Date: 21 Apr 2019 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Cheney isn't making any friends. I really hope Cheney trips himself up sooner rather than later and every one finds out the truth. Mary needs to return from recovery quicker too so she can squash Cheney's BS. Charlie's probably one hair's width away from throttling Cheney.
Date: 07 Apr 2019 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
If I go with my guts, Cheney will do whatever it takes to make Edward and Bella look as bad people. But everyone except Tanya and Lauren knows better, they will be his alleys in this plot to tuck up our favorite couple.
Date: 06 Apr 2019 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
Psychopaths are great manipulators, even of themselves, but if and big IF he didn't beat his wife idk why he couldn't accept the facts. Why he wouldn't ask for a full investigation, and like anyone who beat someone else half to death would have raw hands or cuts and bruising from the person defending themselves even if it were minor. F Cheney either way. I want him gone from this story he's too much and my heart cannot deal
Date: 20 Mar 2019 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter. Glad Mary came out ok and E took her to see Mary.
Ugh guessing Caius and Ben are in on it together. Wonder how long it will take for Ben to fire or harm E. Sadly I think they will try and use Bella in whatever they have planned.
Date: 04 Mar 2019 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
This has been a very organic relationship, slowly growing step by step. They are perfect for each other. They just need to wait a few months and Edward needs to talk to Charlie for his own piece of mind. He needs to know it is alright with Charlie.
Date: 06 Feb 2019 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Given Edward's thoughts on the policeman that arrested him after his so-called apology, I'm wondering if that officer knows The Cheneys. Edward and Bella are quite affectionate with each other, more so than just friends. I'm sure more people has had to notice the development between them.
Date: 08 Dec 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
I can hardly wait until Bella graduates and then they discover they are attracted to each other. Both are a bit on the layman's side of dating; although I think Jasper noticed something more between them, even if they haven't noticed it yet.
Date: 04 Nov 2018 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just started this yesterday and I'm sad that I'm all caught up already. I'm enjoying this story, I hope that updates are frequent! If I remember correctly a violation of parole isn't viewed hatshly if it's done to protect those at large. So while Edward won't get off easy he also won't be sent back to prison. Poor Bella, I hope that this doesn't shake her faith.
I'm liking the steady pace of this story it moves at a gentle pace rather than a 1x fast forward or more. Feels good.