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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

None of them would belive Edward was guilty . 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good ol Emmett putting his foot in his mouth. Looking forward to the next chapter (:

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Emmett is sticking his foot in it huh?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Bella.  The Chief is going to make sure those morons don't make the same mistake again.  E is so good with her.  LOL for the nickname reveal.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2018 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

I really liked seeing Edward and Bella bonding more. Edward should trust the school gang enough to confide in them.

Sherry

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12

I just started this yesterday and I'm sad that I'm all caught up already. I'm enjoying this story, I hope that updates are frequent! If I remember correctly a violation of parole isn't viewed hatshly if it's done to protect those at large. So while Edward won't get off easy he also won't be sent back to prison. Poor Bella, I hope that this doesn't shake her faith. 

I'm liking the steady pace of this story it moves at a gentle pace rather than a 1x fast forward or more. Feels good. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2018 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

I think with Charlie there it will clear up quickly.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2018 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

That station is in deep deep shit OMG.  Edward is so worried about Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wonder how many cops are going to go down for this stupidly.  Morons. Glad e got there in time to help B. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Hey!!! Holy moly....heads would DEFINITELY  be rolling!!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

glad the chief showed up 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2018 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

There are enough criminals in the world.  I hate when cops are bad too.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

love this charlie

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope Charlie makes the arresting officers pay for their cock up 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2018 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

this was a really great chapter! i loved it so much! i love how protective bella is of edward and vice versa. I loved how Charlie acted when he arrived and that the DA arrived and is good with Charlie and Bella. Can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully Edward won't be sent back to jail.

Reviewer: Motomary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Love this story. I am a recent reader of ‘Twilight’ character fanfics and glad I found this story.  It really has a lot going for it in showing how the right support and caring can have a positive effect on the healing process for our protagonists.  Thanks for the great story. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Nice chapter.  Glad he is happier and that they both are talking about some hard things

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

He feels like he belongs so cool.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2018 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward seems to be fitting in.  AAAAWWWWW

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2018 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Edward is gaining so much confidence. Bella is good for him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

good

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2018 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Great progress!!!!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is so sweet. They need to clear his name. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

He is going to be the hardest working friend he will take care of her :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is so sweet.  He is going full out with helping Bella.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Ugh Lauren and her mom are just to creepy.  Glad he and Bella are friends  Smartof him asking for advice about her medical condition and exercise

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

no chapter

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2018 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

i'm really liking this story so far. cant wait for more. 

Reviewer: IsaWild Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2018 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loving the story so far!

But pleeease, when is Edward going to fall for Bella?

:)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2018 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good story, keep writing

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2018 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting storyline

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2018 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

She will probably say there is no way you did that, which is true. Edward should be able to get tuition assisstance from the state. 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2018 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 9

DUM DA DUM!!!!!! 

READ YOU SOON   : o

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the update..Well done..I'm happy Edward feels  goo d about tuneing the musical instruments. .I wonder  what Ms.rs. Cope  was thinki my about..maybe hiring Edward...although I'm not sure he can..hopefully  his innocence will come out soon and Edward will get reparations. (A big settlement)..until you post again 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2018 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Glad Charlie is in his corner.  I think something is going to happen with Cheney again and they'll try to blame it on E again.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 9

I am so excited that he is so comfortable with her that he told her OMG she knows he is innocent.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think it can only be good that they are both opening up to each other.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2018 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8

Edward needed to get his feelings out so he can heal. Ben Cheney needs to go down and Charlie will help Edward accomplish this task. Edward needs his name cleared.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

I just want to give Edward a hug. I hope one day he will be exonerated.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2018 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well that def explains Charlie's involvement.  Glad E has someone on his side. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2018 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

Charlie is a good man and is a great friend to Edward and his mother now Edward just needs to let him be his friend.  I love it but my heart broke for his mother again.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2018 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8

WOW!!!! SO CHARLIE  WILL BE THE KEY TO CLEARING HIS NAME AND BELLA WILL BE THE ONE TO FILL HIS HEART..... THAT'S WHAT I'LL  HOPE FOR AND LOOK FORWARD TOO. 

           READ YOU SOON : )

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Edward, he probably feels more at peace and sadder at the same time.  I wonder if Bella will be upset that Charlie told Edward so much of her story.  Hmmm....

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2018 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2018 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow  what a bitch Jessica is.  Glad they are getting to know each other better and E has an outlet for his aggression.  Was ROTFL with tasering Em

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 7

good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2018 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Bella and Edward are so good for each other.

Sherry

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

I APPRECIATE A LONGER MORE INFORMATIVE CHAPTER.  THERE'S ALOT OF HURT AND PAI THAT THESE TWO SHARE.  I NOW FEEL SAD BUT LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. 

             READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

He thinks he does not want to belong to these people but his heart knows he already belongs to them as much as they belong to him. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

They make little steps of progress, but they are both just so dam sad.   I'm sdad too now.  :(    Really good chapter.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm wondering if Bella's accident caused her to fall behind in school.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2018 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2018 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 6

I think they are helping each other little by little.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like Charlie is a pretty standup guy 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

Asshole!!!!! He's such a guy. So Bella is 19 and legal has been hurt...hmmm! something in common... kinda. 

READ YOU SOON

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

He just cant get pasted the idea that they may like having him around.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

Looks like bella will be key to keeping Edward's anger & anxiety away. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think Edward and Bella have a little more in common than they think.

Sherry

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Edward needs human contact and a friend whether he wants it or not.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think that was a great start to a wonderful friendship. I think that Bella's mom was murdered and Bella seen it all and was hurt buy who ever killed her mom.???

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Those 2 talking together but not discussing either of their own lives is a good starting point for them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

: )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2018 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad they are getting along.  Wow  Charlie didn't have an issue with him going to her meadow.  That surprises me a bit.   I do like the bullying stance.  Too bad many other places dont

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

He broke her heart OMG .

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2018 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward can not understand why anyone wants to be around him why does he think he is so bad besides prison.  What happened to Bella?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

He has no clue how to act as a free man.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

My heart is breaking for Edward but he is in a good place now

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edward is so socially awkward as is Bella. They do fine when they are alone. Edward needs to invite her to the meadow to talk.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward's past is horrible enough, but I worry that Bella's may be worse or eqyally as bad.  And it may be ongoing.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well Bella can take a hint.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

Those two both hava a lot of issues.  Too bad Charlie hasn't taught her to defend herself.  

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

 Poor fool he's gonna have to make things right or the guilt is gonna keep eating at him. 

      READ YOU SOON   : )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

good. feel bad for b. really wonder what her back story is

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor edward nothing like burning that bridge. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

He is very very slowly getting more more acclimated.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

How old it Bella? I hope Edward goes to Emmett's house for the game. It is a big step.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

I just feel so bad for him. He has to relax and open up or he will explode.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella. I say that alot reading twlight fanfiction. This time Edward is not a billionaire ready to help her out.  Thank you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3

It seems like so many of your characters need a hug.  :)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2018 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

I didn't expect Bella to be a student, but that could be a sticky situation if he does train her. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sadly there are too many Lauren's in the world. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2018 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very intrigued...... Ready for more!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love the progress. I can feel his sadness and hopelessness. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think we just met bella! Hopefully the anxiety meds will help him.

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