Date: 20 Jul 2020 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story. The chemistry between Edward and Bella is undeniable. I'm quite positive their citrusy times will be sizzling! I am afraid of how Bella will react to the news about that night! I see some bumps in the road for these two unfortunately! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2020 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
Thanks for the update!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2020 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, Peter is a real jerk. I can't believe he talked about Bella like that in front of the Chief. Knowing she was his daughter. Does he even have a brain? I wish Edward would tell Bella before they make love.
Date: 19 Jul 2020 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yay for Charlie putting Peter in his place. Im so glad Edward and Bella are so head over heels for each other
Date: 19 Jul 2020 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yay for Charlie putting Peter in his place. Im so glad Edward and Bella are so head over heels for each other
Date: 19 Jul 2020 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
Peter is kind of douchey..... ugh..... He acts like he's never been let out in public before.
Everyone else seems like they are having a good time, except for having to deal with the sleezy douche canoe.'
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Jul 2020 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my I loved it now what will the investigation turn up and will Bella and Edward have the night of the dreams
Date: 18 Jul 2020 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
Peter is a total dick OMG what an ass hole. Charlie can see the love so can Esme and Carlisle now just Edward and Bella need to admitt it.
Date: 14 Jul 2020 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is it just Bella that's not aware of Edward's connection to her sister's death?
Date: 11 Jul 2020 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
She is Def not shy about talking about what she wants. Hawt Hawt Hawt
Date: 11 Jul 2020 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sadly I don't think Lauren is gone for good. Ouch for burns . Aww for them setting up for benefit. Think he needs to tell B about her sister before someone else does it maliciously.
Date: 07 Jul 2020 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I am getting worried that Edward has not told Bella that he was the one who tried to save her sister. I'm worried about Bella's reaction.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love it and their moms are too funny and sweet
Date: 05 Jul 2020 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 05 Jul 2020 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Fire Fire Fire is what Bella is saying lol. Moms are so cute
Date: 05 Jul 2020 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that fire isnt the only thing burning! Hot chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that fire isnt the only thing burning! Hot chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Esme and Renee are going to be as happy as a kid in DisneyLand knowing Bella and Edward are going to the benefit together. :) I wonder if the gossip will flow.
Bella and Edward's dinner date was steaming up until that douche of an arsonist ruined the night. Being a cock blocker makes the crime of arson twice as bad. Shakes head seriously..... ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 05 Jul 2020 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it!
Date: 28 Jun 2020 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 27 Jun 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Okay.. onward.. good story
Date: 22 Jun 2020 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Has Bella made the final connection between Angela and Edward? There has been no mention of her accepting the fact that Edward was the last person to be near Angela.
I'm still working on the identity of the arsonist. Wondering if this person has a vendetta against Charlie.
Date: 22 Jun 2020 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hm, will Rose meet Emmett at the fundraiser?
How long does Edward wait to ask Bella to be his date?
Date: 22 Jun 2020 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward and Bella should have pressed charges for assault. I have a feeling they will both regret that decision. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jun 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love it so very much more please
Date: 22 Jun 2020 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad they put that bitch in her place.
Date: 22 Jun 2020 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a scene at the coffee shop.
Date: 22 Jun 2020 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe Angela needs to visit them both again to confirm that it's a good fit.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hm, Charlie did exactly let Edward know he understands what happened and that Edward didn't cause nor underperform his duties as a firefighter.
Please keep Rosealie as his partner and don't let her make a tool of herself by fawning over him.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Why didn't Esme review with Edward the connection between her doctor and his past?
Date: 21 Jun 2020 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great update!!!
Lucy deserves more than she got!
Date: 21 Jun 2020 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
The time jump was the perfect way to move this story into the next phase of each character's life.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Does Bella know how Edward is connected to the fire where her sis died?
Date: 21 Jun 2020 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love assertive Bella, way to stake her claim and get the trash thrown out at the same time. Very impressive.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Shattered lives barely holding on.
Wondering if arson is involved? The guy that was passed over for the position Angela earned.
Date: 21 Jun 2020 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very intense beginning, grabbing my attention and pulling on the heart strings.
Date: 19 Jun 2020 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story. Glad Esme is cancer free.
Date: 13 Jun 2020 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 11 Jun 2020 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you so much for this chapter!!!!
It's been a while, but somethimes real life gets all of you ...
I really enjoyed reading it!
