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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2019 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 22

Cheney is not innocent I think he is a good actor and Emmett is just seeing what he wants to see.  I love how close Esme and Edward are getting just dont let anything happen to Esme Please because I think that Cheney will do something to her to set Edward up again?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2019 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2019 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

glad he has alice

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2019 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

I don't trust Emmett's relationship with Cheney. Edward better be careful. I think Cheney knows more than he is saying. Glad that at least Rose will have his back. 

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2019 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks for this chapter :-)

I think Emmet believes Cheney too much ... he's totally wrapped in by him.

And in my opinion it def. was Cheney himself who attacked his wife ...

Hopefully everybody will realize it very soon ... including authorities ... have him removed and ideally Edward cleared and compensated.

looking forward to the next chapter.

Greetings form Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2019 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

Emmett is too gullible and Cheney has him bamboozled.   I am disgusted that Emmett seems to believe Cheney over Edward.  ugh.....     

Esme and Edward's conversation was sweet.    As was Edward's dinner with the Whitlock's.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved the esme and edward bonding time

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Cheney is a bully, Emmett seems to be the only one who can't see it 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

Think that Em is not really giving e a real chance.  He's defending Ben too much. Hope Mary gets better soon 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Every bit I read about Edward's life before prison is heartbreaking. Cheney is the devil; pure evil. I have no doubt he was the one that attacked Angela and made sure Edward took the fall. He's the type of teacher that has no business around kids. He has no compassion or empathy. I'm kinda pissed at Emmett for falling for Cheney's BS. The people Emmett knows to be level-headed and honest to God good people get uneasy vibes from Cheney. Emmett should trust their opinions on Cheney; clearly he's not a good judge of character.

Why do I get the feeling this outting with Esme is the calm before the storm for Edward?

Sherry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2019 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ben is going to bit off more than he is going to be able to control the people will not let him be a bully. Edward is just a mess so worried about everyone.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2019 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

Can Cheney just be kicked out and banned from being apart of schooling at all?

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2019 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

Love it. Updated soon

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2019 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

So thinking that everyone needs a tape recorder to record all this BS Ben is pulling.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

Cheney needs to go . Edward went to the grocery store. How is that seeking her out? Cheney is just crazy. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2019 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ooohhhh, Cheney is an ASS!!!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Cheney isn't making any friends. I really hope Cheney trips himself up sooner rather than later and every one finds out the truth. Mary needs to return from recovery quicker too so she can squash Cheney's BS. Charlie's probably one hair's width away from throttling Cheney.

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

This Cheney dude is a douche to everyone.    He is showing it too.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2019 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2019 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

Cheney is no good, keep on writing

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2019 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2019 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMG I do not trust Ben even a little he is going to try to set Edward up?  My heart is just breaking for him and Bella but it is good they have the town behind them other than Tanya.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2019 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

I feel so bad for Edward and Bella. I don't trust Cheney. I'm glad that Edward is recording all of their interactions. He needs to remember he has friends this time. 

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 20

If I go with my guts, Cheney will do whatever it takes to make Edward and Bella look as bad people. But everyone except Tanya and Lauren knows better, they will be his alleys in this plot to tuck up our favorite couple.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2019 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

nice update

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

Psychopaths are great manipulators, even of themselves, but if and big IF he didn't beat his wife idk why he couldn't accept the facts. Why he wouldn't ask for a full investigation, and like anyone who beat someone else half to death would have raw hands or cuts and bruising from the person defending themselves even if it were minor. F Cheney either way. I want him gone from this story he's too much and my heart cannot deal 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2019 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

Edward is doing the right thing. As for Cheney, great actor or is Jaspers alternative correct? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2019 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 20

Yep, Edward needs to keep his distance from Bella. At least until Cheney is gone.

Sherry

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2019 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

Alice needs to catch Cheney!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

That Ben dude is one sick fucker.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Edward .  I don't trust Cheney 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

He will try to get Edward in trouble or set him up but every one that actually matters to Edward knows who he is a lot of people will act the same as tanya but they will see the truth in do time

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2019 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sadly I agree with him distancing himself.  Cheney is a snake.  Hope E and B will be ok

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2019 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

OMFG NOOOOOOO not him Edward is going to lose his shit or Bella will.  Charlie will not let this stand and the super is an ass.    So happy Mary is OK.  Esme is the best for buying Edward so sweet

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2019 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bruh wtf

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2019 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 19

I can't believe it. Edward better go to Charlie asap.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2019 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

yikes

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2019 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 19

What a cluster tucf for Edward, I hope he asks the chief for a relocation. It is a bad thing for our favorite couple if Cheney is there to make Edward's life a living hell again.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2019 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

nice update

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2019 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

O snap. So good 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2019 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome chapter.  Glad Mary came out ok and E took her to see Mary.

