Date: 14 Sep 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for the update..I hope you had a lovely time on your much deserved honeymoon..😊..Bella ain't no joke..lol..Mia didn't see if coming..lol..but she felt it..I love the grandmother thanking Bella, she Was Going To Excuse Herself and get her gun..Can't Wait For Next Update
Date: 02 Sep 2019 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ack I hope they find Bella soon.
Liam and Hostage....wait till be finds out what really happened. Glad Marcus is helping Em/E figure things out.
Well at least Bella tried to get away. Poor B.
Surprised Carlisle is calling E/Em/Didyme family. Arsehole
Date: 02 Sep 2019 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ack I really don't like her back in NY. Alice is just crazy with pushing her to go out in NY. OF course they go to the one restaurant that Carlisle/Esme went to. Glad the show went well but Ack for the kidnapping....again.
Date: 02 Sep 2019 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yea thinking Esme is the plant. Interesting that they got to leave so quickly. LOVE that everyone it calling out Carlisle on Esme et al's crap.
Glad Nonna told Edward. Oh no...I was thinking maybe Bella had irish dad, not russian. Ack you're warping my thinking of what I thought was going on. and Bella back in NY would not be a good thing
Date: 02 Sep 2019 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least Em sees what a shithead Carlisle is. Esme is pathetic. Glad Marcus took care of Carmen. Carlisle isn't going to have anyone on his side anymore with the crap Esme and all are pulling.
Glad E is so much smarter than Garrett. Can't wait for him to go down. Carlisle is getting stupider and stupider with his "new family". Wow Jasper needs taken down too. Human Trafficing, really? Scum of the earth they all are.
Glad E has Marcus to talk about things.
Date: 01 Sep 2019 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Crowley didn't waste any time did her. I get Alice wanting to be protective but think she went about it the wrong way. Don't blame Bella for wanting a DNA test. Stealing B's money is disgusting. Hope she nails him for it.
Date: 29 Aug 2019 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thank you for the update..Well done..omg Edward I hope you are paying attention and see this man approach Bella..Please let no harm come to her..that stewardess got more then she bargin for..lol..Bella got some spunk to her..I love the chapter please update again soon I need to know Bella is alright and that Edward is on the case..until you post again
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. I have started the next chapter but its our 34th wedding anniversary tomorrow. Me and the hubby are going on our belated honeymoon. We met and got married in 6 weeks and never got to go away. 5 children later our last child has moved out so now its time to do things for ourselves. Even though I do look after my grandchildren while their parents work.
Date: 28 Aug 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok what the fudge I tough Stefan was Bella’s father who is this Paolo Conti
Thank you for reading. Paolo Conti is the head of the Conti crime family, he is a member of the cartel. He was a good friend of Renata before they where told about their arranged marriages. Stefan wants in on the Cartel, what better way than to claim Bella as his daughter. Renata is no longer around to tell her father who is Bellas father.
Date: 21 Aug 2019 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ok, so is Carlisle behind all of this or not. I can decide. Jasper is definitely.
Thank you for reading. We have another mystery to settle next. But it wont be long before everything is revealed.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for the update..well done..I hope Edward gets to the bottom of this really quick..Im not sure if Carlisle is involved or if its all Jasper..How do baster children think they are entitled to anything the legitimate children have..Jasper and his sister are crazy and Carlisle is blind or just dumb..Thank god for the grandparents..until you post again..I cant wait to see what happens next
Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.
Date: 12 Aug 2019 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Ok I see how awesome Nonno and the uncles train Edward he’s really quick to make decisions and get everyone safe love it Bella reconnice the voice right
Thank you for reading. Yes she recognised Seth voice as soon as he called her buttercup. It was what one of her captive called her.
Date: 26 Jul 2019 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
Please please update soon please
Thank you for reading. I'm hoping to write more now my last 2 children moved out with in weeks of each other. When I say children they are 28 and 25. So that just leaves me and hubby. Unless anyone fills my day up I'm home alone most days.
