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Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2020 9:11 PM Title: Epilogue

enjoyed reading :) glad the king got what he deserved..

Teddy and Darling sweet Ending

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue

More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2020 1:17 AM Title: Epilogue

More , more this was a great escape read. Going to another time and world is so appreciated. Thank you Good Witch.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2020 9:11 AM Title: Epilogue

 

Great story, thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:50 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the sequel 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue

Such a sweet finish.  I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 9:00 AM Title: Epilogue

Such a sweet finish.  I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 7:06 AM Title: Epilogue

I like this Tanya from the latter part of your story.  Thank you.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 43

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2020 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 43

Thanks.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:40 PM Title: Epilogue

Love love love this story!!!!!!! I have truly enjoyed reading this story.  Thank you for sharing with us.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 44

Alice and Jasper are back!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 43

Lots of answers in this chapter 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm glad things have worked out.  Did Angela die in the fighting?  Was she part of the Southern Rebels?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my. Edward and his hot headed self. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 40

Glad Charlie wrote to Bella.  Tyler is an ass. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 39

What does Bella mean when she leaves her life will never be the same?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 38

I'm glad the girls had some fun. Also glad that Bella and Jacob got to talk.  

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:48 AM Title: Epilogue

Nice ending.   I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 11:48 AM Title: Epilogue

Nice ending.   I hope Rose's husband isn't as evil as he was in canon

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 9:16 AM Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed this. Looking forward to the sequel

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 8:55 AM Title: Epilogue

So happy for all loved this story and will be looking forward to what is next Thanks so much

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 37

Is Angela setting Bella up?  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 36

Bella will make a good Queen for Edward.  So glad she could get help for the rebels. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

How did the King find out that Edward and Bella were on the roof dancing???? I wonder if Edward will get another beating?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 35

How did the King find out that Edward and Bella were on the roof dancing???? I wonder if Edward will get another beating?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2020 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 34

I am assuming that the King is mad at Angela because she did not speak at all. And he is mad at Bella because she said to fight for yourself.  Loved that the Queen came and talked to Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

What medicine is Bella taking?  Something for anxiety?????

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

Well, the claws come out with Rosalie.  What are Bella and Carlisle talking about.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh my. I think Edward would kill his father if he found out.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Oh wow. She pissed the King off. Glad she and Edward had one night together.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh no.  Bella is her own worse enemy.  I have a feeling Tanya attack Edward.  If so why did he not tell Bella that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

Glad Edward and his father came back safely.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

I'm glad Rise and Bella talked.  Sounds like we may have a traitor in the castle.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 44

The changes are happening OMG so happy for them all

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2020 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 44

Ah i love how positive things are turning out for everyone. So exciting. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

So glad about the Whitlocks

Reviewer: i2want2knowu Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2020 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 43

Wow!

I cant believe its almost over.

I absolutely love this story.

 

Thank you for writting it.

Hugs

Tina

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 43

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 43

Glad that king is dead and a new king lives on I am so sad about Edwards mom so sad

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 43

I can't imagine how Edward is coping, losing his parents, the stress of waiting for Bella to recover and being thrust into the role of King during unrest. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2020 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 43

Carlisle rocks!

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 43

Thank goodness the king died. Rosalie new Edward and Bella loved each other I don't see how she thought she was going to win.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2020 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 43

Thank goodness the king died. Rosalie new Edward and Bella loved each other I don't see how she thought she was going to win.

Reviewer: i2want2knowu Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2020 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 42

OMG!

I started reading this story earlier today.

I dint stop until now.

I didn't review each chapter because I just could not stop long enough to do so.

I absolutely love this story.

Wow!

Holy shit!

Is Bella going to ok!

Now. Edward become king a lot sooner.

Will Bella become the Queen as well?

I have so many questions.

But i have to say that i absolutely love it.

Hugs,

Tina

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 42

Edward needs to learn how to temporarily set aside his emotions in the moment so he can hear/see the information around him, it's an important skill for any leader to gain. 

