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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2019 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

nice story so far.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2019 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

In the end here she says she felt like she was really competing for Edward's heart.  Does she not realize that she already has it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2019 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart.  Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2019 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart.  Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart.  Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

In the end her she said she was ready to really compete for Edward's heart.  Did she not listen to Edward??? She already has his heart if she wants it. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Team Bella ftw!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

Jacpb issuch a tool. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

At least Esme is seeing what a horrible person Tanya is.  Yea Jake is going to get himself and probably Bella in trouble.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2019 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2018 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

Jacob is such a dog. She needs to forget about him. Edward is who she should want. He messed up, but he cares about her so much.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am surprised that Bella let Jacob just climb on top of her and basicly attack her like that after what he did and how he did her. What in the world is up with Edward??? Why did he act such an ass?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2018 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya. 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

I think Bella should tell Edward what happened with Jacob and her it’s goin to hurt him yes but she wouldn’t be lying to him like everyone else does I am glad Bella it’s not taking anyone’s crap not Tanya or royals

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Jacob is such a wanker putting them in that situation.  Surprised she spoke to the family that way in the safe room.  Sucks that they tore up all her pictures.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2018 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hello I found this story on Facebook and I love it I cannot wait to read more

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Hello I found this story on Facebook and I love it I cannot wait to read more

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 15

Not sure I like the Jacob turn of events.  Tanya does need to go. What a biatch.  Poor Rosalie.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

Can't blame her for feeling anxious.  Glad he is being understanding.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya.  He needs to know what she is really like.  Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people.  Edward deserves better than her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 15

I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya.  He needs to know what she is really like.  Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people.  Edward deserves better than her. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hope Bella talks to Edward about Tanya.  He needs to know what she is really like.  Tanya would be a hateful Queen to her people.  Edward deserves better than her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

I ha e a feeling that Bella is going to be discussing Tanya with Edward the next time they talk. I dont blame her. Because who wants a Queen who can be so hateful to her people that she will be over. Tanya would make a horrible queen. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

I ha e a feeling that Bella is going to be discussing Tanya with Edward the next time they talk. I dont blame her. Because who wants a Queen who can be so hateful to her people that she will be over. Tanya would make a horrible queen. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2018 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am glad that she is honest with the Prince.  Also, I love his Aunt. Also love the Edward takes time for his little cousins. 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2018 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh, we're here. We've arrived. I'm a bit shocked that it picked up in these last two chapters, but as always I'm looking forward to more. After this is complete I'll read The Selection Series. 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2018 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awwwwwwww. Love it. Come on Bella and tell him about Tanya 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2018 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

New reader to your story..I like very much..I wonder if Bella will allow herself to fall in love wirh Edward...He really values her view point...I liked when he sent treats to Ren, that was very nice of him...well done..can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awe....

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well that was eye opening, hun Teddy?

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

So excited to see your update! Looking forward to the next chapter as always<3 don’t keep us hanging for too long. Confession. Definitely have an obsession checking your profile until the next update 

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 3:34 AM Title: Prologue

                 READ      CHAPTER       13      11-8-18

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2018 3:33 AM Title: Prologue

             READ      CHAPTER     13      11-8-18

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

Finally!!!!!!!! Prince Edward made his move on her!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

This chapter seemed different for some reason.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

This chapter seemed different for some reason.  

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Aha! She finally admits it to him and herself! Good for her -

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Tanya really needs to be kicked out for assaulting Bella.   Wonder if someone saw that besides Tanya and Bella. hmmm

Awww for first (and second) kiss

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

Tanya is such a snot.  Can't wait till he gets rid of her.  Wonder what Lauren did.   Good question about the history books..... but they say that books are written by the winners, not all the participants

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm a little lost.  Why did she drag him out of the meeting?  What they talked about came from what he said, not any topic she introduced.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2018 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update <3

Reviewer: Cutelilbeachgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2018 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 11

I literally binge read your stories and need more. Can’t wait for your update ❤️❤️

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2018 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Maggie :( 

And damn it's going to be a battle starting now.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Tanya didnt stay did she???

