Date: 23 May 2018 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
It is nice to read what Bella was thinking. So she was attracted to him right from the start, but also was wary because of how her asshole husband treated her. How many chapters do you expect this to be? Will it go on to where the first chapter ended or farther? It's ok if you don't answer my questions. I'm just thinking out loud...I know I'm going to enjoy all of this, no matter what!
I'm going to go further so that we all know how it worked out when he came back. :)
Date: 02 May 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Do you have any idea how happy you've made me with this story? Probably not. My favorite, hands down, all time, kind of story is and older Bella with a younger Edward. How thrilled was I to see that this exact kind of story was what you had written for the Forbidden Fruit contest. I didn't join and read any of the stories, but am now getting in my inbox the stories from writers I read regularly who did enter that contest. I friggen loved this story. It warmed my heart with every word. I felt the longing and the love in every word I read. I was ready to accept that it was a one shot until I got to the end and saw that you plan to continue it, once you get over your writer's block. You have made my day. I look forward so much to whatever else you can give us between these two. The story was sweet, tender, full of emotion with a bit of fun thrown in. Thank you. You know I love to read you and that, along with the fact that you're now writing in my favorite genre, makes me very happy. I had a bad day today. This makes it just a bit better. Thanks again!
I love getting your reviews! It really makes my day to hear from you. I have never tried this genre before, and I really wanted to give it my timme and do it justice. It's really lovely to know I accomplished that. Thank you.