Date: 28 Aug 2022 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome! I wish there was more. I would love to see what happens with James, Victoria and Jacob.
Date: 27 Jul 2022 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved this story but would have loved to have seen what happened to Jacob and Victoria and James.
Date: 30 Apr 2022 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad E&B got together. Would love to read a bit more on this. Like, what happened to James & Victoria and Jacob. Maybe a future take that covers E&B and what happened to the other characters.
Thank you for posting and sharing your story.
Date: 30 Apr 2022 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT! So glad Jacob, James & Victoria have been found out!
Date: 23 Jan 2022 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love this too.
Date: 12 Dec 2021 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't find my review for chapter 3 and, of course, we'd all love to see what happened to James and Victoria as well as what happens when Edward and Bella return to the "real" world LOL!
Thanks to Joanne at Twifanfictionrecs for the anniversary reminder for this story!
xox Rita
Date: 12 Oct 2021 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
would have loved more
Date: 31 Aug 2021 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
So darn cute!
Now I want to read Karma's twist on this story.
Date: 21 Jun 2021 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Are you going to finish this story
Date: 29 Apr 2021 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Will you continue this story
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 17 Dec 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cool story. Merry Christmas
Date: 01 Aug 2020 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome but would have loved an outtake on what happened to Jacob & how James & Victoria fared.
Date: 19 Dec 2019 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
He called her Bella before he knew her name. Continuity
Date: 28 Oct 2019 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wish it was longer T^T
Date: 03 Sep 2019 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved this...would have liked an E&B lemon! Thanks!
Date: 03 Sep 2019 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this already! Ehat an ass Jacob is!
Date: 28 Aug 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
O.M.G!!
I absolutely LOVE this story!!!!
Can you please, please, please do an outtake of Karma's revenge???
Please, please, please
(And if you are in the mood for, an outtake of Edward and Bella?)
Thanks, I loved this and I'm about to start with your other stories.
Love and Kisses
Date: 04 Aug 2019 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a great story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Date: 27 Jul 2019 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for such heartwarming, cosy story, I just can't remove smile from my face
Date: 19 May 2019 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Such a cute little tale !
I do wish you would do more so we can see how Bella and Edward grow as a couple X
Date: 19 May 2019 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Thank god for fate stepping in ;)
And for cupid getting ready to shoot that arrow ;)
Date: 19 May 2019 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh I loved that last line about fate !
What a unqie story :)
Date: 17 May 2019 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was great thank you
Date: 23 Apr 2019 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it!
Date: 23 Apr 2019 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be fun!
Date: 23 Apr 2019 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the way Fate thinks.
Date: 12 Mar 2019 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
thanks much for sharing this with us, really enjoyed it
Date: 12 Mar 2019 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
me to, wicked wicked thing......
Date: 12 Mar 2019 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
grin, gotta love fate
Date: 06 Feb 2019 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it, thank you for sharing! :)
Date: 13 Jan 2019 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
When will ya update again
Date: 13 Jan 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very cute Christmas story
Date: 09 Jan 2019 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
That turned out really cute. :)
Date: 09 Jan 2019 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dam! Edward had to deal with some scum as well. I'm not so sure about him hopping in that bed naked. Someone is going to get kicked in the balls.
Date: 09 Jan 2019 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Charlie is an ass and a moron for not being on his own daughter;s side of things.... ugh..... Jacob just needs to be put in a haz mat nuit. He sounds nasty. ugh....
Date: 08 Jan 2019 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
What a way to expose such an evil man.
Date: 06 Jan 2019 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great little story, but sure wish we could learn what Karma did to James and Victoria! Maybe a sequel?
Date: 06 Jan 2019 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hope we get to find out how Edward’s family handle Victoria and James like we saw Bella handle the Jacob situation! Love how u had Fate and Cupid work together.
Date: 06 Jan 2019 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the concept of this!
Date: 04 Jan 2019 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting start? Don't you just love when Fate takes a women's side, lol
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Cute story. TY for sharing
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
Women like V give us normal (cough) women horrible names
Date: 04 Jan 2019 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't you love chauvinistic men who think women are not meant for businesses. Her father is a wanker.
Date: 31 Dec 2018 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excited to see where this goes!
Date: 29 Dec 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
It IS a small world and a SMALL cabin too. *Giggles* Perfect ending for these two who deserved lots of happiness after all they’ve been thru. But Karma is gonna get the evil ones. Yay!
