Date: 26 Jun 2019 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome twist!!!
But that sorry sack of shit father needs to step it up or get kicked out!!
Date: 26 Jun 2019 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
Dam! That is a mind boggling twist. This douche probably wants money from Lauren, Edward or Tanya. He is icky as hell. I hope they all give him the boot.
Mary being back at the school will be so good for everyone. And Jasper is sure worth his weight in gold to several people too.
Great stunning chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 30
OMG i sooooo did not see that twist coming. What a shitty dude.
Date: 20 Jun 2019 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Absolutely loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 18 Jun 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved this!
Date: 17 Jun 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
I hope Edward uses the money to go to school and get a music education/therapy degree and then start his charity to help kids. Lauren proved to be a much better person than her mother. She needs a good place to live away from her mother.
Date: 17 Jun 2019 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
OK Lauran is my hero OMG she made it all good Cauis is a dick . Things are going right in Edwards world love it.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 29
Go Lauren and her organizational skills. Caius is a moron for even considering firing Edward. Idiot.
Date: 15 Jun 2019 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
About time Edward's troubles were righted. He'll eventually understand the money rewarded to him is a blessing. It'll come in hand for his future with Bella. Though, I gotta say what Lauren did was a hugh deal. She took a stand, with the support of fellow peers, and righted her own wrong. What an awesome turn of events. Plus, Mary, the beloved prinicipal, is back. Everything is falling into place.
Sherry
Date: 15 Jun 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
I like it the villians and good guys are switched up. It makes the story more exciting and not as easy to figure out the plot. And I bow down to Lauren. She handled that like a "boss". Thanks for a great story.
Maria
Date: 15 Jun 2019 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm sort of like Edward was...so conflicted with how i should feel. But Caius is really smarmy, huh? Ugh.... Lauren kicked ass with her planning, execution and her follow through. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 13 Jun 2019 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
I am so in love with this story it has everything. My heart just breaks for Bella and what her body has to go through. She has many that love her and she loves many so she has the suport she needs.
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
So glad that creepy bastard will be getting what is coming to him. I say give Charlie is gun lol
Date: 11 Jun 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
This one was great. Keep them coming.
Date: 11 Jun 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 28
My heart hurts for Lauren! It breaks for Bella, Edward and family.
Can't wait to see how you give everyone their just desserts!!
Date: 10 Jun 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great story so far
Date: 10 Jun 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is such a gut wrenching story, but so good. Edward is proving over and over what A good person he is. Lauren needs help and hopefully Jasper can reach her. Bella needs to stop blaming herself. All the blame is on Cheney.
Date: 09 Jun 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow sounds like Ben has been a busy arsehole. Angela will have a long road back too. Nice that Edward took the time to talk to Lauren
Date: 09 Jun 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 09 Jun 2019 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
I really feel sorry for Lauren. I know we reap what we sow but really she's just a misguided kid. Curious what they can find out from Angela. Great chapter.
Date: 09 Jun 2019 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
WOW-O-WOW! This was an awesome chapter! Poor Angela! 14... can’t even imagine. Glad the FBI are taking over and so sure Edward is innocent! Cannot wait for more! I obviously loved all of the Bella Edward parts, but the end with Lauren was incredible!
Date: 08 Jun 2019 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Cheney was a smooth mothertrucker for a while there. I had suspicions he was the guy that attacked Bella and that's why LB reacted to him as she did. Never thought he was the one that attacked and killed Renee. After hearing about what happened to Angela's parents and Cheney taking her, makes you wonder if that's what he had planned for Bella. Poor Lauren, what a mindtruck he did on her. Looks like Edward is about to get his freedom and his name cleared.
Sherry
Date: 08 Jun 2019 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Dam! Ben amd Angela have affected so many lives in a horrible way. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Jun 2019 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
A lot of information to process. Cheney needs the book threw at him.
Sherry
Date: 03 Jun 2019 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
They really didn't need Edward's fingerprints. They are already in the system. I knew it was Cheney all along.
Date: 03 Jun 2019 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 02 Jun 2019 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loving this 1 chap at a time isn't enough for me lol I am hooked
Date: 02 Jun 2019 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW! What a cha7! CHENEY KILLED RENEE!
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
My My My...you had my brain jumping all over the place. Until C & E sat down with Marcus and Mike, you had me believing that Thomas and Mike were the culprits.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27
This is the worst Ben in the world!! Please put him under the jail!!
