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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 36

Good chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2020 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2020 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 35

Awww, I love that moment between Bella and Tanya. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2020 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 35

Awww, I love that moment between Bella and Tanya. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2020 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 35

Glad Bella moved up in the polls. I hope Edward isn't in for another whipping

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow...maybe the mag will help change the kings opinion

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2020 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 35

I don't trust Tanya at all!

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2020 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 35

I don't trust Tanya at all!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 34

Tanya is up to something and Rose is trying to up her chances by coming on to a Edward. If he already loves a Bella why does all of this have to continue.

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2020 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 33

Great

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2020 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

I really hope someone kills King Edward. He is just despicable 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

I really hope someone kills King Edward. He is just despicable 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2020 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thanks.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2020 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2020 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

I hope king Edward gets killed while he is gone 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2020 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

Glad she's thinking of a way out

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope one of the rebels kills King Edward. He's just a bastard.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

I hope one of the rebels kills King Edward. He's just a bastard.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

What a bastard that king is

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

What a bastard that king is

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

What a bastard that king is

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

What a bastard that king is

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2020 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

What a bastard that king is

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2020 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

That's another check in the "Yes" column for Italy.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2020 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 31

King Edward is an evil man 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2020 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 31

:):)

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2020 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm still annoyed with them both, I really hope they work on their communication issues.

Great chapter, looking forward to what's next and hoping that with the report and the attack that the king realizes that sending her home would cause more problems.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2020 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awe that was so beautiful

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2020 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2020 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

I really don’t like the king I bet Tanya is happy about how the king reacted to Bella awww they gave each other some loving

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

The king is evil

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 30

The king is evil

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2020 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella, why? Just, why?

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wow, Edward needs to make up his mind and tell Bella

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wow, Edward needs to make up his mind and tell Bella

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ahhhhh what an amazing chapter! Please update soon. The suspense is killing me!!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ugh, cooties!  Everything Edward just got from Tanya, he just passed on to Bella.   I agree...why her?

I suspect Bella is going to be bold in her choice of projects.  She wants to leave, so she'll have her say first.  I disagree with some of her thoughts though.  If I was dressed in rags, I'd still want to be warm; without electricity, I'd still need food.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 29

Edward can be a real dick at times. He knows Tanya is nothing but a whore.

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

Getting very nervous.

I cant do angst at all and definitely has to be a HEA for Bella

and Edward.

Love the story.

It is brilliantly written but this last chapter made my tummy hurt.

 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Oh Bella,  you and Edward just can't seem to get your timing right... soon I hope!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ohh bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2020 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2020 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2020 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2020 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 28

So glad that Edward is safe.  Looking forward to seeing how the selection gets narrowed down further. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2020 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

Great update

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 27

Such an exhilarating chapter. 

Can't wait to read more. 

I hope King Edward and Teddy will be ok.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2020 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

:):)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2020 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

There was a lot covered in this chapter.  Glad Alice is okay, but the palace doesn't seem the safest place to be.

It reminded me of Willoughby taking Marianne Dashwood to his family estate in Austen's Sense and Sensibility (it didn't work out well for Marianne) when Edward took Bella to the princess suite. Of course, we later learned that he had taken Rosalie to his own suite.

Why do they have to be interrupted when Edward begins to speak to her?  He should have started his goodbyes with her.

I still think her worst threat is her clandestine involvement with Jacob.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love that Bella's confidence is growing... she can totally do this role - if given the opportunity.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

Watch your back Bella. Maybe Rosalie has begun to be your friend with respect. However, Tanya respects no one.

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2020 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

Watch your back Bella. Maybe Rosalie has begun to be your friend with respect. However, Tanya respects no one.

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

:):)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 26

:):)

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 26

:):)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

Glad to see a new chapter, please write again Soon!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am so glad that Bella and Rose's party turned out so well. Loved her father's letter.  

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Italy sounds like a good place to live.  She should consider the offer of an Italian noblemen.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 26

Jacob just wants her for himself 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2020 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

Thanks.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2020 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 25

I hope you're okay and safe during this crazy time! I was wondering when, or if, this story will update. I know writer's block and life in general happens, so no worries if not. Just curious!

Reviewer: SilverNova3082 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2020 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

The One?

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2020 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

i read The Selection series years ago, so i was very excited to read this. its bringing everything back!

Reviewer: Gigi725 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2019 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 25

i'm missing this story!!

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love your story 

Reviewer: kuch44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2019 4:40 AM Title: Prologue

Hmmm..will Bella be the people's queen? 

Reviewer: kuch44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2019 4:40 AM Title: Prologue

Hmmm..will Bella be the people's queen? 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2019 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

good update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2019 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well at least Bella got some useful info.  Ugh Tanya needs to go. Edward's father is a wanker. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love the intriguing twists and look forward to seeing how the rebel raids play out.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love the intriguing twists and look forward to seeing how the rebel raids play out.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2019 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love the intriguing twists and look forward to seeing how the rebel raids play out.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2019 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: PLVampire Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

I thought Edward was in charge of who went home.

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great thank you

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

That was an interesting chapter.  

Reviewer: mamih Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great thank you

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

This is a cruel world! Within his possibilities, Edward helped them, but to all the others it just seems to be cruel and archaic. Bella is in a difficult position. She is shocked, doesn't want to carry on and must fear for herself. I fear what is to come! 

Reviewer: Dandelion1112 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 21

Finally, they talked with each other and they both know they want a future together. But Jacob and Tanya dancing together worries me. Are they plotting against Bella and Edward? Thank you so much for this chapter! 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2019 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

OMG BELLA GET A GRIP. He said he doesn't like Tanya, and has said he's in love with you like 80 different times. You and Rose are partners on this project therefore you'd get sacked together. I'm about to shake her I swear. She's so dense, like how was she like "omg Teddy's definitely into me and I feel so loved." a few chapters ago and now we're back to "woe is me, but I can't leave because I love him (and my family needs this)" UGH. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2019 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

What game is the King playing??? Also Edward.  He has not really paid any attention to Isabella as far as seeking her out and spending time with her.  

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

I mean... I understand why Bella is insecure the past with Jake, Edward Jr. being unreasonable at times, and Edward Sr. dismissing her so wholly that even insiders can see it and tell the public... but damn Edward Jr. has grown and has declared himself time and time again from the very beginning. If she doesn't get over herself and stop making things out to be worse than they are I'm going to have to sneak into your dreams as a character so I can slap her into the right frame of mind. Edward loves her, and the country has seen her in a warm and loving light. All she needs to do is continue to be herself and focus on her future as princess and eventually queen. Someone shake her! 

Another great update, and as always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you are well, as a creator myself I understand the various pressures and blocks that come with creativity and are often compounded by real life responsibilities. So here's to wishing you warm and relaxing baths with your favorite drink! 

xo

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Missed the 2 previous chapters. No wonder i was confused. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Poor Isabella 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow the King is a real peach ain't he.  Glad B is making a break from J.  She needs too.  Not sure I really trust him anyway.

Hiding things from Skankya is smart.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

Bella needs to get out of her head and be her best self.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2019 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update.  I look forward to learning why Edward has been so distant from bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2019 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my. Well, I'm glad Bella got to hit Tanya. I'm also glad that she told Jacob that it was really over. I'm just wondering if someone over heard their conversation.  

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2019 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

good update

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2019 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Sure hope no one overheard that conversation... 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2019 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad Esme talked to her.   His father is a moron to want a nasty person like Tanya around.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2019 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella is smart not to meet with Jacob clandestinely.  She finaly told him she's 100 percent committed to the collection.  Now she should tell Edward how she knows Jacob.

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