Date: 09 Jun 2018 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can Edward's mother do the 'Off with her head' thing. Don't you think that Malice deserves it. I love this story and can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can Edward's mother do the 'Off with her head' thing. Don't you think that Malice deserves it. I love this story and can't wait to see how it unfolds.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Alice can we just set that bitch on fire PLEASE! Poor Bella I feel so bad for her having such a rotten sister. I am so glad Edward showed up I cant wait to hear what he has to say.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 09 Jun 2018 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
About time Charlie set Alice straight. Out kick her out if she does not change in a large way. Okay now I love you Bella from out fine Prince CHarming.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Alice is just ugh...... I'm glad that Edward came after Bella and interrupted her and Angela.
Date: 09 Jun 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
I say turn on the oven and push Alice in. Evil Bitch! I bet she becomes all apologetic and lovie dovie when she finds out Masen is a prince. She’ll probably think that if Bella marries a prince, then it will be easy living for her. Cow! Thanks for the update, Maria
Date: 09 Jun 2018 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Damn, I want more!!!!!! evil cliffie!!!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2018 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad that they had a good time. Wonder if something happened to Charlie so she had to run out..... or maybe she's just scared....
Date: 04 Jun 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Alice pisses me off worse than Emmett did in the second installment of the Nerd Story of Love series. LOVE this story!
Date: 04 Jun 2018 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Alice makes me want to punch her in the face. Stupid witch.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
He needs to keep telling her she is worth more.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella felt like Cinderella the time she had to go back to a life that affords her none of this and a nasty thieving sister to boot.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is running scared OMG what a great night she had.
Date: 03 Jun 2018 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 03 Jun 2018 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, you nailed that scene.
Sherry
Date: 02 Jun 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my, back to relatively
Maybe she was afraid of what her sister would do with the dress.
Don't give up Masen
Date: 02 Jun 2018 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad James and Victoria seem nice in this story. Can't wait to find out why Bella left.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
IT'S ALWAYS DISAPPOINTING TO ME WHEN BELLA'S BEEN HAD BEFORE EDWARD. SHE LOSES HER SWEET INNOCENS. NOW HE'S JUST THE NEXT ONE : (
Date: 02 Jun 2018 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm happy that Bella had a wonderful date with Edward and no one was an ass hole. But I hate that she did a (non) fuck and duck. grrr...... I hope Edward goes and looks for her to figure out why she did that.
Date: 02 Jun 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love it what a magical night but will he go after her
Date: 29 May 2018 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
He is so sexy and sweet..
Date: 28 May 2018 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
How exciting!!! I can’t wait to hear from Edward and his take on the event. I have to say I loved when Bella waved at Alice and grinned at her! I’m proud of Bella for that. Although I am wondering what Alice will do this time to get back at her. The trip shopping was great. Bella deserves to be pampered and spoiled and definitely deserves some fun and laughter.
Date: 28 May 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 28 May 2018 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
So Bella still does not know that he is a Prince. Will she find out at this charity event? Will someone call him Prince Edward? Will she be upset? Cant wait for more and more.
Date: 27 May 2018 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
When is he going to tell her or is she just going to find out when someone addresses him?????
Date: 27 May 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 11
I think Edward unintentionally is setting Bella up for embarrassment by not being honest about who he is.
Date: 27 May 2018 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
Angela is a trip. Def that fun friend we wish we all had. Glad B is getting her special day/night. Nice that Charlie is making Malice actually do something for the family business.
Date: 27 May 2018 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
YOU ENDED TO SOON : (
READ YOU SOON
Date: 27 May 2018 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Please she does not need to be as Bella in Twilight. This Bella is smarter
Date: 27 May 2018 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awe he made sure she got what she needed now what else does he have in store for her
Date: 22 May 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
They.are perfect for each other.
Date: 21 May 2018 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love Charlie and how protective he is of Bella.
Sherry
Date: 20 May 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is going to kill him for spending way to money on her. Lol. I hope Charlie will get something together for Edward's investors. Alice kills me. She cuts up Bella's clothes and won't let them use her computer. Who brought Alice her computer??? Alice needs a good butt whipping.
Date: 20 May 2018 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love that Charlie is on Masen’s side! I love this story so much! I can’t wait for more!!
