Date: 18 Apr 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
Thank you for the update..what does Bella have planned. I can't believe Gianna got Baby Ben out of the office. I love you stolry..Edward loves Bella ..I h ope she is able to tell him this before the story is over...well done..BRAVO!!!!
Date: 16 Apr 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
I guess I see things differently. I would be flattered that someone loved me so much. He went to all this just to keep me save and eventually get me in his life. I'm glad she came to the conclusion that there might also be lies on the drive and trusted Edward more than people trying to take him down. Edward might be sneaky, but he tries for the greater good.
Date: 16 Apr 2019 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow! A great chapter! Edward is crushed, Bella is deeply hurt and confused and Esme is wonderful: warm, brilliant, motherly and full of love. I'm in awe of Bella: she decides to trust Edward to tell her all about the things he did and not to take a look at what Marcus Rose has presented her with. Bella makes a decision: she wants to put her trust into Edward, she wants to give him and their relationship a chance. We get another foreshadowing that Marcus Rose won't stop. So there is still much suspense.
Date: 11 Apr 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you! I appreciate the way you describe the interactions between Bella and Edward. He deep ply cares for her, he gets her to talk and open up. She is still too scared to fall in love with someone bt her actions show how deeply she is moved by him.
Yet there is another hint about Edward and his net of lies and deception. I hope it won't tear them apart when it all gets into the open. And I don't know how he manages ut: he loves her, is able to cope with all her tantrums and issues, he trusts her and wants to gain her trust. Yet he keeps important secrets from her and lies to her. I'm very curious how it will all turn out!
Date: 31 Mar 2019 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love the way Edward asks Bella for her trust and asks her to fight with him instead of running away. But I'm curious: What is he hiding? There must be more. Will she run for the hills then or will she stay with him? And:why is Edward do afraid to share his secrets with her? I know he does not want to lose her and she is easily scared away and is one to easily jump to conclusions... yet it makes their relationship very complicated.
I'm absolutely intrigued by this story and can't wait how everything will turn out. Thank you for this fascinating plot!