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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2019 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome twist!!!

But that sorry sack of shit father needs to step it up or get kicked out!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2019 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

Dam!  That is a mind boggling twist.   This douche probably wants money from Lauren, Edward or Tanya.   He is icky as hell.    I hope they all give him the boot.

Mary being back at the school will be so good for everyone.   And Jasper is sure worth his weight in gold to several people too.

Great stunning chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2019 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 30

OMG  i sooooo did not see that twist coming.  What a shitty dude.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2019 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

Nice.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2019 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 29

Absolutely loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved this!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 29

I hope Edward uses the money to go to school and get a music education/therapy degree and then start his charity to help kids.  Lauren proved to be a much better person than her mother. She needs a good place to live away from her mother.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2019 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 29

OK Lauran is my hero OMG she made it all good Cauis is a dick .  Things are going right in Edwards world love it.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2019 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

lol - good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2019 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 29

Go Lauren and her organizational skills.  Caius is a moron for even considering firing Edward.  Idiot.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2019 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 29

About time Edward's troubles were righted. He'll eventually understand the money rewarded to him is a blessing. It'll come in hand for his future with Bella. Though, I gotta say what Lauren did was a hugh deal. She took a stand, with the support of fellow peers, and righted her own wrong. What an awesome turn of events. Plus, Mary, the beloved prinicipal, is back. Everything is falling into place. 

Sherry

Reviewer: noway Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2019 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

I like it the villians and good guys are switched up. It makes the story more exciting and not as easy to figure out the plot.  And I bow down to Lauren. She handled that like a "boss". Thanks for a great story.

Maria

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2019 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm sort of like Edward was...so conflicted with how i should feel.    But Caius is really smarmy, huh?  Ugh....    Lauren kicked ass with her planning, execution and her follow through.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2019 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 28

I am so in love with this story it has everything.  My heart just breaks for Bella and what her body has to go through.  She has many that love her and she loves many so she has the suport she needs.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27

So glad that creepy bastard will be getting what is coming to him.  I say give Charlie is gun lol

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

This one was great. Keep them coming.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2019 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 28

My heart hurts for Lauren! It breaks for Bella, Edward and family.

 

Can't wait to see how you give everyone their just desserts!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2019 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great story so far

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 28

This is such a gut wrenching story, but so good. Edward is proving over and over what A good person he is. Lauren needs help and hopefully Jasper can reach her. Bella needs to stop blaming herself. All the blame is on  Cheney.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2019 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

(:

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow  sounds like Ben has been a busy arsehole.   Angela will have a long road back too.  Nice that Edward took the time to talk to Lauren

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

I really feel sorry for Lauren. I know we reap what we sow but really she's just a misguided kid. Curious what they can find out from Angela. Great chapter.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2019 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

WOW-O-WOW! This was an awesome chapter! Poor Angela! 14... can’t even imagine. Glad the FBI are taking over and so sure Edward is innocent! Cannot wait for more! I obviously loved all of the Bella Edward parts, but the end with Lauren was incredible!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 28

Cheney was a smooth mothertrucker for a while there. I had suspicions he was the guy that attacked Bella and that's why LB reacted to him as she did. Never thought he was the one that attacked and killed Renee. After hearing about what happened to Angela's parents and Cheney taking her, makes you wonder if that's what he had planned for Bella. Poor Lauren, what a mindtruck he did on her. Looks like Edward is about to get his freedom and his name cleared.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

Dam!   Ben amd Angela have affected so many lives in a horrible way.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2019 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

good

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2019 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

A lot of information to process. Cheney needs the book threw at him. 

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2019 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 27

They really didn't need Edward's fingerprints. They are already in the system. I knew it was Cheney all along. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2019 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2019 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loving this 1 chap at a time isn't enough for me lol I am hooked

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2019 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 27

WOW! What a cha7! CHENEY KILLED RENEE!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2019 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

My My My...you had my brain jumping all over the place.  Until C & E sat down with Marcus and Mike, you had me believing that Thomas and Mike were the culprits.   