Date: 20 May 2018 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad that Charlie is being told more of what Alice's shenanigans area. She's over 18. She needs a rude awakening now that she's technically an adult. Such a selfish snot.
Date: 20 May 2018 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
And we aren't worried Malice will attack these new clothes? I think overnight would be good for a starter.
Date: 20 May 2018 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
And we aren't worried Malice will attack these new clothes? I think overnight would be good for a starter.
Date: 19 May 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Greatly enjoying this one, I look forward to each week"a update!☺
Date: 19 May 2018 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
AS USUAL A TRUE JOY TO READ. BUT!!!!....SOMEONE NEEDS TO PUT ALICE IN HER PLACE AND SOON!!!!! OR SHE'LL BE CAUSING PROBLEMS FOR BELLA AND HIS HIGHNESS AND THAT WE DON'T WANT NOW DO WE?????
READ YOU SOON
Date: 19 May 2018 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
It is time for Bella to be spoiled and for Alice to be put behind bars.
Date: 19 May 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving everyone except for Alice. Maybe she should get arrested or at least a scare of some kind.
Date: 19 May 2018 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story so much! He’s going to make her a princess!
Date: 19 May 2018 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 19 May 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awe he is so sweet
Date: 17 May 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Alice is horrible. I guess Bella will be wearing Alice's clothes.
Date: 13 May 2018 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a way for Alice to ruin Bella's romantic evening. Maybe Bella should donate some of Alice's clothes to charity.
Sherry
Date: 13 May 2018 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 13 May 2018 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it what a perfect date
Date: 12 May 2018 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow malice really needs to grow up and fast. Glad they had a nice first date
Date: 12 May 2018 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yes, Alice nerds her butt spanked.
Date: 12 May 2018 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOOKY HERE MISSY YOU HAVE TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT ALICE CHAPTER AFTER CHAPTER AND SHE'S GETTING WORSE. POOR BELLA MAYBE CHARLIE WILL TALK HER INTO GOING WITH EDWARD.
READ YOU SOON
Date: 12 May 2018 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 9
Alice needs an ass kicking OMFG what a bitch. Edward will try to fix everything for her and she will not take it laying down.
Date: 12 May 2018 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is Cinderella.
Date: 12 May 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is Cinderella.
Date: 12 May 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is Cinderella.
Date: 12 May 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is Cinderella.
Date: 12 May 2018 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is Cinderella.
Date: 12 May 2018 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Their date was perfect! Definitely my kind of date. I hope Bella agrees fo go with Edward to the charity event. I can’t believe Alice cut up Bella’s clothes. Charlie should make her take the homecoming dress back and not let her go. She’s a spoiled little bitch who needs to be brought way down off her high horse!! Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 May 2018 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Alice is a self centred bitch!!!!
Date: 11 May 2018 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
Alice needs to learn a painful lesson about the consequences of her actions! She really is an entitled brat. This is like a cinderella story. I know you'll end it well, so I will endure Alice and her juvenile bratty behavior. Bella and Edward's makeout session was HOT! Thanks!
Date: 08 May 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter. I love Angela. She's just what Bella needed.
Sherry
Date: 07 May 2018 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 07 May 2018 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Charlie finally put his foot down with Alice. aww for B's reaching out to Angela.
Date: 05 May 2018 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love Angela she is the best and cares so much for Bella a true friend. I think she is going to find out how much Edward likes her ;)
Date: 05 May 2018 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love Angela and that she just jumps in to help. I’m so glad she’s helping Bella. Any wait for the next chapter and their date!!
Date: 05 May 2018 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, carry on
Date: 05 May 2018 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
ONLY TIME WILL TELL.
Date: 05 May 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good for Bella all the way around. Glad Charlie has taken charge of Malice.
Date: 04 May 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Bella's father is finally making Alice pull her load of work. He should have done it a long time ago. Glad Angela is such a good friend.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
He is what she needs
Date: 30 Apr 2018 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Emmett lost little boy in a man's body. Emmett needs to know he is loved and very important
Date: 29 Apr 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor B. Malice really needs a reality check....and a kick in the arse
Date: 29 Apr 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm looking forward to how Bella reacts to Masen when she realizes who it truly is.
Sherry
Date: 29 Apr 2018 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapters. Sometimes tough love is the best type of love.
Sherry
Date: 28 Apr 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella but I think Edward is just what she needs