Date: 15 Jun 2018 12:38 AM Title: Daddy's Little Girl
Bella def needs to be strong to put all these wankers in their places. Jacob is such an arsehole. I'm sure there is more to the story than you snuck in at the end though.
Each chapter will give you a few more pieces to the story.
It really means a lot to me you take the time to review each chapter. You give me motivation to write more.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 8:25 PM Title: New Friends, Old Foes and Hot Flames
Wowsers. You are building up the B&C part nicely. Jacob is such an arse. Sounds like most of the town council is out for themselves with this land deal they want. LOVE Bobby
I like to take my time builidng relationships. Jacob will become even more of a problem.
Sounds like you already have a good grasp on what is going on.
Bobby is fun to write.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 7:43 PM Title: The Good Doctor
Go Bas Ass Carlisle squashing the bug with his car. The developer thing makes sense and I'm betting they are in cahoots with the Quilutes to make lots of money
Most only see Carlisle as a sweet and gentle man. He will be bad ass when it comes to Bella.
Yeah, they are all after the evils of money.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 2:25 AM Title: The Good Doctor
Well dang firl you know how to deliver the mystery and this is one heck of a great read..looking forward to more.
I've missed you too. I hope everything is better now for you.
Most of the times, I write in spurts. Then others, I got nothing lol
Tomorrow I will send you a PM on fanfic, please don't feel you have to answer it if you don't have time.
Hope we can chat soon!
Date: 11 Jun 2018 12:55 AM Title: Going Home
Pumpkin..Long time no see and here you are with another winner...I haven't had much time to sit and read or write over the past few years and have missed all my old friends..was having troubles with RL and it gets in the way of playtime..Loooking forward to more of this one..take care sweet girl..Nan