[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2018 6:40 PM Title: When I experienced pain that was worse than all the violence one should have to endure in a lifetime.
I hope he comes back to her
Author's Response:
Hold on to that hope.
Date: 24 Jul 2018 10:26 AM Title: When I experienced pain that was worse than all the violence one should have to endure in a lifetime.
oh no. I truly didn't see this coming. Edward is gone? They're over? No, I don't expect you to tell me. I will need to read it for myself. Damn, I don't much like non-HEA stories, but there are a few exceptions. We shall see...
Author's Response:
I've got you, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2018 2:52 AM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
Thank you for the update..Well done..Emmett is gone or soon will be..until you post again
Author's Response:
Yes indeed. Emmett is no longer a threat.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2018 9:15 PM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
Hootay she admitted she loves him!! I'm worried now that carlisle knows edward is a fed.
Author's Response:
It could go either way.
Date: 21 Jul 2018 8:02 PM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
Wow. I a. So very confused but intrigued. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I hope the next chapter answers your questions.
Date: 21 Jul 2018 7:49 AM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2018 4:28 AM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
Emmett got what he deserved
Author's Response:
Yeah he did!
Date: 21 Jul 2018 3:28 AM Title: When I had a screaming match with Carlisle.
OMG that was the most gag inducing gore I've read in a while. Good thing I wasn't eating a meal while I was reading it. How is Emmett not dead yet? Is the plan to have Jasper come in and think he was killing Emmett? Thanks for the reveal here. I don't know how this is going to end well. Sorry but I'm a bit queasy from reading this...
Author's Response:
Emmett's life is going to be cut very short.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 8:59 PM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
When bella gets emotionsl i'm glad edward becomes mushy. It makes my heart happy!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he can't resist, can he?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 4:09 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 3:27 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
Thank you for the update..I hope Edward gets out of this alive and not in trouble..until you post again
Author's Response:
That's starting to look debatable.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 1:12 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 17 Jul 2018 1:06 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
So you implied that Bella was up to something. Is she undercover too? No, forget I asked. I really don't want to know. Really, I don't.. What a mess. Garrett is dead? The garroter? Sounds like they were expecting to be hit, the shipment people, that is. Was someone setting Bella up? What a tangled web we weave...
Until next time...
Author's Response:
So many answers come in the next chapter. And the one after that. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2018 1:02 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
I kinda want to hug Edward and tell him he is already in too deep
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is. I think he knows.
Date: 17 Jul 2018 12:15 AM Title: When the death toll rose higher than expected.
can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2018 10:20 PM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
Thank you for the update...until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 15 Jul 2018 12:21 PM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2018 1:07 AM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
Poor edward he is having a rough time today. Belka needs to give him a quicki & make it all better. :)
Author's Response:
LMAO not a bad idea.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2018 3:45 AM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 14 Jul 2018 1:22 AM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
My M.O., when reading a story, is to get immersed in each chapter as it comes. Read and digest it as thoroughly as I can. Glean what details I can understand, at the time. I don't really try to figure out any hidden agenda a character has unless it blatently comes to stare me in the face. With subtle indications, as this story gives, I try to just stay in the moment, go with the flow, and enjoy the story. What Bella is really up to has not yet become obvious, but I know from comments that she IS up to something specific and has some kind of agenda. I prefer to let all that unfold, naturally, during the story and not reach for guesses unless something smacks me in the face. I love how you've given subtle stage-setting clues, but nothing overt. I enjoy how each step leads up to the big reveal, whatever it is. Edward is more obvious, but his end isn't. Thanks for giving me such lovely entertainment!!
Author's Response:
That's the way I would want you to read, so that's a good thing!
Date: 14 Jul 2018 12:25 AM Title: When I sort of made friends with Jasper.
Poor Edward. I hope he makes it though this.
Author's Response:
OOh, I cant say anything.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2018 8:02 AM Title: When it all went to shit.
Very interesting that she isn't getting completely naked now that edward is around. Also i wonder was she trying to get stuff to use against jake so she could protect Edward when it's all over. Or she is setting traps but doing so in ways to save edward.
Author's Response:
Those are interesting theories!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2018 1:41 AM Title: When it all went to shit.
Thank you for the update...I don't like Emmett in this story...He is an ASS!!!! I don't know how Masen is going to get out of this...until you post again
Author's Response:
I barely know myself! Thank you.
Author's Response:
I barely know myself! Thank you.
Date: 10 Jul 2018 7:41 PM Title: When it all went to shit.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2018 3:42 AM Title: When it all went to shit.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Jul 2018 2:50 AM Title: When it all went to shit.