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2019 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

This is the worst Ben in the world!! Please put him under the jail!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I’m freaking out a little with everything y’all just threw at us! I figured he was the one that attacked Bella, more so when Little Bear wanted to attack him. And...after being a huge fan of your stories for years...I thought back to the craziness and the full circle that came from His Cimmerian View, I kind of figured he would end up being the one that killed Renée and attacked Bella. Absolutely love this story, and waiting impatiently for the next update! Thanks for an amazing read and take care!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 27

wow. what an amazing and stunning chapter! so sad its over! lol cant wait for more!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

good

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 27

This chapter was one surprise after another.  I thought Cheney was blackmailing Lauren into doing is dirty work and also felt that he was the one to attack Bella.  But in no way did I think he was behind Renee's death and Bella's attack.  He is one sick person.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

Cheney is an asshole extreme.   ugh.....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2019 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

hmm Thomas looks more and more like an arsehole as well as the guy who messed up Cheney's wife.  Cheney is a wanker

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2019 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 25

Ugh  Wonder who Lauren is covering up for....probably one of her mom's skanky friends.  Cheney goes from ok-ish to arsehole every time I hear him speak

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2019 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

I really want to know what took place in that office.

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

Cheney should be the one who rots in jail. Lauren better start talking the truth this time.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2019 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

Cheney has bite marks?????  OMG I cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: MaryE1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2019 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

I knew it was been grr...  Don't leave us hanging long please! Love you stories 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2019 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 25

OMFG she has been brain washed by Cheney.  So glad Edwards phone works

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2019 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 24

It is the same guy that killed her mom?????  Little Bear is the hero got to love her OMG.  Cheney is just an asshole.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 26

It will all come to light soon.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 26

What a cliff hanger 

Reviewer: landaday1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love it, I am nervous, hurry please!!!!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

So Lauren (or Bella) stabbed Cheney cause she saw/heard something Cheney did/said to Bella (Lauren), and snapped. Cheney in self defense grabbed a gun (Bella's concealed one?) and let off a shot. Putting us in a place where Cheney and his rage tendencies appear again causing harm to other females. 

Honestly for HEA, you're really putting us through the wringer.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2019 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 26

Are Cheney and Thomas in it together 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 26

Scissors? I'm guessing someone tried to stab someone else. Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2019 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

You may be HEA gals, but you sure terrorize your characters first.    LOL    I think I might hate that asshole cop just as much as the Cheneys.    Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2019 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2019 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yeah! Edward starts to trust and to let others in. I'm so happy for him. I wish him the best! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2019 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow! Edward opens up to Bella! And he surprises Mrs. Cope! Great chapter, thank you so much! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2019 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 25

But considering what (clearly) Cheney said to Lauren, his past and current actions like his speech in the lunchroom, and the fact that he seems so close with the Port Angeles Police especially the guy who arrested Edward... he's probably the culprit and has done it before, but this time he can ruin Edward's life a second time... a chance to get double the sick and nasty jollies he clearly gets over ruining people. 

Either way, I'm ready for all this tormnt you're putting me through to reach an end. CAUSE I DON'T NEED OR DESERVE THIS PUNISHMENT!

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

Seriously? Wtf. Can you stop punching me and this sweet, kind, and innocent Edward in the heart? 

 

Oh, unless this is one of those stories where our main character has some sort of psychosis where he's two different people and he, our Edward, never remembers the awful one? Technically there's enough there for it to be possible like certain things that have been mentioned that happened while he was imprisoned, and he made someone else take the fall each time. Always thrown back to a state of innocence in which he forgets actions taken by the not-him him. 

Dark theory, but rotund if accurate. 

 

I hope it isn't.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well shit!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2019 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

All of that probably happened to Lauren, but Cheney probably did it.  I wonder why she is going along with it.  Cheney probably threatened her.  He is so sick.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2019 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

How could you do this to Edward? Lauren needs help and it wouldn't surprise me if Cheney and her mother had something to do with this mess. Edward needs the best lawyer around. They also need a PI to watch Cheney, Lauren, and Tanya. They are up to something.

