Date: 12 Jun 2019 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
So love this story... even more now that they are together. I just finished “Going Down” and tried to review almost every chapter but I kept getting a “fatal l error”. Your stories are amazing. Love your dominating Edward and your feisty Bella.
Date: 26 Feb 2019 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
It is about time that Tanya left. She is a horrible person. Jessica is also on the shit list for not telling Edward about Bella. She knows they love each other. I'm glad Edward is well enough to go after Bella and get to the bottom of all these lies. They are meant for each other. Bella needs to open her heart.
Date: 02 Feb 2019 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Why oh why! I really wanted a strong Bella who would have stayed around because no matter what she would want to be there for Edward. Forget if Tanya. She still should have stayed. How could she not want to fight for their relationship. Really hoping maybe Tanya and Jacob where having an affair and he is the daddy.
Date: 30 Jan 2019 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Is it bad that I was relieved he was in a car accident? I was thinking he took off to Vegas to elope with Tanya. The only way that would be best is if you had him die or have amnesia.
Hmmm. we will see. Thanks for the comment
Date: 29 Dec 2018 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh how sad, I am wishing every chapter which you write Bella pulls her head out of the clouds and just finally admits to Edward she loves him. I also think that maybe Jake and Tanya get together in the process of all of this.
Date: 18 Dec 2018 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Just finished the third reading of this story. Love, love, love it. There is only one other story that I love as much as this one, "until we taste the same". In all the years that I have been reading fanfiction, Chaos and Until we taste the same - these two stories are the best and most loved by me.
Thank you for the effort you give to this and your other stories and please, please keep writing. Would love a sequel after this one finishes (hopefully not for a looooooong time. regards, Pamela Hanley email@example.com
Date: 30 Sep 2018 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
So glad that you've managed to provide us all with an update.
I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I'm so glad Edward has finally admitted his feelings for Bella I only wish Bella does the same now.
There is a part of me wondering whether Jake and Tanya are hooking up together behind the seens? I certainly would have blown my top if other half had taken this significant amount of money without talking about it first.
Hmmm... we will see. Thanks so much!
Date: 15 Sep 2018 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh it sounds like Jake is feeling guilty. I have a feeling that he took the money for his mistress and not his parents. I would be furious him taking the money and not saying anything to Bella. I would have blown up at him.
Well, that's a thought... Thanks for reading :)