Date: 04 Nov 2019 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok, Alice needs to chill. Just because you are pregnant doesn't mean you can't control yourself of be stupid. Alice has been in the family long enough to report strange behavoir. Edward just raised his voice because Alice was acting stupid not reporting the incident, as he should.
Date: 01 Nov 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm actually jealous of your characters sexy times. LOL. They were smoking hot. Then they shifted into comfortable couple. :)
I'm happy they are ALL aware of Renee and Maas working together now.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Oct 2019 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok I must get this out... no doctor ever “needs” to do an episiotomy. That’s like asking for your patient to tear, and it’s barbaric. Four natural kids delivered, so I’m knowledgeable, promise. It just irritates the life out of me when I even read about it. Sorry.
Date: 14 Sep 2019 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Sweet Charlie was not liking being passed around one little bit. :) The idea of Jasper holding him though for practice was sweet.
I loved the sexy times between Edward and Bella. ;) Their new nanny seems very competent.
I want to give Liam a hug for having such a shitty father. Bella's mother is equally as shitty, but now it seems like Peter Maas might be even more unhinged than Renee. I wonder why he is so enamored of the now dead asshole Royce King. hmmm.....
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Aug 2019 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thank you for the update..Well done..I'm so happy for them..let's hope it stays this way..I'm sure Renee is coming back with a vengeance..lol..uncle Jimmy is ready for her...lol..I'm happy Leah got to hold Charlie..Alice and Jasper are expecting..YAY!!!..I love Carlisle and Esme together..happy grandparents 😙😍
Date: 16 Aug 2019 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad E is talking things out. I can understand his issues. While I didn't kill people, I had a hard time reconciling going to work and being a mpm. Take the nanny. Wish I had one. Being able to take a bath or a nap is a godsend.
Date: 02 Aug 2019 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward really is a good man, but there are bad people out there. The police can't take care of some things due to laws. If Edward wasn't incharge of the city, people like Stephan and Royce would be. Edward has honor and only kills bad people, not innocents. He is actually keeping the world safer for his child.
Date: 31 Jul 2019 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward did a good thing getting rid of that scum. But I would have a hard time reconciling those events with parenting as well. I'm also afraid that some of Amun's goons who didn't arrive at the club might know of Amun's plans and retaliate against Edward. Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 28 Feb 2019 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
So very glad that you have started on this sequel!! I loved 'Married to the Mob' and cannot wait to see where you go with this sequel!! Keep the chapters coming, please don't not finish this story.
Thank you. Looking forward to reading new chapters soon!! Take care
Date: 08 Dec 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Peter is a dumb ass for trusting raping Royce and for sleeping with skanky Renee. Ewwwww is right. Gross!! I do hope that Edward, Bella and company are smart enough to watch out for the skank and other foes.
Happy to read more of this story and glad you feel like writing again. :)