Date: 01 Jun 2019 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I’m freaking out a little with everything y’all just threw at us! I figured he was the one that attacked Bella, more so when Little Bear wanted to attack him. And...after being a huge fan of your stories for years...I thought back to the craziness and the full circle that came from His Cimmerian View, I kind of figured he would end up being the one that killed Renée and attacked Bella. Absolutely love this story, and waiting impatiently for the next update! Thanks for an amazing read and take care!
Date: 01 Jun 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
wow. what an amazing and stunning chapter! so sad its over! lol cant wait for more!
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter was one surprise after another. I thought Cheney was blackmailing Lauren into doing is dirty work and also felt that he was the one to attack Bella. But in no way did I think he was behind Renee's death and Bella's attack. He is one sick person. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Cheney is an asshole extreme. ugh.....
Date: 29 May 2019 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
hmm Thomas looks more and more like an arsehole as well as the guy who messed up Cheney's wife. Cheney is a wanker
Date: 29 May 2019 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ugh Wonder who Lauren is covering up for....probably one of her mom's skanky friends. Cheney goes from ok-ish to arsehole every time I hear him speak
Date: 28 May 2019 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
I really want to know what took place in that office.
Sherry
Date: 28 May 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Cheney should be the one who rots in jail. Lauren better start talking the truth this time.
Date: 28 May 2019 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Cheney has bite marks????? OMG I cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 27 May 2019 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
I knew it was been grr... Don't leave us hanging long please! Love you stories
Date: 27 May 2019 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMFG she has been brain washed by Cheney. So glad Edwards phone works
Date: 27 May 2019 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
It is the same guy that killed her mom????? Little Bear is the hero got to love her OMG. Cheney is just an asshole.
Date: 26 May 2019 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
It will all come to light soon.
Date: 26 May 2019 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
What a cliff hanger
Date: 26 May 2019 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love it, I am nervous, hurry please!!!!
Date: 26 May 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
So Lauren (or Bella) stabbed Cheney cause she saw/heard something Cheney did/said to Bella (Lauren), and snapped. Cheney in self defense grabbed a gun (Bella's concealed one?) and let off a shot. Putting us in a place where Cheney and his rage tendencies appear again causing harm to other females.
Honestly for HEA, you're really putting us through the wringer.
Date: 25 May 2019 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Are Cheney and Thomas in it together
Date: 25 May 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Scissors? I'm guessing someone tried to stab someone else. Can't wait for more
Date: 25 May 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 25 May 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 26
You may be HEA gals, but you sure terrorize your characters first. LOL I think I might hate that asshole cop just as much as the Cheneys. Thank you for writing.
Date: 23 May 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah! Edward starts to trust and to let others in. I'm so happy for him. I wish him the best!
Date: 23 May 2019 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! Edward opens up to Bella! And he surprises Mrs. Cope! Great chapter, thank you so much!
Date: 22 May 2019 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
But considering what (clearly) Cheney said to Lauren, his past and current actions like his speech in the lunchroom, and the fact that he seems so close with the Port Angeles Police especially the guy who arrested Edward... he's probably the culprit and has done it before, but this time he can ruin Edward's life a second time... a chance to get double the sick and nasty jollies he clearly gets over ruining people.
Either way, I'm ready for all this tormnt you're putting me through to reach an end. CAUSE I DON'T NEED OR DESERVE THIS PUNISHMENT!
Date: 22 May 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
Seriously? Wtf. Can you stop punching me and this sweet, kind, and innocent Edward in the heart?
Oh, unless this is one of those stories where our main character has some sort of psychosis where he's two different people and he, our Edward, never remembers the awful one? Technically there's enough there for it to be possible like certain things that have been mentioned that happened while he was imprisoned, and he made someone else take the fall each time. Always thrown back to a state of innocence in which he forgets actions taken by the not-him him.
Dark theory, but rotund if accurate.
I hope it isn't.
Date: 22 May 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well shit!
Date: 21 May 2019 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
All of that probably happened to Lauren, but Cheney probably did it. I wonder why she is going along with it. Cheney probably threatened her. He is so sick.
Date: 21 May 2019 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
How could you do this to Edward? Lauren needs help and it wouldn't surprise me if Cheney and her mother had something to do with this mess. Edward needs the best lawyer around. They also need a PI to watch Cheney, Lauren, and Tanya. They are up to something.
Date: 20 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy hell, what a blow that was. I suspected Cheney was behind something since he was being so nice to Edward. I sure hope the Cheif can help Edward. Bella may be right about Tanya and Cheney having an affair; he certainly has Tanya fooled. I'm wondering if Cheney isn't the 'father' Lauren was talking about.
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2019 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sounds like Cheney is setting him up because he is abusing Lauren.
