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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2019 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 12 ~ Drops on the Floor

Put the venom in a syringe and Edward can inject into Bella. Problem solved. Bella needs to fill Charlie's freezer with food for the future.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2019 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 ~ Drops on the Floor

:)

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2019 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 ~ Drops on the Floor

Edward trying to resist her blood is like me trying to resist peanut brittle or potato chips. Ain't goin' to happen!!!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2019 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 ~ Our Decision

Maybe they finally got through to stubborn Rosalie.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 11 ~ Our Decision

:)

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Change of Plans

Please update and finish this story 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2019 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Change of Plans

Bella will be just fine. She and Edward will outsmart the Volturi and have their happiness.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2019 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Change of Plans

:)

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Date: 26 May 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 ~ Change of Plans

:)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ What Could’ve Been

Damn. I wanted a baby tho.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2019 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ What Could’ve Been

I love how they actually talked and Bella wasn't crazy about the baby situation. I hated that aspect of Twilight and the stupid name. Worse name ever!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2019 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 9 ~ What Could’ve Been

:)

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2018 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ Tick Tock

Edward, what are you up to?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~ Tick Tock

:) 

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Date: 22 Nov 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7 ~ The Importance of Practicing

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Hands of Fate

Damn Ed. Hot.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Hands of Fate

oh my no Baby in Volterra Please. They could be very cruel

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Hands of Fate

:) 

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 ~ The Hands of Fate

Of course he does!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Powerless

ugh

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Powerless

How much do we hate ARo and Jane and Alec and Demetri and........

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 ~ Powerless

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ The Volturi Guard

well if you kill off all the Cullens it will be a short story. :-) Or empty. LOL

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 ~ The Volturi Guard

Oh Jane, you are making a BIG mistake!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 4 ~ The Volturi Guard

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~Who Wants To Live Forever

teary moments here... 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2018 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3 ~Who Wants To Live Forever

did you mean to end it there? "But it was a
What comes next?
Thanks for writing
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out. Not sure how that happened, but it cut off half of the last sentence, which was

“But it was always worth it.”

 

It has been fixed now. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2018 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 3 ~Who Wants To Live Forever

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Supernatural Meeting

Still here

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Supernatural Meeting

Still here

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2018 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 2 ~ Supernatural Meeting

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Pretenders

Nice start. See you next week.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2018 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 ~ The Pretenders

Looking forward to more 

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