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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 10:59 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.

Why isn't she happy that he's a made man, now? Wasn't her dad one? Maybe because that life killed him, she isn't keen on him being in it? This takes guts, to infiltrate that life. It could get him killed...but I don't think you'll kill off the lead character of your story...



Author's Response:

She's got secrets of her own! It does make her happy, but what if he leaves her behind?

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 7:53 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.

Oh Edward you are soo out of it she almost got rape

Author's Response:

See, he's not paying attention.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 7:24 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.

THE WAITING IS KILLING ME SMALLS!!!! 

READ YOU SOON



Author's Response:

I'm trying! I don't normally post twice a week. LMAO

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 7:23 PM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!!!!! I'M GREEDY I JUST WANT MORE!!!!!!!!

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I do think they're all over the place in length.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2018 7:19 PM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

: )  WOO HOO!!! I AM SO EXCITED YOU'VE DECIDED TO CONTINUE. 

                     READ YOU SOON 



Author's Response:

You made me laugh!

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 5:10 PM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

Interesting storyline



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 2:54 AM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

That bathroom scene was HILARIOUS!!  I love mob stories! I am excited for this one! I love your writing and can't wait for each chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love to hear how excited you are!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2018 8:37 AM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

Now he will have something to keep his mind off of Bella unless she is going to be his nurse OMG lol



Author's Response:

Lol, maybe she will!

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2018 6:27 AM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

love it!!! More please! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2018 4:35 AM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

Poor Edward Bella likes to tease him

Author's Response:

She really enjoys it!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2018 4:16 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

nice story so far



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2018 12:33 AM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 11:56 PM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

Well he sat ed the Don he will be appreciated



Author's Response:

He certanly will.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2018 10:44 PM Title: How I wound up with a bullet hole in my shoulder

I can see how this might be a favorite chapter of yours. Edward's run-in with a slippery bathroom floor was hilarious and sounded painful. This story has such a different tone than others of yours that I've read. I mean that in the best of ways. You are very versatile in what you write and it's a trait I admire! So Edward just took a bullet in his shoulder protecting the boss? That should build points in his favor. This Bella seems like she's adapting to her circumstances well. Thanks for another entertaining story!



Author's Response:

I always wonder if mine all sound the same underneath it all. It's good to know they don't! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 5:06 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

Sounds great cant wait for more and for Carlisle to die



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you!

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 1:47 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

This story is Awesome!! I cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2018 1:25 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

Well these aren't the do any thing for you CULLENS



Author's Response:

Definitely not!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 11:21 PM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

I didn't read the contest. I quit doing that a while back for various reasons. Suffice to say, the people I read who enter contests, are usually the best ones to read and I get them when they, like you, post the entries after the contest ends on their own sites. This one looks promising, although I must say that there are at least 3 other mafia stories I still read from previous mafia contests. Your first chapter is succinct, gives us maximum information, and engages me already. You also promise E and B are safe from character death, even though others aren't. Thanks for that!! I'll read here when I can as I avoid FFn when possible due to their contradictory policies. Thanks also for the warnings about lemons and storyline. Both are perfectly fine with me! See you next time!



Author's Response:

It's always good to have you along for the ride!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 9:20 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 5:11 AM Title: How I came to be living with a mafia princess turned stripper.

Aww Bella

Author's Response:

:) Thank you for reading!

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