If she was wrong about where Emmett was, maybe she was wrong about other details. That could be dangerous, for her and for Edward. You ask a question about her before the chapter begins. Are you saying that we still haven't gotten what she is up to? Seems so. I'm just reading and making observations...
Author's Response:
Of the vocal readers, most hate Bella. I've given them no reason to like her, really. A few have seen the façade, if you will, and they love her. I wanted to know if there were others, especially after a chapter where she is so harsh toward Edward.
Date: 09 Jul 2018 12:21 AM Title: When I thought Bella was going to kill Emmett in front of witnesses.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2018 3:09 PM Title: When I thought Bella was going to kill Emmett in front of witnesses.
Poor Bella
Author's Response:
I feel bad too.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2018 5:17 AM Title: When I thought Bella was going to kill Emmett in front of witnesses.
Emmett def. has to be killed first. He is truly horrible!!
Author's Response:
He's definitely first!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2018 4:59 AM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
I love that bella needed him to pull off the hit. Her walls are slowly coming down.
Author's Response:
They are, a little bit.
Date: 06 Jul 2018 5:03 AM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
lol you so funny who could turn down a lemon or two :). Bella has one down and two to go then what are they going to do. I think Edward is going to have to retire from his job.
Author's Response:
There was a guest reviewer on ffn that said it was all angry lemons and no content. That was a dig at her, lol. Thank you for reading!
Date: 05 Jul 2018 1:37 PM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
Edward will not be able to walk away but how will he stay
Author's Response:
He's facing a huge conundrum.
Date: 03 Jul 2018 9:21 PM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
great update
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 03 Jul 2018 8:55 PM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
No I am ok how jimmy went down I really hope Edward leaves he’s job to be with Bella or maybe Bella can leave the mafia after her vengeance
Author's Response:
We'll have to see if they're able to work something out.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2018 5:32 PM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
thank you for the updates...I hope Edward gets out of this, I don't want him in trouble...Bella is in love with him..I'm sure of it...until you post again
Author's Response:
Yes, she sure is. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2018 1:44 PM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Jul 2018 10:52 PM Title: When I discovered not even a shovel could dig me out of this hole.
I KNOW you're not sorry LOL! Neither am I. I am glad James got a quick end. Maybe he deserved to be tortured, but I liked his end just the way it was. I agree that Edward is in deep. How will he get out of this with his superiors after the job is done? Will he turn Bella? Go rogue? Something else? I have no idea, but am going to enjoy this all along the way until it ends! Thanks.
Author's Response:
I can always count on you to go with the flow! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2018 1:47 PM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
I don't trust Carlisle either. I hate to think this could be their last time in bed together.
:(
Author's Response:
He was definitely worried it could be.
Date: 02 Jul 2018 7:50 AM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 01 Jul 2018 8:39 PM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
Jimmy is a dead man what a creep
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is. To both.
Date: 01 Jul 2018 8:25 PM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
She is just as hooked on him as he is on her.
Author's Response:
She is! Not everybody notices that yet.
Date: 01 Jul 2018 7:22 PM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
He will never be able to keep her out he is hooked
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure you're right.
Date: 30 Jun 2018 9:31 PM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 30 Jun 2018 4:42 AM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
Oh god, I hope this doesn't end in tragedy for either Edward or Bella, but I fear that is where you're going with this story. I'll read it, how could I not, but am cringing inside as to how this will end...
Author's Response:
It certainly does feel that way.
Author's Response:
It certainly does feel that way.
Author's Response:
It certainly does feel that way.
Date: 30 Jun 2018 2:07 AM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
I have no idea about Ed seems this undercover job has him turning a blind eye to a lot of things. Then he walks away she gets hurt again
Author's Response:
I guess it depends on who you're rooting for.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2018 11:55 PM Title: The exact moment I realized the end of this case would break me.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Jun 2018 6:46 AM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
Eeeewwwwww James sounds so slimy. Just like I always picture the actor that played him in the original. I didn't like him AT ALL! So a lot happened in this chapter. Things are moving quickly. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Slimy and smarmy is how I picture him.
Date: 26 Jun 2018 3:49 AM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
She will go bunkers Edward be careful she will loose it
Author's Response:
She will certainly lose it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2018 3:17 AM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
Jimmy's body will not be found!! I think carlisle has realized he has an ally in tony.
Author's Response:
Jimmy is in for some hurting, that's for sure.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2018 12:10 AM Title: When I finally stumbled upon the truth.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 25 Jun 2018 11:01 AM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
I am still distrustful.
Author's Response:
I understand.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2018 10:35 AM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
Looks like all he needs to do is change his moral code only when it comes to Bella and they have a chance at making it! Hahahaha!
