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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Argumentative (Jasper)

Ok get is together alice!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Forgiveness (Bella)

I'm only hoping you won't kill him off this early in the story. ;)

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Justification (Emmett)

So it seems emmett is a freak in the sheets!! 

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Secrets and Placations (Seth)

I was beginning to wonder if he & emmett had a thing too.

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Seductive Heights (Edward)

Crap!  I was looking forward to hearing from edward.  Bummer

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Two Steps Back (Alice)

Poor alice and jasoer.

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Lost (Bella)

I would like to believe this can't get any crazier but i think you can prove me wrong. And she still wants a kid with her cheating husband???? Granted it seems they both have had their fair share of bed hopping. 

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Up The Creek (Leah)

Ohmgsh!!!!! You just keep shocking me!

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Mistake (Jasper)

Goodness to know she got pregnant from that horrible man. 

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Unwanted (Rosalie)

But will emmett be ok with these other women raising his child?  I don't think so!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up (Jacob)

Not what i was expecting! They all know about each others affairs like it's nothong out of the norm.  Very sad for bella. 

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 5:47 PM Title: Prolegomenon

I'm finally getting to dig into this.  Yikes!  it's going to be messy!! Hooray!!

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Date: 23 Nov 2018 5:23 PM Title: Prolegomenon

I'm finally getting to dig into this.  Yikes!  it's going to be messy!! Hooray!!

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Mocha Latte (Seth)

Hi Jadiona! Loving this story. 

Not sure if it’s a technical thing, but I can’t see chapter 24. Chapter 23 - Mocha Latte (Seth)

 

thanks for your creativity!

Fellow Reader,

Brooke



Author's Response:

Are you still unable to read it? It was working fine when I checked it out

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Donor (Rosalie)

I'm enjoying this soap opera.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reviews

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Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Bandages (Jasper)

They could fill up their own psych ward themselves.

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Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Forgiveness (Bella)

They all have empty shallow lives.

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Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Lost (Bella)

I can't even......

He was just with Leah and now he's going to be with Bella?

I wouldn't wish a child on them for a million dollars.

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Date: 04 Oct 2018 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up (Jacob)

Could they be anymore fucked up?

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2018 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Mistake (Jasper)

my heart just breaks for these broken characters. I look forward to all of their journeys though hopefully to a HEA. hoping that the next update comes soon.

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Date: 16 Sep 2018 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Unwanted (Rosalie)

yea another sad one but I am really enjoying it. angst stories have always been my favorites. not so much of a fluff story kind of girl.  looking foward to all of their journies though hopefully to a HEA .

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2018 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Waking Up (Jacob)

this chapter was so sad but I am sure that they will all be this way. I like yiur writing style. I honestly don't recall the stories that you had up that you removed since its been so long. I pretty much only read stories off of the fanfiction website nowadays and hardly ever off this one. the stories are getting farther and fewer between here but this one has really grabbed my interest . I hope you will be able to continue as I am looking forward to seeing how all of these characters ended up this way in their lives.

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2018 1:42 PM Title: Prolegomenon

I'm excited for this new story. it sounds so good and heatbreaking for sure, I'm hoping that there will be a HEA though?

what will your posting schedule be tough?

 

 

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