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Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2021 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 31

a little dissappointed with the epi but a great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2021 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2021 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I read this but we will see

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2019 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

was there a sequel

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2019 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

great story

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2019 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

so good

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 31

I have spent the last hours reading this...I have laughed so hard I snorted. BRAVA!

 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love it. I would love slob on this story 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it. I hope they have many children.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 31

These two crazy kids will be missed!  Thanks for all the laughs!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 30

Looking forward to the new story!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh my goodness i can't believe it's almost over. :(

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

Is it their baby?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 27

You better start begging edward!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great advice alice!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 25

She is such a loon!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

Edward is so in tune to her!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

Edward you have got to be honest!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

I really hope he still has someone following her.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 31

Thank you for a wonderful story.,I loved it..Well done.,I'm happy for Bella and Edward 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

I don't like her being that far from the apartment.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope her hand isn't broken.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 30

:)

Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 31

Loved this story! Thank you for writing it.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

What have u done Edward!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm even a little nervous!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

She forgot to click her heels. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

It could be worse bella he could keep u locked in his apartment during business hours.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward can buy a new apartment building for them all to live in. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

I knew it!! He is just too smart & has cameras everywhere!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Her plans always backfire!! Edward knows what she did already that could be why emmett is now dating rose.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh but you are!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

Fireworks are going to go off when they finally kiss.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

He knows how to make her accept gifts!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

That would be a yes please!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

She makes me laugh more and more every chapter!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Or just tell edward the truth

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

He is smitten with her!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

I really hope they do the deed!! And why does he need bullet proof glass?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am so addicted to these two already!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

Laugh out loud line.....does jessica drink the soulds of children for lunch!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't wait to see how they met before!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

This bella is hilarious!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

Thank you for the update..what does Bella have planned.  I can't believe Gianna got Baby Ben out of the office.   I love you stolry..Edward loves Bella ..I h ope she is able to tell him this before the story is over...well done..BRAVO!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 29

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh geez a cliffhanger! LOL. I love this story a bit more now..

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2019 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

I guess I see things differently. I would be flattered that someone loved me so much. He went to all this just to keep me save and eventually get me in his life. I'm glad she came to the conclusion that there might also be lies on the drive and trusted Edward more than people trying to take him down. Edward might be sneaky, but he tries for the greater good.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow! A great chapter! Edward is crushed, Bella is deeply hurt and confused and Esme is wonderful: warm, brilliant, motherly and full of love. I'm in awe of Bella: she decides to trust Edward to tell her all about the things he did and not to take a look at what Marcus Rose has presented her with. Bella makes a decision: she wants to put her trust into Edward, she wants to give him and their relationship a chance. We get another foreshadowing that Marcus Rose won't stop. So there is still much suspense. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 28

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 27

I don't think we know the whole story. I still trust Edward more than these goons and how did he get into this private house party.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 27

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2019 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 27

yikes

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2019 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2019 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2019 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thank you! I appreciate the way you describe the interactions between Bella and Edward. He deep ply cares for her, he gets her to talk and open up. She is still too scared to fall in love with someone bt her actions show how deeply she is moved by him.

Yet there is another hint about Edward and his net of lies and deception. I hope it won't tear them apart when it all gets into the open. And I don't know how he manages ut: he loves her, is able to cope with all her tantrums and issues, he trusts her and wants to gain her trust. Yet he keeps important secrets from her and lies to her. I'm very curious how it will all turn out! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: tsalagi mama Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

I have to say that this is one of my favorite Ballad O have ever read. She is insanely koky, and I can't get enough of her and Edward! Thank you!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

Bella has a big problem with honesty.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for your update! I hope that Bella will be able to believe in Edward's love for her soon just as I hope he is sincere. But I guess there will be some more challenges to pass until then. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2019 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2019 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2019 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 24

I love the way Edward asks Bella for her trust and asks her to fight with him instead of running away. But I'm curious: What is he hiding? There must be more. Will she run for the hills then or will she stay with him? And:why is Edward do afraid to share his secrets with her? I know he does not want to lose her and she is easily scared away and is one to easily jump to conclusions... yet it makes their relationship very complicated.

I'm absolutely intrigued by this story and can't wait how everything will turn out. Thank you for this fascinating plot! 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2019 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope Bella is truthful with Edward and not hide behind pop culture.

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 22

I can't be enough from these two

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thank you

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love, love these two

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for sharing

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loving every chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loving this story so much

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

Another great chapter 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thank you for sharing

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love Bella and Edwards characters 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love both characters

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 12

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

Such great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

On to the next chapter

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for sharing your story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

I can't seem to stop reading

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

This is so good

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thank you for writing such a great story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

I can't wait to read the next chapter 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

I can't seem to stop reading

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love Bella's character 

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Love this story.

 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2019 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

good

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Date: 23 Mar 2019 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2019 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella needs help

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2019 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2019 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

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