Date: 20 May 2019 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
I Wonder is Cheney is enlisting Tanya's help to discredit Edward and there's somehow forcing Lauren to do this.. I also wonder if that series of texts about not sleeping well was somehow from Lauren
Date: 16 May 2019 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 24
Cheney has a long way to go before anyone trusts him or his words. Glad they all went searching for B. Go Little Bear!!!
Date: 14 May 2019 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
Cheney is still horrible. He treated Edward like crap, even before his wife's attack. He has no empathy for peoples situations. Even if he gets Edward's name cleared, he still caused Edward to loose time with his mom and just life in general. He lost years of his life.
Date: 14 May 2019 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
No, Cheney is awful. He ruined Edward's life, and probably plently more. I wouldn't trust him even if God came to me and told me to.
Date: 12 May 2019 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow, glad both are ok, keep on writing
Date: 12 May 2019 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm looking forward to more.
Sherry
Date: 11 May 2019 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I think Cheny is using this Tony guy as an excuse. I think Cheny hurt Bella and I hope little Bear proves it. Great chapter. Thanks for writing.
Date: 11 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Nooooo. Don't leave us hanging like that.
Date: 10 May 2019 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
What a shitty person this man is. Also to think that way means that he's waiting to use anything he can against Edward. Someone helps your wife, or a child goes missing and the first response is calculating or anger. I hope he has to get a taste of his own medicine someday.
Date: 08 May 2019 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome! I loved the talk between Charlie and Edward and the letter Elizabeth wrote to her son. Edward cries. A lot. It's important for him to show his feelings. I hope he will be able to heel and to clean his name in time.
Date: 08 May 2019 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Charlie really cares for the people in his town, he does so much more than just his duty. I like the way you characterize him! Bella's and Edward's relationship develops.. slowly and steady. That makes it real. Thank you!
Date: 08 May 2019 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Thank you! Edward plays the piano and finds an emotional outlet. I hope he will use it! And I like that Charlie trusts Edward that much.
Date: 06 May 2019 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
They have so much love. Cheney is such a jerk.
Date: 06 May 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes! Edward are Bella have started talking! And they cleared the air between them. I love the way Edward shows Bella how tu punch the bag!
Charlie hasn't any objections to them spending time together, that's great, too.
This story goes slowly and that makes it and it's characters real. Thank you!
Date: 05 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Chapter three and the gang is already complete! Just like Edward Bella seems to have serious baggage... Perhaps they will be able to help each other. Fo now it seems that Edward will make friends soon even if he doesn't intend to do it.
This story is so awesome, I can't stop reading!
Date: 05 May 2019 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
The way yoe describe Edward and the way he tries to cope with his past is great! I love it. I'm also curious how his meetings with Jasper will turn out. Esme and Carlisle try to give him a real home. Unfortunately that is too much fo him at the moment. He must learn to trust again.
Date: 05 May 2019 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I think this is going to be an amazing story! Edward is heavily affected by his time in prison. Will there be healing for him? Will the truth about the assault be revealed? Fo now I hope he will be able to trust the people around him. It seems to me they really want to help him.
Date: 05 May 2019 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad they are joining the group. Cheney is such an arse. This crap with Bella and an appt should be brought up to the school board. He is overstepping.
Date: 05 May 2019 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
Angela is bound to have some type of brain damage, or possibly some type of short term memory loss. Cheney is being too nice to Edward for some reason; maybe hoping that Edward will drop his guard and 'attack.' Bella and Little Bear missing is very concerning.
Sherry
Date: 04 May 2019 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
Angela seems sketchy as sketchy as her husband. Hmmm...... The 4 person date was sweet. They sure have to go through a lot to avoid the asshole.
I'm worried about Bella.
Great chapter. Thanks for writing.
Date: 04 May 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella is alright
Date: 03 May 2019 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
Okay look, if he wasn't in the house when Edward found Angela he would've made some noise or something. Coupled with the fact that after their head clears from finding a loved one battered and beaten, they wouldn't automatically go after the person who called for help, in fact tunnel vision is very powerful to the point that that's how most cases where multiple deaths in a group of friends or immediate family happen. So unless Cheney was trained in some way like law enforcement or military he probably wouldn't have noticed Edward until the boy did something that shocked him out of that sort of focus. Additionally, the tapes of Edward calling 9-1-1 should've shown that he was upset and the one that found her. Very few scrawny-lanky teenage boys can't beat someone to near death. So Cheney is a liar, and considering all that he put Edward through in his younger years it's easy to tell that Cheney is full of shit.
Also they ways in which he interacts with people tells you a lot, like Alice said he wants control, but this isn't the Sims and no one is just going to bow down go hus will.