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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2018 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 11

Bella needs to close the account and open another one in only her name. She just needs to dump Jake. He is probably having an affair and he is reflecting his guilt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh it sounds like Jake is feeling guilty.  I have a feeling that he took the money for his mistress and not his parents.  I would be furious him taking the money and not saying anything to Bella. I would have blown up at him. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2018 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2018 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

:) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella she needs to leave Jake

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2018 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

yikes, jakes being a big ass

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2018 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh i cannot wait!!!!

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Thanks Hun!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

I loved it Edward is unraveling and Bella might be too but hmmmm her hubby s not the right match for her



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Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

good



Author's Response:

Thanks Hun!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it can’t wait for more 



Author's Response:

Yay!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2018 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 10

Laurent was cracking me up. Lol. 



Author's Response:

Love him!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



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TY!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

I wonder what the guys are going to say about the tension between them.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2018 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 8

:-)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2018 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Jacob and Tanya need to go. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well I am never in favor of cheating. If you find you can not keep you vows, Bella. Also what you are offering Tanya, Ed. Don't stay in these relationships or dont enter in to a new one. Too many open doors.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 9

Love getting updates on this story. 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

My oh my things are changing and I don’t think they can stop it from happening 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

Ohhhh cant wait

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it can’t wait for more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

so much chemistry. seems jake is going to have some issues with their relationship . . . wonder if this is the beiginning of their problems or if it is something else. Also kind of wondering how long b/jakes issues will go on for before something happens 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :) great questions!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



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TY

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2018 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2018 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't like Edward being manipulated by Tanya's dad. He sounds like a jerk and Tanya is not much different. It is Edward's place, not hers. I think he should show her to the door. She wants him, but I don't think she loves him. Daddy wants the union. Edward needs to get out now.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

I loved it damn how intense I could feel it as I was reading 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

good. seems tanya is already picking up on the competition. wondering what is going to happen between b/jake and when

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2018 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

Edward is having some dirty thoughts about Bella. I am thinking Tanya is jealous.  Ooo, will we get a brief Bella POV if this?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yes. Drop the others and sizzle together.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

I hate Tanya.... can we please throw her off a cliff or something.... and SOON??? I mean, Jacob can jump after her and try to save her, if you want to kill two birds with one pretty stone.... HEH

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2018 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

Damn...

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2018 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

Damn...

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2018 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh my I love it so far I need more please 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh!!! They could get into some trouble.  Where is Tanya???

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2018 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

good. keep wondering what is going to lead to jake/b's relationship downfall and when. also wondering same for e/tanya, although it seems like e would be more willing to walk away 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2018 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2018 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

They are becoming friends.  

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

Ooo! NYC! Exciting!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Author's Response:

Xoxo

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'll have to look up Polluck.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, at least he respects her relationship if not his own.
He must have been ready to jump her if he had to be that rude.

Author's Response:

Lol! True.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Seth + weekend = bella + edward

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dinner is fine in groups but alone not a great idea 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dinner is fine in groups but alone not a great idea 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dinner is fine in groups but alone not a great idea 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2018 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

Dinner is fine in groups but alone not a great idea 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2018 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well here we go ground rules set. We know the four main people



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Yes we do! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2018 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2018 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love everything you write! I can't wait for the next chapter.  LOVE YA!



Author's Response:

Love ya back!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2018 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

With the last part of this chapter does it mean that Peter is usually Tanya's driver?  Wonder what Tanya will have to say about that. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2018 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can’t wait for more 



Author's Response:

Yay!!! Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2018 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 5

I just don't know how to feel,about this story.  I obviously want Bella and Edward together.  I have never liked Jacob or Tanya much at all, so you know who I'm rooting for....



Author's Response:

Lol, I know :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2018 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2018 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

Why is Jake wanting a baby so bad? 



Author's Response:

Great question. We will see...

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2018 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

good. seem like b and jake already have some fundamental issues. wonder how long it will take for e/b to grow closer 



Author's Response:

Hmmm we will see. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2018 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edward needs to stay away from Tanya. When everyone you know hates a person, take it as a clue. Stay away. Do not marry! Do not fuck!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

Hmmmm intriguing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

good. can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

Don’t know why Edward is allowing Tanya to move in. I think he’s doing it to shut up her whining.

Is Edward in some kind of illegal art activity?

Think the speed needs to pick up. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!

 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2018 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love EVERYTHING you write!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Ahh thank you!

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

You got me hooked on this story

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Loving it!



Author's Response:

Glad to read that!

Reviewer: Kathmart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

I really love where this story is going. Thank you for another great chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella thought to herself about the pressure she felt to marry Jacob. Can't wait to find out about that. Jacob seems like the perfect husband.....maybe too perfect. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

The spark has begun.  I'm very curious as too how Bella will end her relationship with Jacob.  He seems like a dream come true .  Hmmmm....

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2018 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

good. wondering when we will learn how/why she got together with jake

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2018 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for giving us Edward's POV. It's nice to know what both characters are thinking. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2018 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

CCan't wait to read more.  Edward just dismissed her there at the end. 



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ugh Women like Tanya make all of us women look like manipulators.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  Guessing B isn't all that keen on kids.



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We will see Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Of course, I will follow you through this new adventure of Bella and Edward, even if we have to accept the presence of both Jake and Tanya, LOLLL !

Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks soo much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward will never be able to look Tanya in the eyes and say move in with me.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

He felt the electrisity just as she does so as soon as he finds out she is married he put up walls.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

I Love this!!! I love ALL your work, however!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2018 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



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Thanks for reading!

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