Date: 31 Dec 2021 11:17 PM Title: Suns Up
A wonderful addition to the original story. Thank you for sharing this.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Just felt it wasn't address and mssdare said to go for it xx
Alexis
Date: 24 Nov 2018 1:29 PM Title: Suns Up
Love the out take. Gives more closure 😊
Author's Response:
Thanks,
glad you like it, mssdare did too I'm glad to say xx
Alexis
Date: 15 Nov 2018 4:36 PM Title: Suns Up
Awesome final fill in for a large unresolved hole for these characters from the original story. Their actions in Sunshine made sense as they were both so traumatized that they needed each other to heal. Your ending fit into the original great story like a very satisfying big puzzle piece that had fallen under the couch.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
that's the nicest way to descibe an outtake thank you so much xx
Alexis
Date: 10 Nov 2018 11:59 PM Title: Suns Up
This was powerful.
Author's Response:
Thanks,
So pleased you enjoyed it xx
Alexis
Date: 10 Nov 2018 11:27 PM Title: Suns Up
I love Sunshine and your ending to her story is just perfectly gruesome for the evil scumbags. I love it. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks,
yes I did enjoy disfiguring Jane lol xx
Alexis
Date: 10 Nov 2018 8:22 PM Title: Suns Up
Loved it great job
Author's Response:
Thanks & Hi,
Glad you liked it, first time I ever wrote something based on another author's work.
mssdare liked it too thank goodness xx
Alexis