Date: 04 Sep 2019 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella will realize that Edward did the best he could for Alice & Jasper.
I'm afraid Tanya Willey to frame Bella & Jacob
Date: 04 Sep 2019 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Bella will realize that Edward did the best he could for Alice & Jasper.
I'm afraid Tanya Willey to frame Bella & Jacob
Date: 04 Sep 2019 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
There you go Tanya you got what you deserve
Date: 04 Sep 2019 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
She can now see Edward's side of things. Tanya got what she deserved
Date: 04 Sep 2019 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Jacob gets the hint. Does he want Bella to face what Alice did? Bella needs to trust Edward. Once they are in charge, they can work to change things. Bella needs to remember that this is the best way to change things in her country.
Date: 27 Aug 2019 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 22
Alice and Jasper were stupid. All they had to do was wait for her dismissal. She could have probable asked to be dismissed next. Bella needs to stop blaming Edward.
Date: 27 Aug 2019 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yea I totally get B's feeling on this. Why do I feel that Tanya had a hand in the video getting out.
Date: 26 Aug 2019 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I died. My heart. I can't even write complete sentences. Gah. Please update soon. Both stories are so good. I can't wait to find out what's next for both. ❤️
Date: 26 Aug 2019 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 22
I died. My heart. I can't even write complete sentences. Gah. Please update soon. Both stories are so good. I can't wait to find out what's next for both. ❤️
Date: 26 Aug 2019 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't blame Bella for her reaction. Alice was her friend. Why could Edward not have given her some type of warning about what was going to happen. At least talked to her about his feelings about having to do it before it happened.
Date: 22 Aug 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, that was not expected, I was hoping that was a bad dream
Date: 20 Aug 2019 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Both Alice and Jasper knwthe consequences, but chose not to wait until the end of the collection. They were shown mercy. Bella and Jacob know as well. Bella has been very foolish with Jacob and allowing him access to her room.
Bella is upset about the punishment, but she is rejecting the law not hating Edward.
Date: 20 Aug 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Finally Edward talked to her a d told her his plans instead of keeping her in the dark.
Date: 20 Aug 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Finally Edward talked to her a d told her his plans instead of keeping her in the dark.
Date: 20 Aug 2019 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
So sad, but at least they didn't get the death sentence
Date: 09 Aug 2019 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yea she needs to tell E about Jake before someone else does.... Like Tanya.
Date: 07 Aug 2019 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love these two, and hope that they get their happily ever after
Date: 07 Aug 2019 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so happy for them. She needs to realize that he is totally committed to her. She needs to let him know she is totally committed to him by telling Jacob goodbye for good.
Date: 05 Aug 2019 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Her attachment to Jacob is bound to come between Edward and her.
Date: 19 Jul 2019 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Why has Edward been distance with Bella?
Date: 05 Jul 2019 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella needs to trust Edward. He has responsiblities to all of the collection.
Date: 03 Jul 2019 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for this chapter! I love this glimpse we get into Bella's family especially her relationship to her father! I enjoy reading this story very much. You are a very talented writer! Please keep going! To do many out here your writing is a source of joy!
Date: 03 Jul 2019 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow Tyler has some real nerve. Glad she gets to see Ren for a bit.
Date: 02 Jul 2019 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
I liked this chapter, waiting for the Halloween Ball to occur.
Date: 01 Jul 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why is Jacob interested in Bella again? As I recall, he broke up with her because she was a Five and he was a Six. Now that she's a Three he's interested again?
Author's Response:
He regretted it right after he dumped her, but also as a guard he is now a 2, so he is higher in status than she is and could provide better.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
Keep writing
Date: 14 Jun 2019 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
A question, I want to know what the numbers mean with each girl. Interesting storyline
Date: 14 Jun 2019 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
A question, I want to know what the numbers mean with each girl. Interesting storyline
Author's Response:
The numbers represent their castes, or social class. So each number have specific jobs they are allowed to do, and marriage outside your caste changes the females caste to their new husband's.
Date: 14 Jun 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah!. Stubborn Bella finally was truthful to Edward and herself.
Date: 13 Jun 2019 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
She has finally decided.
Date: 13 Jun 2019 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope she doesn't get in trouble for having that book.
