Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Given Edward's thoughts on the policeman that arrested him after his so-called apology, I'm wondering if that officer knows The Cheneys. Edward and Bella are quite affectionate with each other, more so than just friends. I'm sure more people has had to notice the development between them.
Date: 08 Dec 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
I can hardly wait until Bella graduates and then they discover they are attracted to each other. Both are a bit on the layman's side of dating; although I think Jasper noticed something more between them, even if they haven't noticed it yet.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just started this yesterday and I'm sad that I'm all caught up already. I'm enjoying this story, I hope that updates are frequent! If I remember correctly a violation of parole isn't viewed hatshly if it's done to protect those at large. So while Edward won't get off easy he also won't be sent back to prison. Poor Bella, I hope that this doesn't shake her faith.
I'm liking the steady pace of this story it moves at a gentle pace rather than a 1x fast forward or more. Feels good.
Date: 01 Nov 2018 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
this was a really great chapter! i loved it so much! i love how protective bella is of edward and vice versa. I loved how Charlie acted when he arrived and that the DA arrived and is good with Charlie and Bella. Can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully Edward won't be sent back to jail.
Date: 28 Oct 2018 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story. I am a recent reader of ‘Twilight’ character fanfics and glad I found this story. It really has a lot going for it in showing how the right support and caring can have a positive effect on the healing process for our protagonists. Thanks for the great story.
Date: 26 Sep 2018 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the update..Well done..I'm happy Edward feels goo d about tuneing the musical instruments. .I wonder what Ms.rs. Cope was thinki my about..maybe hiring Edward...although I'm not sure he can..hopefully his innocence will come out soon and Edward will get reparations. (A big settlement)..until you post again