Date: 20 Jul 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
i liked this story quite a bit. i liked that alice was evil, since she's so annoyingly
bubbly, loud, a busybody and does manipulate others to do her bidding. there were
some things i did not agree with such as in the end when char became like charlie's
second daughter...she did work with alice who wanted to kill bella, his real daughter...
that part was weird for me. yes, she did so reluctantly but she could have spoken
to peter at any time. it was a stupid thought that anyone would be upset with
something that happened as a human since she didn't choose the vampire life.
who would have thought charlie and esme? anyways, this story was really
entertaining...thanks for writing!
Date: 26 Jun 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
hello,
thank you for R&R
it is fully translated and posted on Ffn if you want to read it quickly
have a good day,
cathy
Date: 26 Jun 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, c'est un vraiment bon! Je suis heureux que vous le traduisiez dans le français pour les speakers français! :-)
le PS - j'ai utilisé un programme de traduction pour traduire ma révision, je ne peux pas parler le français bien