Date: 12 Jun 2019 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Tanya is such an arse. aww for her telling him how she feels.
Date: 12 Jun 2019 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Tanya is such a vapid thing. ahh Officer Whitlock appears. Uh oh.... why do I get the feeling that Tanya or her posse will steal the book.
Date: 12 Jun 2019 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! These chapters are so great! I hope Jacob won't drive a wedge between Edward and Bella. I enjoy the way their relationship blossoms!
Date: 12 Jun 2019 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
It was a very nice birtday gift so thank you. I was really waiting for new chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2019 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
nice story so far.
Date: 12 Feb 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
In the end here she says she felt like she was really competing for Edward's heart. Does she not realize that she already has it.
Date: 12 Feb 2019 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart. Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it.
Date: 10 Feb 2019 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart. Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it.
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart. Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it.
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart. Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it.
Date: 09 Feb 2019 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Team Bella ftw!
Date: 29 Jan 2019 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jacpb issuch a tool.
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
At least Esme is seeing what a horrible person Tanya is. Yea Jake is going to get himself and probably Bella in trouble.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob is such a dog. She needs to forget about him. Edward is who she should want. He messed up, but he cares about her so much.
Date: 06 Dec 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am surprised that Bella let Jacob just climb on top of her and basicly attack her like that after what he did and how he did her. What in the world is up with Edward??? Why did he act such an ass?
Date: 06 Dec 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya.
Date: 28 Nov 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Bella should tell Edward what happened with Jacob and her it’s goin to hurt him yes but she wouldn’t be lying to him like everyone else does I am glad Bella it’s not taking anyone’s crap not Tanya or royals
Date: 28 Nov 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jacob is such a wanker putting them in that situation. Surprised she spoke to the family that way in the safe room. Sucks that they tore up all her pictures.
Date: 24 Nov 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hello I found this story on Facebook and I love it I cannot wait to read more
Date: 24 Nov 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hello I found this story on Facebook and I love it I cannot wait to read more
Date: 22 Nov 2018 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Not sure I like the Jacob turn of events. Tanya does need to go. What a biatch. Poor Rosalie.
Date: 22 Nov 2018 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can't blame her for feeling anxious. Glad he is being understanding.
Date: 22 Nov 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya. He needs to know what she is really like. Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people. Edward deserves better than her.
Date: 22 Nov 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya. He needs to know what she is really like. Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people. Edward deserves better than her.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya. He needs to know what she is really like. Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people. Edward deserves better than her.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
I ha e a feeling that Bella is going to be discussing Tanya with Edward the next time they talk. I dont blame her. Because who wants a Queen who can be so hateful to her people that she will be over. Tanya would make a horrible queen.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
I ha e a feeling that Bella is going to be discussing Tanya with Edward the next time they talk. I dont blame her. Because who wants a Queen who can be so hateful to her people that she will be over. Tanya would make a horrible queen.
Date: 21 Nov 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad that she is honest with the Prince. Also, I love his Aunt. Also love the Edward takes time for his little cousins.
Date: 20 Nov 2018 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh, we're here. We've arrived. I'm a bit shocked that it picked up in these last two chapters, but as always I'm looking forward to more. After this is complete I'll read The Selection Series.
Date: 13 Nov 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awwwwwwww. Love it. Come on Bella and tell him about Tanya
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter
Date: 10 Nov 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well that was eye opening, hun Teddy?
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update
Date: 09 Nov 2018 3:34 AM Title: Prologue
READ CHAPTER 13 11-8-18
Date: 09 Nov 2018 3:33 AM Title: Prologue
READ CHAPTER 13 11-8-18
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Finally!!!!!!!! Prince Edward made his move on her!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter seemed different for some reason.
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter seemed different for some reason.
Date: 07 Nov 2018 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aha! She finally admits it to him and herself! Good for her -
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, Tanya really needs to be kicked out for assaulting Bella. Wonder if someone saw that besides Tanya and Bella. hmmm
Awww for first (and second)
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Tanya is such a snot. Can't wait till he gets rid of her. Wonder what Lauren did. Good question about the history books..... but they say that books are written by the winners, not all the participants
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm a little lost. Why did she drag him out of the meeting? What they talked about came from what he said, not any topic she introduced.
Date: 30 Oct 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update <3
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update ❤️❤️