Author's Response:
You have a point!
Date: 24 Jun 2018 1:59 AM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
great update
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Jun 2018 11:02 AM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
Not sure about her motives or not
Author's Response:
I can't blame you.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:46 PM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 22 Jun 2018 11:31 PM Title: When I realized I'd gone too far to turn back around.
I still don't know what to make of Bella. I'm guessing her tough girl routine around Edward is either a remnant of the persona she uses in the mob world, or is some kind of protection against showing Edward her true self, or maybe both or some kind of mix. Either way, their sex is hot and I'm loving the story.
Author's Response:
I loved your last sentence, it made me laugh. It's the combination of both.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2018 4:14 PM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
Yes
Author's Response:
Yes to she's still mistrustful or yes you understand her?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2018 2:48 AM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
as I said before, Edward is F***ed... Great story so far, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Lol, yes he is. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2018 2:02 AM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
Edward is f***ed... Great update...
Author's Response:
Yes, I believe he is. Lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2018 7:43 PM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
I think he will do what he has to if it comes down to protecting her. I love how she has him so wrapped around her every whim. He fights it but all she has to do is offer some intamcy and he is at her beckon call.
about your puppy... I know when our corgie had surgery and could only eat rice the vet told me to boil it with chicken breast and then take the chicken out. It flavors the rice with chicken juices. My corgie devoured it.
Author's Response:
I tried making it with beef broth. I don't know, but the pumpkin seemed to work. Thank you for the suggestion, because I'm sure it'll be needed in the future.
Edward is head over heels. You might be the only one that loves it, lol.
Date: 19 Jun 2018 1:08 AM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
I hope he doesn't. I hate that she asked. She seems rather spoiled.
Author's Response:
She has a lot of issues, that's for sure.
Date: 19 Jun 2018 12:17 AM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
I don't think he will.
Author's Response:
The circumstances will make the decision.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2018 12:05 AM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 18 Jun 2018 10:16 PM Title: When I realized I would kill for Bella Swan.
Will he go through with it? Hmmm...let's see...he has already omitted things in reports to his superior, is already avoiding contacting Black, is in deep with Bella...I think there is a chance he will. This Fed Edward does have lines he won't cross...now...but they may get blurry. Just my not-so-humble opinion.
Author's Response:
It seems like the lines are blurring and shifting all the time.
Date: 17 Jun 2018 8:46 PM Title: When Bella proved she would keep me on my toes.
I hope your puppy is ok. Edward is so confused but in a good way lol
Author's Response:
It's hard to tell, he's gone back and forth today. Edward is in a lust-induced haze half the time.
Date: 16 Jun 2018 8:40 PM Title: When Bella proved she would keep me on my toes.
That was hot. I loved it! I'm such a pushover for lemons...LOL! So is Emmett setting Edward up? or is he really beginning to trust him? I guess I'll keep reading to find out. Thanks and I hope your dog is OK.
Author's Response:
I think Ill have to make you read on to find out! Lol.
Thanks, he's acting a little more energetic today.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2018 5:02 PM Title: When Bella proved she would keep me on my toes.
Sorry to here about your dog. :(
It seems like bella really does want him but she knows nothing can come of them so she is keeping her walls up so she won't get feelings for him. Shewas wearing that outfit to entice him & she REALLY likes fighting with him!
Author's Response:
You hit the nail on the head. ;)
Thank you, he's doing better so far.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2018 2:17 PM Title: When Bella proved she would keep me on my toes.
:) I hope you're dog feels better soon
Author's Response:
He does seem to be much better today. Thank you.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 11:58 PM Title: How I came to realize I'm not invincible.
OMG that was tough for him to let go without steping in and getting killed.
Author's Response:
He really hated it.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 10:47 PM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
I think she is messing with his mind because she is confused on her feelings.
Author's Response:
You would be correct. ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2018 1:54 PM Title: How I came to realize I'm not invincible.
I'm happy to see this side of bella. It's hard sometimes to keep remembering she is part of the mafia too.
Author's Response:
She's probably best described as bi-polar.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 7:35 AM Title: How I came to realize I'm not invincible.
Thank you for the time quick update
Author's Response:
You're welcome. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2018 11:56 PM Title: How I came to realize I'm not invincible.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 11 Jun 2018 11:12 PM Title: How I came to realize I'm not invincible.
Well that was unpleasant. Jasper and Emmett are bad bad men in this story. I should have expected something like this to happen sooner or later. I'm glad, though, that Edward didn't blow his cover and get himself killed. I do hope Bella fucks him soon and relieves his blue balls. Thanks for the info you send in a PM to me. I had truly either forgotten that bit of info or not noticed it to begin with. My bad, either way.
