bit meh though LOL
Date: 08 Jan 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
good. seems like b should tell e soon
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2019 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..Well done..Edward is opening up..I wonder wants going on with him..until you post again
Date: 04 Jan 2019 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow!!! this story just keeps getting better and better, hope Bella tells him the truth soon
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2019 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was priceless!
Date: 01 Jan 2019 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
she is horrible. sorry I am always Team Bella not on this story. She is awful.
Date: 01 Jan 2019 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Talk as you may I do NOT feel sorry for her now. She is just plain and simple rude
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2019 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
:) Happy New Year to you
Date: 01 Jan 2019 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it keep it coming!
Date: 31 Dec 2018 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this story good job
Date: 30 Dec 2018 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
don't think she should have just gotten into the car
Date: 28 Dec 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
good. can't wait to find out what jessica was up to
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2018 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
New reader to your story..I like it a lot😃😃Bella is a Hot Mess , but I like her attitude..she has been through a lot....I wonder what Edward's story is?..what is Emmett to him in this story?..Emmett didn't care what Edward said to him..lol...Rosalie is funny and Jessica needs a chill pill unless Edward is really hard to work for..until you post again
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
:) Merry Christmas to you too
Date: 21 Dec 2018 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am still here.. Trying to figure out the degrees of deception.
Date: 19 Dec 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
good start, looking forward to seeing what e is up to
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2018 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story. Thank you. Cannot wait for more chapters. Regards Pamela
pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au
Date: 17 Dec 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay.. we shall see where this goes.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay.. we shall see where this goes.
Date: 16 Dec 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! I am dying to read more of this story!! ;)
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2018 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hooked already! Looking forward to reading more