Date: 27 Jun 2019 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward tough of everything he’s made for this I am glad he’s getting he’s own team I hope he’s got the support not only from he’s Nonno but also Bella’s grandfather
Thank you for reading. Bella's grandgather already loves Edward.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Uuuu let the games begin I say get Garrett 1st then let alll the girls as in Bella Alice and Rosalie handle Lucy the bitch jasper and do your worst to carslie and esme with the help of the families of course
Thank you for reading. Edward has to get his ducks in a row, then there will be no stopping them.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank God they found Bella..now let the games begin..get Lucy first..then Jasper..sorry Garret should go first..save Carlisle and Esme for last ..Thank you for the update..Well done
Thank you for reading, and leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my gosh, they found Bella. It has to be Esme or Jasper who had Bella kidnapped. I cant believe they would bring her to the house. Cant wait for another update.
Thank you for reading. They hide her in plain sight. But who put her there.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
We still don't know who has Bella..Edward couldn't have been shot..Edward has to save Bella..she has been thru enough...Carlisle needs to see his wife is behind his downfall..his koomah...Thank you for the update..Well done..I still want to know who has Bella..until you post again
Thank you for reading. I like reading your thoughts.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
Maaaannn this is getting good! I think it’s awake working with another family to set Carlisle up
Thank you for reading. I love you thinking. Your the only one who has come up with this theory.
Date: 26 May 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG I need her safe ..this is so not fair..I hope its the right peopke who h ave Bella...this can't be happing
Thank you for reading. I don't want to keep you waiting for answers very long. The next chapter is with my pre readers. I've started the important chapter ;)
Date: 24 May 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hmm Cullen or birth father's thugs?
Coming back to NY was a mistake, as was shoeing that disk
Thank you for reading. She did take a risk, but she thought she might be able to slip in and out without been recognised.
Date: 24 May 2019 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am thinking that Garrett has got Bella. I am worried about her now. I am surprised that she went out on the stage. And what money will they lose???? As always, you leave me wanting more.
Thank you for reading. I wouldn't let anything really horrible happen to Bella. The money that would be lost is the money the people are hoping to sell her for. I debated about letting Bella go out onto the stage, but I was told by my beta it was what usually happens.
Date: 23 May 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Such a fantastic story and chapter, but please get Edward and Bella back together. It’s been so long! I’m dying for them to be back together. It’s just too sad. Thank you for writing!
Thank you for reading. They will be reconnecting in two more chapters.
Date: 02 May 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward it’s still good uuu Carlisle and your second family are in mayor trouble I am glad Alice leaft jasper I love how they did a decoy in the clubs
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. I love reading them.
Date: 01 May 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you so much for the update...Carlise deserves everything that comes his way...What does Esme have that Lizzy didn't have? was it an arranged marriage Carlisle & Lizzy. I can't wait to see what happens when the Grandparents get there. I hope the feds don't mess up Emment & Rosie wedding...well done..until you post again
Thank you for reading. Yes, Carlisle and Lizzy did have an arranged marriage. I would never be cruel and spoil a wedding, that happened at my wedding.
Date: 30 Apr 2019 3:43 PM Title: Prologue
ignore troll, write your story the way you see it..they don't have to read story..I don't think they know definition of fan fiction..waiting patiently for update
Thank you for the reassurance. I think what a few people don't realise is I actually have dyslexia and it is really hard for me to write.
Date: 24 Apr 2019 2:58 PM Title: Prologue
I can't wait for next update....I'm really enjoying this story...Edward is everything Carlise wanted in his son, but his son is through with him, I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..well done
Thank you for reading. Also for your encouragment I need it at the moment as I have a troll on fan fiction site.
Date: 21 Apr 2019 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for the update..almost!!! Almost Masen needed to be there. I don't remember if Emmett ever met Bella..what a coincidence that Alice is with Jazz ..I can't wait for Edcward and Bella to meet again..until you post again ..Well done
Thank you for reading. Bella never met Emmett. When they looked up the family on the internet it said Edward had a younger brother Dale Emmett. Edward refered to his brother as Em, so Bella wouldn't put them together.
