[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2018 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow they are all still in pain but maybe life will help them all heal a little more now that they’re all together in the same city
Date: 22 Jul 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Sounds like both kids have a lot road back to face
Date: 21 Jul 2018 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the progression. I look forward to seeing when Edward and Bellas paths cross.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
This was gut wrenching! I cried all the way through it.
Well done
Thank You
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh don't tell me i can already feel the direction the story is taking...definitely more drama to come...
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my goodness...how sad and tragic...
Date: 19 Jul 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay now I see where we are going. Not the details. Thank you
Date: 18 Jul 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Charlie reached out to Carlisle about Edward. I hope Esme can beat her cancer.
Date: 18 Jul 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Charlie reached out to Carlisle about Edward. I hope Esme can beat her cancer.
Date: 18 Jul 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Charlie reached out to Carlisle about Edward. I hope Esme can beat her cancer.
Date: 18 Jul 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh Charlie Charlie no wonder Renee is there to help you see now you kind of know Edward feels awful don’t blame him please I hope Edward doesn’t loose it when he sees Bella
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if Angela's spirit was trying to help Edward out as well. When he sees Bella being his mom's doctor, that might send him off again. I'm worried for the both of them.
Date: 15 Jul 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my, poor Edward and poor Bella.
Date: 15 Jul 2018 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, 6000 words. I was so into it that it didn't seem that long. Awesome 1st chapter.
Date: 14 Jul 2018 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow . Powerful chapter. You have me tearing up here while I am eating my lunch.
Date: 12 Jul 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my this is just bad for everyone
Date: 11 Jul 2018 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you, lost my husband this year. 52 yrs married. I find this subject difficult to talk about.
Date: 11 Jul 2018 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Beautiful written. I cant imagine experiencing this kind of anguish, what either family is going through.
Date: 11 Jul 2018 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Beautiful written. I cant imagine experiencing this kind of anguish, what either family is going through.
Date: 11 Jul 2018 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Beautifully heartbreaking chapter.
Love your writing!!!
Date: 11 Jul 2018 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes, it took all I had to not bawl my eyes out. I have to say though, if it was the bitter old musician who was passed up, Charlie better take him down with all the power of the government (and Carlisle) behind him.
Date: 11 Jul 2018 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Dear lord but that was heart wrenching, I hope it gets better and not so sad, I love you guys both but that was wow!!!! I'm damn near speechless!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward and Bella both are just destroyed. :(
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2018 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Cow.....What a hell of a start. E's going to beat himself up for a long time I'm afraid.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2018 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love both of you separately, so together is even better!!!!!
I was super intrigued by the summary. I loved the first chapter and can't wait to read more!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
My heart broke for Edward and Charlie. I’m sure Bella will be devastated when she finds out if she doesn’t already feel it. I can’t wait for more. 🌹
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2018 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
That chapter was heart shattering. So many people will be devastated.
I wonder if the fire was an accident or if that disgruntled musician that didn't get Angela's job had anything to do with it. hmmm...... I'm a paranoid suspicious bitch. LOL
I'm hooked already.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW that was heart ripping I cant wait for more OMG. My heart is crying for all
Date: 04 Jul 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I so love reading your stories! I read them all! Cant wait for this story to update!
Date: 04 Jul 2018 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. You guys rock. What an awesome start. I wanted to keep reading the chapter over and over again.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2018 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
What an amazing first chapter! I can't wait till next time.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!! My two favorite authors have come together and created a masterpiece😍😍
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2018 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness that went from fun and beautiful to completely heartbreaking
Date: 04 Jul 2018 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this already. Of course I would read anything by you two. I am never disappointed! Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Jul 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter, looking forward to the rest.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Tufano79 and I are loving the story we are writing and hope you will continue to enjoy reading it.
Date: 03 Jul 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
What an amazing start to this story. I'm hooked already. Look forward to seeing how the adventure unfolds.
Author's Response:
Tufano79 and I are so thankful for the beautiful review. We are loving writing this story together and we hope that you will enjoy reading it.