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Reviewer: Zamar22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2018 1:29 PM Title: Suns Up

Love the out take.  Gives more closure 😊



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 glad you like it, mssdare did too I'm glad to say xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Motomary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2018 4:36 PM Title: Suns Up

Awesome final fill in for a large unresolved hole for these characters from the original story.  Their actions in Sunshine made sense as they were both so traumatized that they needed each other to heal.  Your ending fit into the original great story like a very satisfying big puzzle piece that had fallen under the couch. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 that's the nicest way to descibe an outtake thank you so much xx

Alexis

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 11:59 PM Title: Suns Up

This was powerful. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So pleased you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 11:27 PM Title: Suns Up

I love Sunshine and your ending to her story is just perfectly gruesome for the evil scumbags.   I love it.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

yes I did enjoy disfiguring Jane lol xx

Alexis

Reviewer: lisa89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 8:22 PM Title: Suns Up

Loved it great job

Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

Glad you liked it, first time I ever wrote something based on another author's work.

mssdare liked it too thank goodness xx

Alexis

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