Date: 25 May 2023 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it! I don't like Renee!
Date: 23 May 2023 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 23 May 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! I don't like Renee and Peter!
Date: 23 May 2023 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! I don't like Renee!
Date: 18 Aug 2020 8:08 PM Title: Epilogue
Hi good story are you gong to write a sequel to this one or not?
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2020 7:46 PM Title: Epilogue
Great ending as always. Love that B got her degree. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad all their plans are coming together.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Glad Jimmy was able to understand in the end.
Date: 27 Jul 2020 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they let Jake go out with his life. Billy needs to be grateful
Date: 10 Jul 2020 7:18 AM Title: Epilogue
What a happy ending such a great story. Thanks so much
Date: 10 Jul 2020 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
They have came along way
Date: 09 Jul 2020 6:31 PM Title: Epilogue
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! EXCELLENT JOB!!!!! I love your writing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2020 6:18 PM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2020 1:57 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for a wonderful story..I love it..they all got what they wanted..BRAVO!!!WELL DONE
Date: 09 Jul 2020 1:14 PM Title: Epilogue
I have loved this every step of the way!
Congratulations to you!!
Thanks for giving us so much.of your time!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2020 11:10 PM Title: Epilogue
That was a satisfying whopper of an epilogue. Thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us. :)
Date: 08 Jul 2020 8:17 AM Title: Epilogue
That was a lovely ending. I really did not think you would be able to make it work, but somehow you pulled it off and it was good. Great job, i enjoyed these characters and felt like we grew up along side them.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
It's taken a great deal of pain to get to this point. But going legit has been the best decision for everyone.
A trip to visit Jake and his dad would be appropriate.
Date: 24 Jun 2020 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love love love this chapter. Another baby!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2020 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love the glimpses and changes to everyone's lives.... :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Jun 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sadly Bella has a long way to go .
Date: 13 Jun 2020 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am proud of Bella. She seems to be handling things fairly well. She definitely has a good support group.
Date: 13 Jun 2020 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am glad that Edward did not kill Jacob. Loved what he planned for Bella's birthday.
Date: 12 Jun 2020 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella is making slow progress.
Date: 12 Jun 2020 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
I dont blame Edward for wanting to leave the family business. Poor Bella. She does need help. But I know Edward will be there for her.
Date: 11 Jun 2020 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
James took that info a lot better than I thought he would . A new start is what they need
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2020 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella and Edward have a hell of a lot of support. :) Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 May 2020 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
Jacob got a new life instead of no life WOW. I am so glad Bella is not being pushed to be better
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2020 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter and a new begining for everyone. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 May 2020 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
She is on the mend They need the date night
Date: 18 May 2020 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
So sad for Anna but so happy Bella is alive and not volated . It is going to take a long time for Bella to recover.
Date: 18 May 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
Renees death needs to be painful
Date: 18 May 2020 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
Renee is crazy OMG she is going to die and I think Bella will be the one to kill her
Date: 18 May 2020 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
What a great time they had
Date: 17 May 2020 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG to be shot and have a heart attack shit Bella is going to kill him lol. Alice is going to go into labor
Date: 17 May 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Renee and Peter a a pair of shit head OMG
Date: 17 May 2020 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
I thought the cops already had Royce and Stephan?
Date: 17 May 2020 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Poor baby girl I am so happy them assholes are dead
Date: 17 May 2020 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Alice wants her horseradish lol. Renee is a piece of work
Date: 16 May 2020 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 11
A sham wow too lol
Date: 16 May 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
Maas is out of his mind OMFG
Date: 16 May 2020 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think they both see each other for what they are.
Date: 16 May 2020 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love where ever you lead love this story
Date: 16 May 2020 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
He is a good man even is he kills some lol
Date: 15 May 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
He did that for his family
Date: 14 May 2020 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
It is good Edward is use to blood lol
Date: 14 May 2020 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
So glad that fight club is done and that prick is dead.
Date: 14 May 2020 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Renee is something else OMG
Date: 14 May 2020 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Renee just needs to disaper
Date: 14 May 2020 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the paint in the face lol
Date: 14 May 2020 3:04 AM Title: Prologue
Iam diving in so excited
Date: 14 May 2020 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can't blame E for thinking of walking away.... but I'd be afraid of people coming after them since they'd not be in the family business.
Date: 14 May 2020 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can't blame E for thinking of walking away.... but I'd be afraid of people coming after them since they'd not be in the family business.
Date: 14 May 2020 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Everyone has alot of healing to do.
Date: 14 May 2020 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
aww poor Ana. was hoping she'd make it. Reneegot off so easy.
Date: 13 May 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great update!
Date: 13 May 2020 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
So hope Renee doesn't get an easy death. Psycho indeed
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
So many steps forward for Bella's emotional and physical healing, then a few steps back or maybe sideways.... Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 06 May 2020 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella has a long road ahead of her. Jake is Def a question to be pondered.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2020 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella definitely needs a woman who is familiar with things to help her. And she needs a new ring that isn't sullied by her bitch of an incubator. He old one needs to be melted down. ugh....
Jacob did help in the end, but I don't know if anyone will ever trust him again. hmmm.... I like Nessie though.
I'm heart broken about Leah being tramautized and put in a center. I understand Sue and Bella being angry about that.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Apr 2020 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad Edward got to Bella before she could e sexually abused.
Date: 16 Apr 2020 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm tired. This chapter was intense
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2020 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Will Miguel and his family be saved or in the story after this chapter? I hope so.
I'm so sad about the way Ana died. She was so brave and helpful to a complete stranger Bella. I think Bella will be devastated about HER death. I don't think she will give a shit about Renee, Ricardo and his men's deaths.
Although Bella will probably be upset about not being able to lift little Charlie, and that baby won't understand why. I'm crying just thinking about it.
Jake finally helped Bella by flying the helicopter and shooting the rapist and the evil snatch. But will it be enough for Edward? It probably will be for Bella. She really cares for everyone.
Hopefully this whole thing doesn't set Edward back in HIS recovery.
I can see Edward's and Felipe's organizations having an even closer alliance now. Estaban did help, he is just grumpy. ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 14 Apr 2020 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
It's not Edwards fault Renée was a crazy bitch who wanted to hurt her daughter. He got rid of Maas. Now Renée is dead so hopefully they can get on with their lives now.