Date: 28 Apr 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay! They’re going to have a date! Can’t wait for them to get to know each other better and spend time together.
Date: 28 Apr 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Even I want to go to the bakery and work to cover Bella’s shift just so I can smack Alice around I’ll straight her out
Date: 28 Apr 2018 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
i cannot wait for Alice to find out Bella snagged a prince and she gets nothing. Poetic justice for her. I LOOOOVVVEEEE this story.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2018 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Please tell me Alice is going to get the rudeness slapped out of her. She is AWFUL!!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter,love this Edward and bella. How long until bella finds out Edward is a prince?
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seriously, send Alice to her Auntie Angel. She will come back a new person
Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was a sweet scene in the park.
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmm sounds like we need to have more of Em's background. What a weenie.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter keep on writing, soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2018 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow his brother is very lost hopefully he will find his way
Date: 22 Apr 2018 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
I hope Emmett can get himself straightened up! I can’t wait for the next chapter and Bella/Masen time. She needs her Prince Charming!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett sure is a mess. Dam!!
Date: 21 Apr 2018 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett seems troubled to me. Something hurt him. Alice is must awful.
Date: 21 Apr 2018 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks for the update :)
Date: 21 Apr 2018 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2018 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
CAN'T WAIT!!! BUT... WAIT I MUST
READ YOU SOON
Date: 21 Apr 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2018 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well if Emmett needs to fit in, he can fit in in my bed lol. Great chapter, loved it
Date: 21 Apr 2018 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
I hope Emmett is serious about letting the people at rehab help him.
Date: 19 Apr 2018 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella needs Mason since she has no one. I hope he is honest with her. She needs someone to trust.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this story! Please update soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2018 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella! I want to beat the shit out of Alice! I hope she suffers at some point...seriously!
Date: 09 Apr 2018 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
My heart is just braking for her and Charlie and I just want to kick Alice's ass. Dr V is a grate man and cares very much for Bella and Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2018 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Alice needs a reality check
Date: 03 Apr 2018 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice is a spoiled brat who doesn't care about anyone but herself!
Date: 02 Apr 2018 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
WOW. They really just need to throw Malice out. What a biatch. Glad Dr V is helping her some.
Date: 02 Apr 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
First, we buy a big insurance policy on Alice, and then we kill her,,, Problem solved!
Date: 02 Apr 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
I would turn off Alice’s phone and sell her clothes.
Date: 01 Apr 2018 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Kick her ass out. Maybe not. Cut off her phone. She wants it, tell her to get a job
Date: 01 Apr 2018 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 31 Mar 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice needs to be brought way down off her high horse. If she’s gonna make everyone miserable, then they should do the same in return. I think they should take all of her stuff away like her phone and credit cards, if she has any, and all access to money. Hit her where it hurts the most. She’s already mean and hateful so it couldn’t hurt. LOL.
Poor Charlie and especially Bella! Her Prince Charming is coming to her rescue. I can’t wait for more. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2018 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter actually had me tearing up. Damn, I rarely get emotional over a chapter. Dr. V's kindness was so touching. Looking forward to more Edward and finding out what Emmett's been up to. I'm wondering what it'll take for Alice to straighten up.
Sherry
Date: 31 Mar 2018 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
poor b. really hoping alice gets an ass kicking
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2018 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella..... Alice is a total shrew. I hope she learns a dam lesson soon.
Date: 31 Mar 2018 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. It is her dad's faught but with him being sick you hate to make him feel guilty. Alice needs her butt whoop.......alot.
Date: 31 Mar 2018 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well if Alice is 18 then turn her out on the street. If she wants to stay then she has to get a job and not the bakery she has to contribute so much a week for her staying there since she will not help and she does not mind her father or her sister. Tough love is what she needs. When she is gone to school box up her clothes and have them ready when she returns. I know it sounds mean but she needs a big Rude awakening.
Bella will collapse from being over worked and run down and Charlie is going to die. So this has to go down. Edward bailing them out is great but Alice learns nothing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Alice needs a good kick up the ass!! I'll gladly volunteer
Date: 31 Mar 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
more more please :)
Date: 28 Mar 2018 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yea not telling her will backfire eventually, esp when Alice finds out. Jealous biatch that she is.