Ugh guessing Caius and Ben are in on it together.  Wonder how long it will take for Ben to fire or harm E.  Sadly I think they will try and use Bella in whatever they have planned.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2019 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh hell no....  this is giving me awful flashbacks to horrible administrators that I had to deal with in my teaching career.    Ugh....   poor everyone. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Edward.  He needs to tell Charlie 

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Omg noooo!!!!!! This sucks :( I really love this story hurry update!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

OH holy hell!!!! I did not see THAT coming.

Sherry

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2019 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

Sorry but how in the H—l is he in the same ara as Edward???

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2019 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

nice story so far.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2019 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

awww poor Ms Cope

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2019 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

awww poor Ms Cope

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2019 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hope Bella buys Edward tbh. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

This has been a very organic relationship, slowly growing step by step. They are perfect for each other. They just need to wait a few months and Edward needs to talk to Charlie for his own piece of mind. He needs to know it is alright with Charlie.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

I am so happy that Mary will be OK so glad Edward was so cool .  I think they are about to cross the line.

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2019 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

I love this story. They are progressing as a normal couple should. Keep the story going.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 18

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Mary. She needs to pull through, too many people rely on her. At least Edward is acknowledging his relationship with Bella is more than just friendship. I'm wondering if Bella realiizes it too.

Sherry

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

So he does realize it!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2019 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

So he does realize it!!!

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2019 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG, you didn't! I think Bella fell from the stairs and Edward is calling because he was near her at the moment.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2019 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

They are so cute. I love them with Little Bear. I hope nothing is too bad. They don't need anymore drama.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2019 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG what is going on help help help.  Charlie loves Edward and knows he is good for Bella.  Everyone sees the love between Bella and Edward I wish school would get out soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aww for the dog.  So sweet. 

Evil cliffy monsters you both are!!!!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

UGH!!!!!! Seriously?!?!? Please update soon!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2019 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bruh 😫😩 why this particular cliffy? Are you TRYING to kill us all? 

Also, I like the use of a secondary character to advance the plot. It seems natural and refreshing to use that POV to do it. 

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2019 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh man, I had a feeling with this being Charilie's POV something bad was going to happen. I'm anxious to see what it will be.

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2019 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh hell, I hate scary cliffys

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2019 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

I hope Edward is alright 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2019 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

good 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

I hope it's at least another 5 chapters before they start to realize their feelings. I love the slow build, but more importantly the foundation of friendship, trust, and respect they're building. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

oooh some more backstory coming out.  Interesting twist with the necklace.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2019 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love your stories 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

So sweet!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

I can't wait until they realize they love each other. I hope the Charlie and Carlisle can work together and get Edward a pardon or somehow prove Ben was the guilty person.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

I think everyone around them can see how they feel about each other

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

Given Edward's thoughts on the policeman that arrested him after his so-called apology, I'm wondering if that officer knows The Cheneys. Edward and Bella are quite affectionate with each other, more so than just friends. I'm sure more people has had to notice the development between them.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

good

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2019 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella and Edward both are such great supports for each other.   I'm shocked at the revalation of how Edward and Esme are related.   

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2019 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

I can't believe Esme went through Edwards stuff. I hope they just have the same necklace.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Daaaamn, Edward they make multiples my guy.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2019 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

They have the same necklace don't they. Great update 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2019 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward is going to feel like shit when he finds out why Esme has the same necklace as his mother

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

wondering how e's mom and esme might be connected - family somehow? 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG I have the exact same conversation whenever anyone talks about sports.  

Now I'm wondering if they both had identical necklaces....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2019 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2019 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

So sweet!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2018 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love how their relationship is growing. I hope some how that they prove Edward innocent so his record is clear of the assault

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they had a good time.  James sounds too cute.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2018 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

Glad they had a good time.  James sounds too cute.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2018 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think it was a date a double date but a date and it was a great time they love being together .  I just love Charlie

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2018 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

good. glad e has another person

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can hardly wait until Bella graduates and then they discover they are attracted to each other. Both are a bit on the layman's side of dating; although I think Jasper noticed something more between them, even if they haven't noticed it yet. 

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2018 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love their book club idea.   It should bring them even closer together.   I'm beginning to think Edward was getting a touch jealous of Eric asking Bella out repeatedly.    LOL

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

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