Date: 05 Dec 2018 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter I don’t know how this story slipped from me reading it be for last week when I have read mostly all you stories
I love how you developed Edward,Emma and Bella’s relationship and I also like how you had Edward call out her family on making her comfortable
Author's Response:
Thank You! I am happy that you have found this story of mine. It makes so happy!
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
Sounds like Charlie is an awesome dad
Date: 19 Nov 2018 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
nice story so far.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Keep on writing, sooner
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
The bitch is going to be very sorry she ever messed with him after the Cullens get through with her.
Date: 16 Nov 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
So happy he has the Cullen family to support and protect he and Emma.
Date: 16 Nov 2018 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
He has to have hope.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2018 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm happy that Edward abd little Emma have more support than just Bella. All of the family is going to be needed to fight that evil harpy. ugh......
Date: 03 Nov 2018 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh my the Tanya fight.
Date: 02 Nov 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
Glad he had a good time with the guys Sadly too many courts decide based on gender not what is right for the child with women getting the nod mist often
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2018 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
I'm with Bella on her decree......
Date: 01 Nov 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Let him stay in country.... I'll be happy to send the bitch packing! Lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2018 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
What judge really thinks its a good idea for Anya to have visitation? Or is it just her lawyer padding his fee?
Date: 22 Oct 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yea sadly people do feel like men can't be abused. MeToo applies to them as well.
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Yes! Thank You that is very true. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2018 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
WOW THAT WAS BAD AND GOOD AT THE SAME TIME
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Date: 22 Oct 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Domestic abuse is horrible no matter who does the abusing.
Author's Response:
Yes it, its horrific. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 19 Oct 2018 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great update!!! Thank you so much!
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 19 Oct 2018 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
He is getting stronger every day so happy for him. I hope Bella sees how he is feeling about her
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Everyday! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2018 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
That would be horrific to live thru, see and get past.
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Yes, horrid, thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2018 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
He has really been through the wringer.
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Yes he has.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew he was going to be the sweetest!! Now i'm wondering when they bump into jake & leah will edward play it up and kiss her to act as her boyfriend?
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2018 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yes i loved bella and she put that old bitty in her place!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2018 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor allister! Bella is going to want to hunt tanya down.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2018 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is going to be her mush monster when they finally get together. And lets go ahead and remove jake's balls!
Date: 01 Oct 2018 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
They both have a lot to work through. I do agree about the Sara part, but not the forgiving J and L
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I dont think there is any forgivness for them. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2018 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
keep on writing
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I will thank you!
Date: 28 Sep 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that would be hard to get through. Leah and jake made a bed Sara did nit deserve
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Thank you for reading and reveiwing.
Date: 28 Sep 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
So sweet!!
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Date: 28 Sep 2018 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
He is the best I just love him .
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I know me too! Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
Think he might be just a mite smitten.
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Just a bit ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Sep 2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aww Edward soo sweet of him to get the family together without Jacob and Leah
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It was super sweet. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
For having so many issues himself, Edward is really helpful about Bella's problems and vice versa too.
Author's Response:
Some times people with the biggest hurdles help other the most.
Date: 24 Sep 2018 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Miss Cindy is lucky she still has a face what a bitch. Bella is such a good person and will do anything for Edward and Emma
Author's Response:
She is semi lucky. Im sure she lost her job. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing
Date: 23 Sep 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Bella was there to help him.
Author's Response:
I know. They support they show each other is amazing. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hell yes I would be a bitch to that old hag dam it I love how slowly but steady they are forming a friendship my heart breaks for Bella’s pain I just want to hug her
Author's Response:
Yes slow and steady wins the race in my humble opinion. Thank you for reading amd reviewing.
Date: 23 Sep 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
So Bella has lost a child. Explains her taking time with other peoples children
Author's Response:
Yes. She loves kids. Thank you for reading reviewing
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
That first tour lady was bitchy, rude and stupid. Ugh....
Author's Response:
She was horrid. No worries pretty sure she lost her job 😉 Thank you for reading amd reviewing
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2018 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
So much pain for the three of them to work thruogh.
Author's Response:
Yes. But they will get there. Thank you for reading amd reviewing!
Date: 19 Sep 2018 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella and Edward are both so broken and will only be whole when they realize they need each other. They have made their own little family.
Date: 19 Sep 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
No wonder Bella doesn't want to go home. He should not be included in family dinners. Leah should pack up as well. What jerks?
Date: 15 Sep 2018 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just want to hug both Bella and Edward
Date: 15 Sep 2018 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like the slow burn. I do really like how they are completing each other without realizing it.