Date: 27 Jun 2019 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward tough of everything he’s made for this I am glad he’s getting he’s own team I hope he’s got the support not only from he’s Nonno but also Bella’s grandfather
Thank you for reading. Bella's grandgather already loves Edward.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
Uuuu let the games begin I say get Garrett 1st then let alll the girls as in Bella Alice and Rosalie handle Lucy the bitch jasper and do your worst to carslie and esme with the help of the families of course
Thank you for reading. Edward has to get his ducks in a row, then there will be no stopping them.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank God they found Bella..now let the games begin..get Lucy first..then Jasper..sorry Garret should go first..save Carlisle and Esme for last ..Thank you for the update..Well done
Thank you for reading, and leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 16 Jun 2019 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my gosh, they found Bella. It has to be Esme or Jasper who had Bella kidnapped. I cant believe they would bring her to the house. Cant wait for another update.
Thank you for reading. They hide her in plain sight. But who put her there.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
We still don't know who has Bella..Edward couldn't have been shot..Edward has to save Bella..she has been thru enough...Carlisle needs to see his wife is behind his downfall..his koomah...Thank you for the update..Well done..I still want to know who has Bella..until you post again
Thank you for reading. I like reading your thoughts.
Date: 02 Jun 2019 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
Maaaannn this is getting good! I think it’s awake working with another family to set Carlisle up
Thank you for reading. I love you thinking. Your the only one who has come up with this theory.
Date: 26 May 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG I need her safe ..this is so not fair..I hope its the right peopke who h ave Bella...this can't be happing
Thank you for reading. I don't want to keep you waiting for answers very long. The next chapter is with my pre readers. I've started the important chapter ;)
Date: 24 May 2019 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hmm Cullen or birth father's thugs?
Coming back to NY was a mistake, as was shoeing that disk
Thank you for reading. She did take a risk, but she thought she might be able to slip in and out without been recognised.
Date: 24 May 2019 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am thinking that Garrett has got Bella. I am worried about her now. I am surprised that she went out on the stage. And what money will they lose???? As always, you leave me wanting more.
Thank you for reading. I wouldn't let anything really horrible happen to Bella. The money that would be lost is the money the people are hoping to sell her for. I debated about letting Bella go out onto the stage, but I was told by my beta it was what usually happens.
Date: 23 May 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Such a fantastic story and chapter, but please get Edward and Bella back together. It’s been so long! I’m dying for them to be back together. It’s just too sad. Thank you for writing!
Thank you for reading. They will be reconnecting in two more chapters.
Date: 02 May 2019 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward it’s still good uuu Carlisle and your second family are in mayor trouble I am glad Alice leaft jasper I love how they did a decoy in the clubs
Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts. I love reading them.
Date: 01 May 2019 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you so much for the update...Carlise deserves everything that comes his way...What does Esme have that Lizzy didn't have? was it an arranged marriage Carlisle & Lizzy. I can't wait to see what happens when the Grandparents get there. I hope the feds don't mess up Emment & Rosie wedding...well done..until you post again
Thank you for reading. Yes, Carlisle and Lizzy did have an arranged marriage. I would never be cruel and spoil a wedding, that happened at my wedding.
Date: 30 Apr 2019 3:43 PM Title: Prologue
ignore troll, write your story the way you see it..they don't have to read story..I don't think they know definition of fan fiction..waiting patiently for update
Thank you for the reassurance. I think what a few people don't realise is I actually have dyslexia and it is really hard for me to write.
Date: 24 Apr 2019 2:58 PM Title: Prologue
I can't wait for next update....I'm really enjoying this story...Edward is everything Carlise wanted in his son, but his son is through with him, I can't wait to see how it all unfolds..well done
Thank you for reading. Also for your encouragment I need it at the moment as I have a troll on fan fiction site.