Date: 19 Nov 2019 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
This is a cruel world! Within his possibilities, Edward helped them, but to all the others it just seems to be cruel and archaic. Bella is in a difficult position. She is shocked, doesn't want to carry on and must fear for herself. I fear what is to come!
Date: 19 Nov 2019 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
Finally, they talked with each other and they both know they want a future together. But Jacob and Tanya dancing together worries me. Are they plotting against Bella and Edward? Thank you so much for this chapter!
Date: 19 Nov 2019 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
OMG BELLA GET A GRIP. He said he doesn't like Tanya, and has said he's in love with you like 80 different times. You and Rose are partners on this project therefore you'd get sacked together. I'm about to shake her I swear. She's so dense, like how was she like "omg Teddy's definitely into me and I feel so loved." a few chapters ago and now we're back to "woe is me, but I can't leave because I love him (and my family needs this)" UGH.
Date: 13 Nov 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
I mean... I understand why Bella is insecure the past with Jake, Edward Jr. being unreasonable at times, and Edward Sr. dismissing her so wholly that even insiders can see it and tell the public... but damn Edward Jr. has grown and has declared himself time and time again from the very beginning. If she doesn't get over herself and stop making things out to be worse than they are I'm going to have to sneak into your dreams as a character so I can slap her into the right frame of mind. Edward loves her, and the country has seen her in a warm and loving light. All she needs to do is continue to be herself and focus on her future as princess and eventually queen. Someone shake her!
Another great update, and as always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you are well, as a creator myself I understand the various pressures and blocks that come with creativity and are often compounded by real life responsibilities. So here's to wishing you warm and relaxing baths with your favorite drink!
Date: 04 Sep 2019 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Jacob gets the hint. Does he want Bella to face what Alice did? Bella needs to trust Edward. Once they are in charge, they can work to change things. Bella needs to remember that this is the best way to change things in her country.
Date: 26 Aug 2019 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't blame Bella for her reaction. Alice was her friend. Why could Edward not have given her some type of warning about what was going to happen. At least talked to her about his feelings about having to do it before it happened.
Date: 20 Aug 2019 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Both Alice and Jasper knwthe consequences, but chose not to wait until the end of the collection. They were shown mercy. Bella and Jacob know as well. Bella has been very foolish with Jacob and allowing him access to her room.
Bella is upset about the punishment, but she is rejecting the law not hating Edward.
Date: 03 Jul 2019 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for this chapter! I love this glimpse we get into Bella's family especially her relationship to her father! I enjoy reading this story very much. You are a very talented writer! Please keep going! To do many out here your writing is a source of joy!
Date: 01 Jul 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Why is Jacob interested in Bella again? As I recall, he broke up with her because she was a Five and he was a Six. Now that she's a Three he's interested again?
He regretted it right after he dumped her, but also as a guard he is now a 2, so he is higher in status than she is and could provide better.
Date: 14 Jun 2019 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
A question, I want to know what the numbers mean with each girl. Interesting storyline
The numbers represent their castes, or social class. So each number have specific jobs they are allowed to do, and marriage outside your caste changes the females caste to their new husband's.
Date: 28 Nov 2018 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Bella should tell Edward what happened with Jacob and her it’s goin to hurt him yes but she wouldn’t be lying to him like everyone else does I am glad Bella it’s not taking anyone’s crap not Tanya or royals