Author's Response:
That's quite all right! I forget things about my own stories and I have docs to reference! LOL. Jasper and Emmett are definitely the bad guys in this one. Edward needs some relief, and I'm pretty sure Bella is going to be the one to take care of it.
Date: 11 Jun 2018 7:33 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2018 6:48 AM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
Poor edward can't catch a break! Yeah he got bella twice in the sack but he is a nice guy and bella just wants to get her O on at this point.
Author's Response:
That's basically what she wants, and info on who killed her dad.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 8:03 AM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
The sex was hot hot hot, but I'm a teensy bit confused. Does she know he's an undercover cop? Does he know she's looking for who killed her dad? I'm thinking no to the first one and yes to the second. Watching her moods swing back and forth is making me dizzy. He is in deep with her, isn't he? That could bite him in the ass, in the end. Love this story!
Author's Response:
She does know. In the previous chapter she mentioned that she was surprised to find that he was a fed and not a criminal, which she originally pegged him for.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 4:25 AM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
Not sure about this chapter. Bella confuses me.
Author's Response:
That's okay, she's supposed to. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2018 12:05 AM Title: When I realized it's a terrible idea to mix secrets and sex.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 06 Jun 2018 5:04 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
Love it, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2018 1:08 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
Love it ! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2018 3:24 AM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
The names of these chapters make me laugh out loud! I was not expecting this twist at all. I'm so glad she isn't dating garrotter and now we know where she goes when she disappears. You do earn the name cliffie b***h for this chapter ending. ;)
Author's Response:
Lol, I will gladly take that title. It'll update on Friday and hopefully not be as much of a cliffie.
Date: 05 Jun 2018 12:48 AM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
I didn't expect her to be in the mafia more like an FBI informant. Can this even work in the long run? Great twist.
Author's Response:
That is the crux! Can they actually make it work or will it blow up in their faces?
Date: 04 Jun 2018 11:53 PM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
nice update
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 11:31 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2018 11:06 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
Well dun dun dun...😉
Author's Response:
Yeah, I wonder which one she'll choose?
Date: 04 Jun 2018 10:04 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
OMFG that is the coolest I was not expecting that at all I figured she was looking who killed her dad but the BOSS WOW.
Author's Response:
Lol. She's definitely looking into who killed her dad. She's also the boss lady.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 9:04 PM Title: How I came to realize I was royally fucked.
OH! This is wonderful. I was totally surprised, in the best of ways! So he's going to turn dirty fed? Or will he try to play her? I guess we shall see...She doesn't seem to be one that can be played. It might be dangerous to try. He's fucked either way, isn't he? How delicious....thanks!
Author's Response:
I'm so pleased by your reaction. Yeah, she's running the show.
Date: 04 Jun 2018 4:16 PM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
I was wondering when he was going to lose his shit.
Author's Response:
He's going to be doing a lot of that, lol.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 6:16 AM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
Sad but who knows
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 5:49 PM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
Ok. I have to know more about Bella because she is shady AF.
Author's Response:
She sure is looking that way.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2018 1:02 AM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
I wonder if garrott worked for her dad maybe? Edward has some groveling to do & bella has some apologizing to do.
Author's Response:
They do need to actually talk instead of being wary roommates.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 12:10 AM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
I was surprised to hear that some of your readers think Bella is undercover too. That thought never occurred to me, but it seems to be a valid one. Maybe she is looking for whoever killed her father and is planning revenge on them. IDK. Sounds possible to me. She didn't much like Tony getting a bit territorial on her, so he doesn't seem very into him. This all is still a bit of a mystery to me, so I'll just keep reading and see how it all plays out. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Yes, several readers said they thought that. :) She's hiding something, it's hard to put your finger on it without all of the information.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2018 11:13 PM Title: When I realized I didn't really know Bella at all.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 30 May 2018 9:58 AM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
OMG it is not what he thinks????
Author's Response:
Probably not. ;)
Date: 29 May 2018 6:20 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
Shame on Bella. He is giving up his bed and privacy for her.
Author's Response:
All is not as it seems, without a doubt.
Date: 29 May 2018 6:05 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
Well I bet she thinks Ed. Oh Tony is voting to drop her. Then again maybe the guy was not a date but just followed her home.
Author's Response:
She is afraid he'll move on without her.
Date: 29 May 2018 5:04 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
nice updates
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2018 11:45 AM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
Bella you got some explaining to do!!
Author's Response:
She sure does!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2018 11:56 PM Title: How I came to realize Bella Swan could break my heart.
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!