Date: 28 Mar 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the update. I have to admit this version was f alice makes me want to tie her to a stake throw gaoline on her and light a match
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2018 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Keep on writing
Date: 25 Mar 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Alice needs a major ass beating, like the spoiled little girl she is acting like! I love this story already. Can’t wait for more... 😊😊
Date: 25 Mar 2018 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Take Alice's key no money no phone and she has to behave to live there. Tough love
Date: 25 Mar 2018 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Omgosh!!!! I am sure Bell a does not know that Alice has closed the bakery for the day. I'm sure Alice did that on her own because she didn't want to work.
Date: 25 Mar 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
I like the friendship between Edward and Jake. How did Alice pay for her dress?
Date: 24 Mar 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Alice is a bitch and needs her butt spanked.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
I want to kick Alice's ass so bad OMFG what a bitch. I agree with Jake he better tell Bella that he is the prince.
Date: 24 Mar 2018 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Seriously, write me into this story, I will teach her a lesson or 10 in humility
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOVE FOR YOU.... BUT ALICE DOESN'T DESERVE ANY. SHORT BUT INFURIATING CHAPTER.
READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
So, Alice decides to close up shop instead of trying to make the bakery some money. Sounds typical of a her bratty/ungrateful behavior. What if something happened to Bella and all feel on Alice? Everything would be up in smoke. I love that Edward wants to save Bella and the bakery.
Sherry
Date: 24 Mar 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Really enjoying this! Alice needs a reality check!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Awe Edward is very sweet And caring I love it but Alice needs a reality check and a taste of her own attitude
Date: 21 Mar 2018 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Aww their first "date" in the kitchen... so sweet. Wonder what Alice stole or used to get the dress? Company credit card or stole the money I guess. Poor B.
Date: 21 Mar 2018 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Alice is one snotty bitch. She and Em are going to create lots of issues I bet. Wonder what Alice will do next... steal the money? eek
Date: 21 Mar 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Slightly uptight mother.....ROFL. Kate instead of Tanya, that one is different. Sounds like Em is a royal dickhead.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
it's a start. i suppose.
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Date: 20 Mar 2018 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Smack Alice. Cut her phone off. Bugger her. She screams and acts like a toddler. Treat her like one
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2018 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
If only Alice had a clue. She didn't become so selfish overnight, she's been babied too much all her life. I'm looking forward to Masen and Bella getting to know each other a little better.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2018 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
I want to beat the snot out of Alice and her disrespectful ass.
Sherry
Date: 18 Mar 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Alice is beyond unlikable. I look forward to seeing her brought down a notch or two! It was so sweet of Edward to help Bella. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Loving it!!
Date: 18 Mar 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
I want to kick Alice's ass up between her sholder blades. Bella is trying so hard to keep it together so happy Edward was there for her.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
A lot of fun reading a fairytale. I am liking your characters and their backgrounds. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. It seems that all the burden falls to her and Alice will probably be one of the reasons there’s no end in sight. Can’t wait to see if Bella calls him! *fingers crossed*
Thank you for sharing. I’m really looking forward to your updates! ~RoseE. x
Date: 17 Mar 2018 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
I just love all your stories! You are one of my favorite authors. I noticed that you live in Norther IL, I'm from Southern IL!
Keep up the great work!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
God, Alice is awful. She didn't even try to hide her bitchiness from a stranger. Dam! Edward needs to ditch the vapid women at charity events even if he has to ditch Jake as well.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
HOW OLD IS ALICE? IF SHE'S OLD EOUGH THEN SHE NEEDS TO GO.
READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2018 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
SO WERE OFF TO AN INTERESTING ROYAL START. SO MUMMY WANTS HIS BRIDE TO BE A VIRGIN BUT THROWS DIRT IN HER EYES KNOWING LADY KATHRYN IS LESS THAN PURE. AHUH!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2018 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome story. Mannnn, Alice is a bitch
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2018 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella Alice is horrible now she met Masen will things look up for her
Date: 11 Mar 2018 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it....can't wait for the next chapters.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2018 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Alice is hideous.....