You know I never thought about Fate and Karma being sisters. Interesting concept...and makes total sense.
i loved this story! But I say that about all your stories. Hehehe! Thank you for the Christmas present. May your New Year be filled with Blessings Galore for your and yours! Read ya soon. Love you tons! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 29 Dec 2018 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Dang...I don’t know whose story is worse! Victoria and James are like “Bonnie and Clyde” for goodness sakes! I can’t wait to see how The Cullen’s get them. I know they will.
Now as far as Bella waking up to a naked Edward? Ooooo...this is gonna be good! *rubs hands together and waits for Cupid’s arrow to fly by*
I’m thoroughly enjoying this story. Pressing “next”. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 29 Dec 2018 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
The JERKob is beyond a skuzz and hopefully she’s rid of him! YUCK! Now I wonder who’s coming to visit?
Sorry it took so long to get to this. Merry belated Christmas...but I’m still in time to wish you a Happy New Year!
Love you, my Sweetie! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 29 Dec 2018 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
That banner is awesome! Great first chapter! Hope you and yours has a Merry Christmas!
Date: 28 Dec 2018 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was so cute..I'm sorry it's over..I want to know what Karma did๐..well done..I really enjoyed it๐๐๐
Date: 27 Dec 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see what fate has in strore for JAcob, Victoria and James!
Date: 27 Dec 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thank you Heartfortwilight for the Christmas gift.
Blessings and best wishes in 2019-ajfflady
Date: 26 Dec 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Fate strikes again! Poor Edward these two poor people I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. HEA here It comes , I hope.
Date: 26 Dec 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a delightful Christmas gift. I always love your work. I especially like the idea of Fate lending a hand. Jacob was some piece of work.
Great start thank you for writing this.
Date: 26 Dec 2018 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Uuuu I canโt wait to see MRS karma in action
Date: 26 Dec 2018 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, this is good!
Date: 25 Dec 2018 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Would love to see this as a spin-off!!!! *hugs*
Date: 25 Dec 2018 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lovely but I really want to see what happens to the assholes & meeting each others families.
Date: 25 Dec 2018 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
so will you write karma'sstory? I would love to read that one too!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’m very nervous to read this story. I don’t want to get caught up and you don’t finish or put it on a long wait. How many chapters do you think their may be. I’m still waiting for you to finish a couple stories now.
The reviews sounds good with all the positive comments, just a little reluctant to invest again.
Date: 22 Dec 2018 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay... now I see where this is going..
Date: 22 Dec 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 22 Dec 2018 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, wow - Edward certainly has had a bad day!
Don't people do background checks on employees anymore? Hmmm - I guess you don't investigate your college "friends". Nor the woman you fell in love with.
I wonder what Edward and Bella will do when they find out they are sleeping together! Bella must have rolled over to the far side, in order for Edward not to see her. Fun in the morning!
Thanx for sharing! Merry Christmas!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm anxious to see how the wedding guests learned that Edward was a no show.
Date: 22 Dec 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Edward to go through all that!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this :D Its sooo good!!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my lord this just gets better. Will Karma come in to play as well
Date: 22 Dec 2018 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Edward's story is worse than Bella's...not by much, mind you! Can't wait to find out what his family does to James and Victoria! And the mornin' sun is gonna bring a BIG surprise for two complete strangers *heheheh!*
Date: 22 Dec 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
That people like James and Victoria actually exist is too depressin' to contemplate! Can't wait to see what Edward's family does to them...hopefully something wicked that ends in significant jail time!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great.. They will meet next chapter?
Date: 22 Dec 2018 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this story. Can't wait for next update!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this story. Can't wait for next update!
Date: 22 Dec 2018 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love Cupid and Fate.
Date: 22 Dec 2018 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yeah Cupid do what Fate said and start letting those arrows fly. With Cupid in the picture shouldn’t this be a Valentine’s Day kind of fic?? KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘ & MERRY CHRISTMAS ๐ ๐…
Date: 22 Dec 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm pleased that Fate stepped in.
Merry Christmas!
Date: 20 Dec 2018 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 17 Dec 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love the flow of this and I can't wait until your next update
Date: 16 Dec 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. Glad someone showed her Jake's true color before she married him. Cant wait to see how the rest of the story develops.