Date: 14 Sep 2018 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
It is so sad the way people treat the ones they say they love.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
That would be so horrible to go through and I imagine so much worse to get over.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2018 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think it is only get to worse for awhile while Edward is in therapy and group. I'll buy tissues at Costco this week so I'm ready!
Date: 13 Sep 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, Sounds like E's had a really rough time of it. Medication for a short period sounds like a good idea.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
That betrayal brought tears to my eyes!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this
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Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Sep 2018 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Interesting family dynamic. Is Jacob faithful to Leah?
Author's Response:
I guess only time will tell. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jake is still being Jake, an ass!
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Yep, Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Sep 2018 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awww Bella can I kick Jacobs ass please and Leah how could she do that to her step sister jay Edward Alistair and Emma for Helping Bella feel better
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Date: 07 Sep 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
Leah and jake how could you attend family function with them their and really how could loving family do that to you
Author's Response:
Very complicated situation Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Sep 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think that was pretty cold hearted of them to anounce that to her like that. She feels so comfortable with Edward already
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[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think it would br horrible to have to deal with and see your cheating ex so regularly. And for her family to just expect her to deal with that shit is cruel.
Author's Response:
She really doesnt this was her first family function in two years. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2018 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think it would br horrible to have to deal with and see your cheating ex so regularly. And for her family to just expect her to deal with that shit is cruel.
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Date: 06 Sep 2018 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow now I really hate Jake and Leah. If the miscarriage was the reason the weren't together I would feel sympathy for him, but cheating on her that way..... Sooo not cool at all.
Author's Response:
No its not. Thank You for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Sep 2018 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
They make each other normal and things are easy
Date: 05 Sep 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward has found people that will stand with him. What papers did Bella sign.
Date: 05 Sep 2018 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
He was doing so good OMG Help him please
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
These are huge baby steps for edward!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm so glad they stayed the night & we got some info from emma.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
I was so worried someone was going to touch him.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you started something new!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2018 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting storyline, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2018 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward and Bella both need a hug. Little Emma is trying to hug them both up since they are so timid with each other, huh?
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
Two very broken souls.
Date: 30 Aug 2018 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. Guessing there is a miscarriage story in there somewhere. Glad E felt comfortable enough to help her out that way.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is so good for Edward and Emma.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG what have they gone through.
Date: 27 Aug 2018 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Edward has been through a lot it seems. Poor thing, men get abused too.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2018 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I felt so horrible for Edward. It seems like Emma is getting over or healing faster from their 'trauma' faster than he is. Bella has sure made an impression on both of them. But Emma mostly.
Date: 24 Aug 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great cheaper!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
I just read all 4 chapters over at ffn and had to review here as well to let you know I am totaly enjoying reading this new gem.
READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 24 Aug 2018 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow. Loved the chapter. Worried about Edward.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love this storyline so far.
Date: 20 Aug 2018 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
What a rude woman! How dare she just sit in someones lap. I hate that woman think they can just touch men without permission. If a man does it with a woman, they sue for sexual harassment. Sorry pet peeve.
Date: 18 Aug 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bless his heart!
Date: 17 Aug 2018 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad he went out . Sucks that woman had to ruin it
Date: 17 Aug 2018 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
can;t wait for more
Date: 17 Aug 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Aww poor Edward I love both sides of bells
Date: 17 Aug 2018 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh boy! Anxiety piqued just like Edwards.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
He makes my heart hurt.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2018 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am really getting the feeling that something horrible happened to Edward. It's making me uneasy.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel so bad for Edward and Emma. I can't imagine what damaged this strong man.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hug him yes.....help him heal and grow a back bone...for sure!
Date: 11 Aug 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
I want to know what's happened to them all. Great chapter.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hard to review with so much information missing.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hard to review with so much information missing.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE :)
Date: 09 Aug 2018 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
That really sounds like a scary Bella poor emmet I am super intrigued about Edward and Emma what horrible things could have left such damage to both of them
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2018 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Edward and Emma seem scared to death. Although Emma seems to be coping better than Edward at this point.
Date: 09 Aug 2018 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow you are really ramping up for some agnst when we finally get to their backstories.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Story sounds interesting. I feel so bad for Edward. I don't think of him being scared of his own shadow. Can't wait for more to figure him out.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2018 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm only wondering now who between Edward and Bella has the most traumatic past. hmmmm...... Hopefully they can heal each other. I love the twist on the last names.
Author's Response:
Thank you, when this little plot bunny came to me, that is how they introduced themselves lol. thank you for reading and reviewing!