Reviewer: Momma Laura 517 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow - definitely a plot I've never seen before, and I'm really liking this so far - great job!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow Hope he gets rid of Jessica and Tanya soon before someone is really hurt. Glad she told him her story.  Jacob is a moron.

I have no issue with your chapter length, your posting schedule, or your plot.  This is your story to tell.  I'm just along for the ride and I appreciate you allowing me to go on it with you.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2018 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sweet that Bella is caring for her maids and such. Wonder what will happen to make Bella change her mind about a possibility of being with him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) :) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 11

Doesn't Bella realize she can help her family and friends the most by being chosen. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

Yes she is. She needs to give him a chance.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh my!! I wonder what Tanya did or said to provoke Maggie. I'm sure she will try the same with Bella soon. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

I wonder who will realize 1st that they are falling for each other.  



Author's Response:

Edward doesn't need to realize, he knows. Just needs her to put it together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love that Bella is so caring for her maids. Can't wait for another update. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, she kneed him in his privates.  That was not good. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, she kneed him in his privates.  That was not good. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

Well, she kneed him in his privates.  That was not good. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow,  8 are already gone. That was quick. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow,  8 are already gone. That was quick. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow,  8 are already gone. That was quick. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2018 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awe....

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love this Bella. I also like this Edward? Maybe. 

I like that this story isn't crazy and outlandish, but rather has a good balance between the fiction and realism. 

I appreciate all of the updates, I hope life balances itself out for you soon! 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love it can't wait to read more 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ouch for the allergic reaction.  Glad I don't like seafood.  lol.   Bella is such a great person, thinking of others.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Bella seems like such a sweet, unselfish person.  LOL for her taking E down.  Jenks is in for a surprise I'd wager.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

Glad that Bella isn't letting it go to her head.  I like that she gushed over her trio.   Wow 8 gone already.  Guess they gave some crappy/selfish/hateful type answers

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

Prince Edward seems nice. He does not seem arrogant.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Bella.  She's just being herself and the other girls already don't like her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2018 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds like Tanya already has her nails out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

This kind of sounds like the Bachelor.  Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

I think Jacob has someone else that he wants to marry. And that is the reason he is acting the way he is. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for explaining the cast or stages of  how their society works. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 4:10 PM Title: Prologue

This sounds very interesting.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2018 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story is so interesting. Bella needs to calm down and enjoy the ride.

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Nice. This is definitely the kind of Bella I was hoping for.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks.

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6

Aww Bella is so overwhelming to be in that position Edward sounds like he’s goin to keep an eye on MRS Isabella

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

By the looks of it Bella is the one that will do anything for her family she’s soo down to earth her kindness will get her far in the election

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

Sounds like Carlisle doesn't approve of the collection.  Does sound like people selling themselves to help their families out.



Author's Response:

I love when you review my fics. To answer your questions/comments, a family is the same caste unless something changes it. Marriage is the main way, Victoria no longer lives in the home, and Tyler moved out when his work being commissioned by the mayor gave him a small level of celebrity. Tanya is a pill now, but she slowly grows on you...like a fungus. And Bella won't let them get too much over on her. As for Carlisle, his issue isn't with the Collection, but with other things being the royal physician makes you privy to. He sees a lot but he cares for Edward as he has been at the palace since before he was born. And he is being honest when he says he wants Isabella to stick around. Having him in this gives me a whole side plot that th original didn't have and I love it.

 

AGW

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sounds like Bella's personality and kindness will be taken advantage of by the other contestants.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds like Skanya is going to be a real biatch to be around. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow, some hellacious rules....which I'm sure don't apply to the men.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

Whoa...exciting!!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

hmm, wonder if Jacob is trying to have his cake and eat it too....with another piece of cake on the side.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow interesting that different people in the same house are different castes.  The Jacob thing at the end doesn't sound good for Bella.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 5:57 PM Title: Prologue

Lemme guess, Renee submits for her without her knowledge?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks.

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