Here's to the next chapter, and hopefully Edward keeping his head firmly on his shoulders.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 42

Damn he told Rose he was choosing her...

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 42

Wow, what a riveting character. Awesome job.  

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2020 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 42

Wow, what a riveting character. Awesome job.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 42

Thank god he knows what happened

Reviewer: chelsea_feeney Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

I've absolutely  loved this story, I'm normally a silent reader and rarely comment on anything. The thing that niggles me is how we don't really know Edward and Rosalie's story. I get it is a Bella / Edward story but the last line of the chapter makes me feel as though there was a lot more going in than what we believe. Can you shed any clarity on this?

Reviewer: chelsea_feeney Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

I've absolutely  loved this story, I'm normally a silent reader and rarely comment on anything. The thing that niggles me is how we don't really know Edward and Rosalie's story. I get it is a Bella / Edward story but the last line of the chapter makes me feel as though there was a lot more going in than what we believe. Can you shed any clarity on this?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 41

OMG NOOOOO he cant pick Rose no matter what

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm not sure what makes me happier  the king bing beyond saving or Teddy and Bella together

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 42

Happy this posted soon. Can’t wait for more. Thrilled the King is dead. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 41

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 41

🤯😭🤪🤷‍♀️🙈😍’”

 

At all the feelings (not in particular order) I felt in this chapter. The DRAMA!!!! 

 

Sad to know this is slowly/quickly coming to an end... Looking forward to your next update ❤️❤️❤️

Reviewer: SMBennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 41

Wow. I read this last night. Even though I knew this was coming (as I read enough stories to know this), I was so upset -- I couldn't sleep!  Well, needless to say once Edward gets ahold of that letter and he hunts her down through Carlisle and has 'words' or a 'knife' for this father, I hope to see she is well and waiting for him. Too much angst if you prolong this part on top of all the angst to get here. I am looking forward to sleeping again, once you bring them back together ...happily of course.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my goodness. teddy get your head out of your ass before you lose the best thing you've ever had in your life. Thrilling chapter. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2020 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 41

Oh my goodness. teddy get your head out of your ass before you lose the best thing you've ever had in your life. Thrilling chapter. 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2020 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 41

Wow.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 40

Tyler is an ass and needs ass kicked.  WOW her dad was part of the rebeloun OMG

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 40

Can we like... hit Tyler with a van? 

Looking forward to what's to come! Very happy that Bella has her ducks in a row, as well as her and Edward falling more and more in step with each other every passing chapter. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2020 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 39

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 40

Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 40

Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 40

Things are really picking up speed. Excited to see how things unfold.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 39

So sad to hear of her father's death. I cant wait to read more soon and see where this journey takes her.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2020 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 39

So sad to hear of her father's death. I cant wait to read more soon and see where this journey takes her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2020 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

OMG so sad I think it is a set up I dont like the king he is evil

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2020 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 39

I wish someone would kill the king so Edward could take over.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 38

All caught up and I have to tell you I LOVE IT cant wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 38

 I am all caught up and I must say I LOVE IT 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2020 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

Im so glad that she and Jacob have come to a mutual respect and understanding for each other. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18

He trust Bella and I am sure he is in love with her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2020 5:51 AM Title: Prologue

WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a world to live in WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:51 AM Title: Prologue

fun

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2020 5:50 AM Title: Prologue

Fun

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

Angela is part of the set up. Probably the king too

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 37

Fascinating turn of events but was i the only one confused? She put jewelry on before she left... did she not notice it was different because Jacob came in? I had to read this chapter several times to make sure I got it right... or I think I got it right? Her jewelry was stolen and Felix had it right? 

Still love your story. Just a tad confused for a sec. Can't wait for the next chapter!! 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 37

I believe Angela had something to do with the necklace that Felix gave to Bella. She has been acting very suspicious lately.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2020 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 37

I had suspected the king, but it wasn't him.  Now I wonder about Angela and her "off" voice. Why would the rebels care who is chosen? But Angela certainly does.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2020 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

Very impressive lady Isabella 

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