Date: 21 Jul 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved it!
alice and jasper deserved what they got!
they will be feeling the pain forever? so they can't have
sex with anyone? that's hilarious...
btw, who is bella's father? one of the volturis?
if so, i looked for any hints but didn't find any...hmmm...
Date: 01 Jul 2018 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked your "twist" on the mating/imprinting bond. You need to explore this further. Have you ever read "Open Up Next to You" or "Tender is the Night" by LJ Summers? (It's on ff.net) That may inspire you to continues this idea in a a more comprehensive-developed story. Your thought process in this one-shot concerning the mating bond was truly unique. :)