Reviewer: Marts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2019 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 25

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

Holy hell, what a blow that was. I suspected Cheney was behind something since he was being so nice to Edward. I sure hope the Cheif can help Edward. Bella may be right about Tanya and Cheney having an affair; he certainly has Tanya fooled. I'm wondering if Cheney isn't the 'father' Lauren was talking about. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Lwb02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

Sounds like Cheney is setting him up because he is abusing Lauren. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

I Wonder is Cheney is enlisting Tanya's help to discredit Edward and there's somehow forcing Lauren to do this.. I also wonder if that series of texts about not sleeping well was somehow from Lauren 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2019 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Edward 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2019 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

Cheney has a long way to go before anyone trusts him or his words.  Glad they all went searching for B.  Go Little Bear!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2019 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

Cheney is still horrible. He treated Edward like crap, even before his wife's attack. He has no empathy for peoples situations. Even if he gets Edward's name cleared, he still caused Edward to loose time with his mom and just life in general. He lost years of his life. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2019 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

No, Cheney is awful. He ruined Edward's life, and probably plently more. I wouldn't trust him even if God came to me and told me to. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2019 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

nice update

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2019 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh wow, glad both are ok, keep on writing

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2019 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm looking forward to more.

Sherry

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2019 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2019 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

I think Cheny is using this Tony guy as an excuse.   I think Cheny hurt Bella and I hope little Bear proves it.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

Nooooo. Don't leave us hanging like that.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2019 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

What a shitty person this man is. Also to think that way means that he's waiting to use anything he can against Edward. Someone helps your wife, or a child goes missing and the first response is calculating or anger. I hope he has to get a taste of his own medicine someday.

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2019 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome! I loved the talk between Charlie and Edward and the letter Elizabeth wrote to her son. Edward cries. A lot. It's important for him to show his feelings. I hope he will be able to heel and to clean his name in time. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2019 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7

Charlie really cares for the people in his town, he does so much more than just his duty. I like the way you characterize him! Bella's and Edward's relationship develops.. slowly and steady. That makes it real. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2019 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you! Edward plays the piano and finds an emotional outlet. I hope he will use it! And I like that Charlie trusts Edward that much. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 23

They have so much love. Cheney is such a jerk. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

Yes! Edward are Bella have started talking! And they cleared the air between them. I love the way Edward shows Bella how tu punch the bag!

Charlie hasn't any objections to them spending time together, that's great, too. 

This story goes slowly and that makes it and it's characters real. Thank you! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

Chapter three and the gang is already complete! Just like Edward Bella seems to have serious baggage... Perhaps they will be able to help each other. Fo now it seems that Edward will make friends soon even if he doesn't intend to do it.

This story is so awesome, I can't stop reading! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2019 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

The way yoe describe Edward and the way he tries to cope with his past is great! I love it. I'm also curious how his meetings with Jasper will turn out. Esme and Carlisle try to give him a real home. Unfortunately that is too much fo him at the moment. He must learn to trust again. 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2019 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! I think this is going to be an amazing story! Edward is heavily affected by his time in prison. Will there be healing for him? Will the truth about the assault be revealed? Fo now I hope he will be able to trust the people around him. It seems to me they really want to help him. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2019 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad they are joining the group.   Cheney is such an arse.  This crap with Bella and an appt should be brought up to the school board.  He is overstepping.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2019 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Angela is bound to have some type of brain damage, or possibly some type of short term memory loss. Cheney is being too nice to Edward for some reason; maybe hoping that Edward will drop his guard and 'attack.' Bella and Little Bear missing is very concerning.

Sherry

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2019 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Angela seems sketchy as sketchy as her husband.    Hmmm......    The 4 person date was sweet.  They sure have to go through a lot to avoid the asshole.  

I'm worried about Bella. 

Great chapter.    Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2019 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 23

I hope Bella is alright 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2019 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

good

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2019 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

Okay look, if he wasn't in the house when Edward found Angela he would've made some noise or something. Coupled with the fact that after their head clears from finding a loved one battered and beaten, they wouldn't automatically go after the person who called for help, in fact tunnel vision is very powerful to the point that that's how most cases where multiple deaths in a group of friends or immediate family happen. So unless Cheney was trained in some way like law enforcement or military he probably wouldn't have noticed Edward until the boy did something that shocked him out of that sort of focus. Additionally, the tapes of Edward calling 9-1-1 should've shown that he was upset and the one that found her. Very few scrawny-lanky teenage boys can't beat someone to near death. So Cheney is a liar, and considering all that he put Edward through in his younger years it's easy to tell that Cheney is full of shit. 

Also they ways in which he interacts with people tells you a lot, like Alice said he wants control, but this isn't the Sims and no one is just going to bow down go hus will. 

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