And waiting for Edward to ask Bella out ;-)
Greetings from Germany,
leinchen
Date: 09 Jun 2020 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Charlie reached out
Date: 09 Jun 2020 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I dont know if I can read this. Heart breaking
Date: 09 Jun 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 7
Aww for the two lovebirds and their dreams . Can't wait for Rose to meet Emmett. Woo hoo for Esme's news
Date: 08 Jun 2020 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
So happy to see this story back!!!
Date: 07 Jun 2020 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww for Bella and her dreams. Hopefully he'll tell Bella about the Angela thing before she finds out herself.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
I wonder if Edward is having sexy dreams about Bella as well. Bella is sure having some hot ones. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 07 Jun 2020 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love you both so much and so happy to see an update with this story thanks so much
Date: 05 Jun 2020 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
I posted on ff and didn't come up. Not sure if it isn't working again. I will state you really should have more views and reviews than you do. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 15 Feb 2019 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter I'm asoltely intrigued. I can't stop reading!
Date: 15 Feb 2019 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thank you so much for this story and this chapter! You two have an amazing style of writing! The story goes straight to the heart... I have been crying with Bella, her parents and Edward.
Date: 19 Sep 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Who wouldn't daydream of Edward? She be a fool not to meet up with him. I hope she will be able to handle the news about the connection between Edward and Angela.
Date: 11 Sep 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 10 Sep 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the update!!!!
Date: 10 Sep 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 10 Sep 2018 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was a very nice meeting with sparkes flying loved it.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome their coffee interaction. E needs to tell B now about him and Angela before she finds out another way.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah! What a great connection.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
I liked their meeting. I'm a little concerned that Edward did not tell her that it was Angela that he lost. I mean I know it will be hard to tell her but i hope Bella does not think he is keeping that from her.
Date: 10 Sep 2018 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Super glad to read their interest in each other. I'm worried about another arsonist. Hmmm.....
Date: 10 Sep 2018 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think Edward and Charlie will be ok but they still need to talk. Does Bella know about Edward's past.
Date: 09 Sep 2018 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved it what a chance meeting hehehehehe more please
Date: 17 Aug 2018 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Life is good and getting better
Date: 17 Aug 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG his world just fell apart again poor guy
Date: 15 Aug 2018 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie and Edward need to have a serious talk. They have to clear the air and Angela needs to talk to Edward again and maybe her sister Bella.
Date: 14 Aug 2018 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Reading this chapter on the anniversary of my Dad's bday in heaven was not smart. Good story though.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 08 Aug 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 08 Aug 2018 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can understand E's freak out. Guessing B doesn't know about E's involvement that night yet.
Rose sounds awesome.
Can't wait for more but I get RL. I'm still not caught up on all my reading from when I was in school.
Date: 06 Aug 2018 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
So Ed is in. Good chapter
Date: 06 Aug 2018 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well it seems Edward is diving right in. So Edward knows who Bella is now, but i wonder if Bella knows the history between Edward and Angela.
Date: 06 Aug 2018 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well it seems Edward is diving right in. So Edward knows who Bella is now, but i wonder if Bella knows the history between Edward and Angela.
Date: 06 Aug 2018 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow oh wow Edward has had one eventful day first Bella and now Charlie but I think his dream might have helped him
Date: 06 Aug 2018 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Woohoo! Back in action and Esme is on the mend! Great chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2018 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2018 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I cant imagine the pit in Edward's stomach at seeing Bella, then Charlie later. What a big day to tackle his demons
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for the update..well done. .I wonder if Edward will come back for his mother..until you post again
Date: 01 Aug 2018 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank you for the update..well done. .I wonder if Edward will come back for his mother..until you post again
Date: 29 Jul 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow surprised that no one mentioned the doctors name before they got there. Wonder if it was intentional
Date: 29 Jul 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
they are coming home cant wait till they meet
Date: 28 Jul 2018 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
That is terrible that no one thought to tell Edward that Bella was his mom's doctor.
Date: 28 Jul 2018 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward. He doesn't have all the information to connect the dots.
Date: 28 Jul 2018 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved the interactions between the "kids" and their respective parents. Very touching.
Date: 27 Jul 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved the update!
Date: 26 Jul 2018 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
It is so sad. The empty lives they are leading. Angela would not have liked their souls dying with her.
Date: 26 Jul 2018 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is such an emotional story. I keep tearing up.
Date: 25 Jul 2018 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
When I came across the summary and read it, it drew me in. After reading the first three chapters, I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. So far the story has made me laugh and cry so it feels like a story worth waiting for. Hope to see additional chapters regularly!! Thank you
Date: 23 Jul 2018 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
My heart is breaking for all of them and yes I cryed OMG.