Date: 04 Apr 2019 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
When is Edward going to find her? Also, and EEG is for brain waves. EKG is for heart rythm
Thank you for reading. I wrote that she had an MRI scan, as I'm from the UK that is what happens here. Then my beta told me that in the states its done from an EEG, but for some reason I put EKG goodness knows why I did that. In the UK we call heart traces ECG here, so I can't even say I wrote it as though they where in the UK.
Believe it or not you and one other person actually pointed that out to me.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well, I guess Alice has grown up some. Glad Bella is making progress. What has been going on with Edward? I'm wondering how they will get back together. I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Can't wait for your next update.
Thank you for reading the story and leaving me your thoughts on the chapter.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, lots going on. Ok, remind me again who Don Mancini is and who he is to Bella and Renee.
Don Mancini is Renata (Renee) father. The only people who knows that is Lizzy, Didyme, and Marcus. He doesn't know 100% about Bella.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
What in the world????? Carlisle is a cruel man. He just had his own wife killed. Ok, in this chapter and in another you have Nessie as dating Laim but in the beginning you have Maggie
Thank you for pointing that out for me, much appreciated.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
It took me a minute to remember who Maggie was. She's Auntie Anna's friend right????? I can't remember does she know the truths about Bella???? I hope not. Glad Marcus got there in time. I have a feeling that Joe had lost his job. I wonder about his life.
Yes she is Auntie Anna friend from nursing school. She knew that Renee was running away but that's all she knew.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm glad that the chargers against Bella and Fred were dropped. But I do not think anything will happen to Mike or Alice or the twins. Wow, Edward definitely stepped up and protected his family. Carlisle maybe be a ruthless mob boss but has far as protecting he sucks. The Irish mob should have never gotten in if he was upping his security.
Thank you for your thoughts.
Date: 27 Mar 2019 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, its like the whole town is against them. Glad Jane called Harry. How did Charlie and Sue get a hold of Bella's trust fund if it was invested? I can't believe Alice has turned her back on Bella. Best friends have disagreements a d fights but Alice has turned completely against her.
Not all the twon just the popluar kids and their parents. It all depends what the investment are. She was eighteen and the money was her's then, but Charlie was given so much a month for Bella's needs he just didn't spend it on her.
Date: 26 Mar 2019 9:34 PM Title: Prologue
I love how you have the characters at a young age describe how they see things. It's so cute.
Thank you for reviewing. I'm retired now, but I've been a nursery nurse all my working life. Also having 5 children of my own I just love to hear them talk to explain things. My Granddaughter is 18 months old she said. "Mamar, football a bit boring." I could'nt stop laughing. I think i was a hint for hubby to let her watch her much loved Trolls blu-ray.
Date: 26 Mar 2019 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
FYI sit is for the heart, EEG is for the brain, keep on writing
I told my beta that. I actually wrote MRI, as that would see if there is any brain damage. Even a CT would. I've had so many EEG, and MRI done this past 57 years. I just thought that it was called diffrently in the States. My beta is a nurse
Date: 21 Feb 2019 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh hells no carslie people know you are an ass they know rennata and Bella is her daughter so I hope they protect her and find a way to bring carslie down
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I enjoyed reading your thoughts.
Date: 09 Feb 2019 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Carlisle is a real bastard. I really hope Edward finds out about him soon. Garrett and Carlisle both need to be killed and painfully.
Thank you for reading. Many people feel the same way about them.
Date: 10 Jan 2019 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can someone please put garret in he’s place please ass hole dam Edward is scary wait till edward gets a hole of carslie
Thank you for reading. I don't think anyone can control Garrett but the boss. I wouldn't like to get on the wrong side of Edward in mafia mode.
Date: 25 Nov 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow...great chapter...i was surprised that carlisle was so good to bella...
Thanks for reading. He is a sheep in lambs clothing, have you ever heard that saying before. I might just be showing my age lol.
Date: 25 Nov 2018 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
So glad they did the deed! I hate that garrett walked in. Love when edward just flips his switch and mafia edward appears. He is so sexy! Yes def. Carlisle knew what he was setting edward up for. He went to have a romp with esme. And this was his perfect way of getting edward involved. Just him shaking bella hand was his way of tricking edward it softened edward. Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Thank you for reading. I like all your thoughts on the chapter. I'll let you into a secret its the first time I have ever written lemons, I had to get help lol. So glad you liked it.