Date: 24 Sep 2021 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Are you going to write anymore to this story? TTFN!
Date: 29 Feb 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
So far has been great, hope this continues.
Date: 02 Jan 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story so far! Can't wait for other chapters
Date: 09 Aug 2019 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow that scene was kick ass loved her going out fighting and that she was able to actually cause harm. Wth is that sword made of to cause damage. She will be bad ass as a Bamp as she remembers it all.
Date: 09 Aug 2019 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this for the most part some parts are sort of troubling to me but I’m willing to see where you go with this in your story. The idea that Bella who is so independent now and a warrior in her own right would have to treat Peter as her Master or submit to him is frustrating. The idea of him breaking her to teach her her place make me want to throw something. I really hope she will be some exception I’m all for a dominant male but not the extent I am seeing here. The idea of men in their world taking their mates unconscious especially her since she don’t know and while attracted to him wouldn’t be ready for that with him. It seems sort of rapey to me and it’s uncomfortable. Again looking to see where you go with this a bit atleast,
Date: 09 Aug 2019 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow that scene was kick ass loved her going out fighting and that she was able to actually cause harm. Wth is that sword made of to cause damage. She will be bad ass as a Bamp as she remembers it all.
Date: 11 Jan 2019 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting twist to the traditional twilight turnings. Seems like mixing of twilight & true blood
Date: 11 Jan 2019 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Cannot wait to read more. Please update again soon.
Date: 11 Jan 2019 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it. Cannot wait to read more. Please update again soon.
Date: 18 Nov 2018 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love me some Peter! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Nov 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm well at least she went out swinging
Date: 11 Nov 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm interesting start. Wonder how long until he learns of the Cullens involvement
Date: 10 Nov 2018 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope you update quickly. Good two chapters
Date: 09 Nov 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
A little far out there that she went from mousy to bad ass so fast but I like peter. Looking forward to see where this goes. Hopefully she learns Peter is on her side fast.
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dam! That's the definition of 'they should have talked more'. Neither 1 knew things they should have. But I loved this chapter and your kick ass Bella.
Date: 12 Sep 2018 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to another Bella/Peter story to read. I love when they are equal bad asses. I can't wait to see what you write with them. :)
Date: 30 Aug 2018 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
love your peter story...great beginning!