Date: 09 Jul 2019 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
That conversation with Charlie is so funny. I think they have some time before they get to full on sex. They need to explore each other more first. Edward's and Lauren's sperm donor is a piece of trash that they need to dismiss from their lives. Charlie justs needs to "adopt" them as his kids. He is there for them. Edward doesn't need to give his sperm donor anymore money. That is all he wants. Help Lauren and himself to get their degrees should be his priority. When that is done, he can work on his new school.
Date: 09 Jul 2019 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
Edward Sr. is a joke. The man needs to fall off the end of the earth. Edward and Lauren, both would be better off. I have a feeling that Edward Sr. is going to focus on getting his hands on Edward's money somehow. Charlie surprised me; being so open about the sex talk with Edward, considering it is his daughter, but oh well... lol.
Date: 08 Jul 2019 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
First thank you sharing but Dad is a douche!!! I know you are going to have him doing something STUPID!!!! Poor Edward, I would be freaking out about speaking to Charlie!!! Charlie’s statement at the end was down right SHOCKING, I bet Edward’s jaw is in the floor. I love how you made him real and logical while being a good parent!!
Date: 08 Jul 2019 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think it would be best if poor Lauren just accepts the fact that her father is going to leave. Edward already has written him off it seems. I sure would. He is a selfish ass.
The fact that Edward is worried about Bella's possible enjoyment during sex to have that awkward as hell conversation with her dad is evidence that he really loves her and cares about her.
Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
How crazy! I think Edward and Lauren will be great support for each other. I think pops needs to stay away. They don't need his toxic attitude in their lives. Edward should use some of the money he was awarded to help Lauren go to university. In fact, I think Bella, Edward, and Lauren should go to university together and all get a new start.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
I started wondering if Lauren's father was Edward's also while Tanya was talking to Edward about him. Then the phone Tanya had in the store is when I was fairly sure they had the same father. What an awful man; he's gonna try to make money from one of his kids over what happened to them. I really hope he disappears again and leaves them both alone.
Date: 26 Jun 2019 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
Dam! That is a mind boggling twist. This douche probably wants money from Lauren, Edward or Tanya. He is icky as hell. I hope they all give him the boot.
Mary being back at the school will be so good for everyone. And Jasper is sure worth his weight in gold to several people too.
Great stunning chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 17 Jun 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
I hope Edward uses the money to go to school and get a music education/therapy degree and then start his charity to help kids. Lauren proved to be a much better person than her mother. She needs a good place to live away from her mother.
Date: 15 Jun 2019 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
About time Edward's troubles were righted. He'll eventually understand the money rewarded to him is a blessing. It'll come in hand for his future with Bella. Though, I gotta say what Lauren did was a hugh deal. She took a stand, with the support of fellow peers, and righted her own wrong. What an awesome turn of events. Plus, Mary, the beloved prinicipal, is back. Everything is falling into place.
Date: 10 Jun 2019 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is such a gut wrenching story, but so good. Edward is proving over and over what A good person he is. Lauren needs help and hopefully Jasper can reach her. Bella needs to stop blaming herself. All the blame is on Cheney.
Date: 09 Jun 2019 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
WOW-O-WOW! This was an awesome chapter! Poor Angela! 14... can’t even imagine. Glad the FBI are taking over and so sure Edward is innocent! Cannot wait for more! I obviously loved all of the Bella Edward parts, but the end with Lauren was incredible!
Date: 08 Jun 2019 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
Cheney was a smooth mothertrucker for a while there. I had suspicions he was the guy that attacked Bella and that's why LB reacted to him as she did. Never thought he was the one that attacked and killed Renee. After hearing about what happened to Angela's parents and Cheney taking her, makes you wonder if that's what he had planned for Bella. Poor Lauren, what a mindtruck he did on her. Looks like Edward is about to get his freedom and his name cleared.
Date: 01 Jun 2019 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! I’m freaking out a little with everything y’all just threw at us! I figured he was the one that attacked Bella, more so when Little Bear wanted to attack him. And...after being a huge fan of your stories for years...I thought back to the craziness and the full circle that came from His Cimmerian View, I kind of figured he would end up being the one that killed Renée and attacked Bella. Absolutely love this story, and waiting impatiently for the next update! Thanks for an amazing read and take care!
Date: 01 Jun 2019 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter was one surprise after another. I thought Cheney was blackmailing Lauren into doing is dirty work and also felt that he was the one to attack Bella. But in no way did I think he was behind Renee's death and Bella's attack. He is one sick person. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 26 May 2019 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
So Lauren (or Bella) stabbed Cheney cause she saw/heard something Cheney did/said to Bella (Lauren), and snapped. Cheney in self defense grabbed a gun (Bella's concealed one?) and let off a shot. Putting us in a place where Cheney and his rage tendencies appear again causing harm to other females.
Honestly for HEA, you're really putting us through the wringer.
Date: 22 May 2019 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
But considering what (clearly) Cheney said to Lauren, his past and current actions like his speech in the lunchroom, and the fact that he seems so close with the Port Angeles Police especially the guy who arrested Edward... he's probably the culprit and has done it before, but this time he can ruin Edward's life a second time... a chance to get double the sick and nasty jollies he clearly gets over ruining people.
Either way, I'm ready for all this tormnt you're putting me through to reach an end. CAUSE I DON'T NEED OR DESERVE THIS PUNISHMENT!
Date: 22 May 2019 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
Seriously? Wtf. Can you stop punching me and this sweet, kind, and innocent Edward in the heart?
Oh, unless this is one of those stories where our main character has some sort of psychosis where he's two different people and he, our Edward, never remembers the awful one? Technically there's enough there for it to be possible like certain things that have been mentioned that happened while he was imprisoned, and he made someone else take the fall each time. Always thrown back to a state of innocence in which he forgets actions taken by the not-him him.
Dark theory, but rotund if accurate.
I hope it isn't.
Date: 21 May 2019 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
How could you do this to Edward? Lauren needs help and it wouldn't surprise me if Cheney and her mother had something to do with this mess. Edward needs the best lawyer around. They also need a PI to watch Cheney, Lauren, and Tanya. They are up to something.
Date: 20 May 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy hell, what a blow that was. I suspected Cheney was behind something since he was being so nice to Edward. I sure hope the Cheif can help Edward. Bella may be right about Tanya and Cheney having an affair; he certainly has Tanya fooled. I'm wondering if Cheney isn't the 'father' Lauren was talking about.
Date: 14 May 2019 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
Cheney is still horrible. He treated Edward like crap, even before his wife's attack. He has no empathy for peoples situations. Even if he gets Edward's name cleared, he still caused Edward to loose time with his mom and just life in general. He lost years of his life.