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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2019 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love the rabbit holes .  That last chapter put tears in my eyes with happeness so sweet and cant wait for what is next

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2019 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 30

makes me want to cry so perfect

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2019 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bellas mom wants to get her hands on some money.  Love the school and the baby anouncment 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 28

He is doing good now I am so glad he has pulled his head out of his ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

So happy he is getting it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella is so brave and should kick his ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

He needs his ass kicked and then pulled his head out of his ass.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 24

OH no they didnt OMG not the baby

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

So glad they got that out of the way and Rose is just being mean Emmett needs to come back

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 22

He just cant help himself.  I am very proud of him and his speech

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

Rose will not be able to resist Emmett

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 20

They all needed that Now Edward is on his way to growing up.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is right but she just through him under the bus OMG

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

That was perfect for them loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2019 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love Emmett so much. Rose is in shock 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2019 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Bella will hold her oun against Rose.  Emmett is coming cant wait

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

In her face lol Rose is not nice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2019 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

They have a lot of things to work out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

They have a lot of things to work out.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

His parents are in shock

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

She took that a lot better than I thought lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am so excited to see how she will handle going home with the prince

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow that is a shocker for him but he will stand by her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

He is not going to let her go

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Now things are going the right way

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

He is about to crawl in a hole and bury himself.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

one step forward almost two steps back.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

lol he has it bad

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2018 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 31

Great story.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31

Thank you for a lovely story!!Well done ..can't wait for sequel 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 31

Nice. I am surprised Renee didn't cause more trouble

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

Omg love your story can't wait to read more! Thank you for writing a wonderful story 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

Finance- managing money 

Fiance- Your betrothed 

There is still a chance the baby will not have this. Like I said earlier, my daughters came back positive and then the baby was born without Downs.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2018 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

For anyone about to freak out, I see many similarities to that of Twilight Edward.  Also, there have been MANY misdiagnosis when it comes to this.  The doctor, the lab, timing of the test.  I have had three friends to be told this and of the three, only one was accurate.  I say we do away with the doctor.  The main reason being to assume that they would just kill the child because he recommended it.  What is his gain in this?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

I think he needs a few more slaps

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

Bella needs to give Edward a break. She is so not perfect herself, but he has been held up to that expectation his whole life. She should have looked for him. She talks about being a strong person, but she didn't do anything either. Edward doesn't get to feel the baby. It is still an abstract idea to him as it is to all father's early on in  the pregnancy. He needs another ultrasound so he can see the baby. As someone who does ultrasound for a living, the 20 week ultrasound is when the father bonds with the child and sees it is truly a real baby. They will also find out if there are other abnormalities they will need to deal with at delivery.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 23

Edward is risking so much for Bella. She needs to stop whining and work hard. Most of all she needs to stop threatening to leave. She has to remember she got herself in this mess by acting stupid at a party that Edward tried to save her from herself. She is lucky that he is a good guy and loves her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

I don't trust Doctor Molina.  He seems to have already decided for them 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2018 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 23

READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2018 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella needs to stop being over sensitive about everything. I can't stand al her chastizing. She is far from perfect herself. I could list all her faults. She gets all pouty if Edward mentions her clumsiness. She just needs to love him faults and all because that is what he does to her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Edward needs to trust himself. He is a good person and will be a great king.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

I think they have a lot to work out .

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is having a shit day OMG but she still has a heart

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

lol love Jasper .  Poor Edward what is he going to do lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2018 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

So much fun and real life. Good job

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

for all the parents royal and domestic. Thank you for the repair to their relationship.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2018 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2018 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2018 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is being the peacemaker, but she still needs to be her self. Edward needs to stand up and be the Prince during the day and Bella's Edward at night. He needs to stop complaining. He was right though for letting Bella see the town. The Queen was being crazy demanding Bella not see the light of day. Bella needs to stay loyal to Edward and not play sides with his parents. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2018 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Has Bella not even thought of the STD's she could have picked up from her sexcapades.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Why didn't she just take the morning after pill? Now she is pregnant from anybody int he frat. How stupid is Bella?

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

thank you for the update ...I'm happy Bella go to see a little of the town..until you post again

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

I WOULD HATE TO SEE BELLA TURNING TO THE DARK SIDE. (he he he) 

READ YOU SOON    : )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

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Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

Finally

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update. .,well done.,Emmett  is to funny..Rosalie was shock to say the least. Can wait for them to be with Edwards parents..lol..until you post again 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update. .,well done.,Emmett  is to funny..Rosalie was shock to say the least. Can wait for them to be with Edwards parents..lol..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

They seem to be moving forward a little.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

EDWARD HAS NO IDEA THAT SENDING FOR EMMETT WILL EVENTUALLY TAME THE WILD BEAST (ROSALIE)  MANY MORE LAUGHS TO LOOK FORWARD TOO. 

READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

OH! NO!! YOU!!! DIDN'T!!!!!   : O    You left us with our tongues on the floor!!!  Wanting more!  Meanie!!!! (he he he) I Like that Bella stood up to Rosalie I'd like for her to continue holding her own.  edward tellig Rosalie she was no longer second in line was PRICELES!!!

READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fun times are just begining cant wait

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

thank you for the update...well done.. Edward is to funny...Rosalie not to happy!!! lol

until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2018 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2018 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: trojangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love this story and Happy Birthday to you. Thanks for writing.  I assume since based on chapter 1 that they either never have a boy or they never have more children. Guess I will have to wait and see!

 

Reviewer: mysticfighter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2018 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Happy birthday and lots of sleep-ins ;)
Bella has all the right to freak out. Edward is just as unprepared coming home as he was coming to the States.

Reviewer: imloki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2018 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

Happy b day!!! You have me on the edge of my seat

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2018 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 12

:) Happy Birthday 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Damn Alice..Thank you for the update well done..until you post again

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2018 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Knew that was coming

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope to read more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2018 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

He is killing me. Tell the truth already.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 9

I can't wait until he tells her he's a prince lol!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Keep on writing, faster please

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Alright Me Bella...I'm spedchless...I love it..Well done..until you post again 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm glad she's not blaming Edward.  He tells her she needs to live life and it's unfortunate it was the anniversary of her father's death.  She's the one who decided that meant a frat party, alcohol and a random creep.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2018 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella's issues are not all on Edward's head. She needs to face her fears and actually talk to someone. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2018 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2018 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward. He is actually doing well with the changes. He needs to set up a calendar and get his work done. Jasper also needs to pay his own way. He should buy the next groceries since Edward paid for all of it the first time. Dad should pay Jasper back for the books, since he said he would pay for school. Edward needs to ignore Bella and concentrate on school. This would impress her more than other things.

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