Date: 24 Aug 2018 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok. Bella isn't pregnant, so why does it matter if Renata three brothers are still looking for her? Did I miss something?
Thank you for reviewing. Okay, Renata/Renee, as far as her family knows came to America with a baller company. She went missing from her hotel room during the night. Her family think she has been kidnapped as they knew nothing about her been pregnant with Bella. Because of who got her pregnant she knew there would be a big problem so she ran away. Her brothers are still looking for Renata. I hope that helps a little.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
AWWW!!! HELL NOOOOOO!!!!!! OK...OK... ( DEEP BREATH) I NEED AN UPDATE ASAP!!!!PLEASE!!! I'M ALL CAUGHT UP AND WANTING MORE.
Thank you for reviewing. The next chapter has just been sent to the beta.
But unfortunatly my father has been ill for sometime. The doctors have put him on end of life, my mother has taken him home to our family home. We are supporting mother and spending time with father. I did manage to write a couple of chapters when I sat with him through out the might.
I also have a son with aspergers, although he is 24 years old he still needs supervising. So I will do eveything I can to keep the story been posted every 2 weeks.
Date: 21 Aug 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for the update..Well done. .Charlie is not right..I hope all Bella's money is not gone..I also hope Bella is not related to Edward. Until you post again
Thank you for reviewing. No Edward and Bella arw not related in anyway.
Date: 20 Aug 2018 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hooray she is going!! I wish she could go to italy with edward for the summer! I feel bad for Fred too!
Thank you for reviewing. It is ashame she can't go to Italy, but things will look up for them both.
Date: 20 Aug 2018 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter. You can not interview a child if their parent is not present.
Thank you for reading. I'm from the UK, and the police can interview anyone over the age of 16 here. My beta is a Aussie and she didn't pull me up on it, so maybe it's the same over there. Thank you for telling m I'll try to do better research on the subject.
Date: 27 Jul 2018 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
AT THIS POINT I'M HOPING EDWARD WILL KILL HIS DAD AND UNFORTUNATELY EARN HIS BONES AND TAKE OVER...... BUT I READ YOUR!!!! MAGIC NOT MINE. (he he he)
Thank you for reading and leaving a review. I don't know if you have heard the saying, "What goes around comes around." or Karma is a bitch. Just saying.
Date: 27 Jul 2018 8:11 AM Title: Prologue
WOOOO! HOOOOO!!! This different and so inviting. Great start!!
Thank you for leaving the review. People enjoyed reading things for a child's point of view. I used to be a nanny and loved to listen to children explain things. I had the same experience with my own 5 children and my 2 grandchildren.
Date: 17 Jul 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
New reader to your story..I love it..,Is Bella related to Edward ?..if so that would suck..until you post again
Thank you for reading the story. They are not related in any way I promise. I was aiming to update every 2 weeks, but my beta has left the fandom. I'm now in the process of finding a new beta.
Date: 11 Jul 2018 5:13 AM Title: Prologue
There ARE. There are two sides
Thank you for telling me what you would call the story. It spelt that way for a reason, plus that's how we speak for my town. I think if it was to much of a problem my beta would have pointed it out. Sorry if this comes across rude, but when you have dyslexia you get sick of verbally been attacked. But its like some of the ladies have said why should this stop me from writing. Being 57 years old its a little disheartening. I hope you continuing to read the story.
Date: 09 Jul 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Carlisle is so horrible! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for putting the translations in the story so i don't have to scroll down. It is really annoying when it's at the bottom!!
I hate it as well when you have to keep scrolling down to see the translation, I think it spoils the story flow. I have had a few people complain but to be honest I'm going to keep doing it.
Date: 12 Jun 2018 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story excites me. The mystery and how people's lives intermingle. The violence of Carlisle is just enough to go and beat the hell out of him but I'm sure I could only bend his finger. I can't wait for the next few pages. I gather when Edward and Bella meet each other at Juilliard things will be very strange. Can't wait to read more
Hi thank you for reading and reviewing the story.. I'm hoping you will continue to enjoy it. There are many people ready to beat Carlisle as well.
Date: 10 Jun 2018 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG, this story is amazing. I haven't been keeping up with this site, but I am back and a welecomed surprise. Please keep it going.
Hi thank you for reading and reviewing the story. Because of my beta busy schedule I am hoping to update at least every 2 weeks. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow. They are looking for Renee but I guess that does not include Bella. Oh well. She has enough problems with Charlie. So move out and take your things and get that money left by your grandmother.
Hi thank you for reading and reviewing. Poor Bella has a lot on her plate. I hope you will like the next chapter.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow soo much info and new questions who is Bella’s real dad I hope Charlie gets some Karma
Thank you for reading and reviewing. There was a lot of information in this chapter, I hope it didn't send you in overload. We will find out who Bella dad is but not for a while.
Date: 15 May 2018 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Edward! Unfortunately he wasn’t born second and that’s the life he was born into!!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Carlisle is so hard on Edward as he is the eldest and should be taking over for him. Sometimes parents dream and hope things for our children and when it doesn't happen we get disappointed. I know my children have not done things I hoped they had.
Date: 15 May 2018 4:08 PM Title: Prologue
I really enjoyed catching the kids view of things. Can’t wait for more.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I just love childrens perspective on life. I keep saying one day I will write a story completely from children's point of view.
Date: 15 May 2018 2:57 PM Title: Prologue
You caught the children's version of events so well!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I have worked with children all my working life. I have 5 child of my own, and 2 grandchildren. I just love listening to them they are so random, and see the world so simply.