Date: 08 Sep 2018 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Emmett. Glad he talked to Edward and Edward is going to help him find Rose.
Date: 08 Sep 2018 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Rose and Emmett. It's especially sad that Emmett feels like he can't tell any other members of his family the truth.
Date: 07 Sep 2018 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Glad they had some smexty times. Kinda figured it was something like that with Rose. Poor thing
Date: 02 Sep 2018 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 02 Sep 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 01 Sep 2018 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hmm you have me wondering about Em's backstory now. Sadly I think Alice is going to have a rude awakening. Gotta love Charlie.
Date: 01 Sep 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great first impression all but Alice. I am happy Edward put her in her place.
Date: 01 Sep 2018 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for the update...Well done..I wonder what has Emmett feeling this way..I hope Alice & Emmett paths have not crossed..I hope Jasper & Alice haven't done somehing to him..I hope he opens up to Edward..Im nosy I want to know what happen..until you post again
Date: 01 Sep 2018 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well Alice will screw up eventually. :-) I think some time in the clinker ( old term for jail) will do her some good.
Date: 01 Sep 2018 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
I wonder if Emmett and Alice will help each other heal. Glad Esme likes Bella and gave her a chance
Date: 31 Aug 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm happy that the steward is the only person being rude so far. The only exception being Alice but she always is rude. LOL
Date: 29 Aug 2018 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Alice will not cause any trouble while she is there. I am wondering if Emmett and Alice will become romantically involved.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yea I'd be concerned that Alice is pulling something too. Thinking Jasper is going to pop up at the worse possible time. Gotta love Linda.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
They better watch Alice closely. She will steal all the silver. Linda will have her hands full keeping up with her. Edward is so sweet toward Charlie, while letting him still be incharge of his life. Bella and Edward are so cute. Esme should melt her cold heart when she sees how much her son loves Bella.
Date: 28 Aug 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 27 Aug 2018 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
No good is gonna come from taking Alice. She's gonna see dollar signs and probably want in on it. She may have been beaten but I think it is part of a 'game' she's playing at to get back into the apartment. The next chapter... bring it on.
Sherry
Date: 26 Aug 2018 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm with the doubters. I don't trust Alice 1 little bit.
Date: 25 Aug 2018 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well if Alice screws up put her on a boat to no where. Sigh
Date: 24 Aug 2018 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
Excited for this trip and I hppe Alize is good.
Date: 24 Aug 2018 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter, keep on writing
Date: 24 Aug 2018 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
Such a great time. I think Alice is evil and up to something.
Date: 24 Aug 2018 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
: / Disappointing chapter. Alice is playing them and somehow she'll be forgiven.
Date: 24 Aug 2018 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for the update..Well done
Date: 20 Aug 2018 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
I hope this was Alice wakeup call.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I’m with Masen. I wonder if Alice is trying to pull a fast one. Guess we’ll find out. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Alice has concoted a ruse.
Sherry
Date: 19 Aug 2018 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Please write next chapter fast
Date: 19 Aug 2018 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow. I too wonder if the end part is a ruse too.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well lets hope Alice is not pulling a deal on them to hurt Bella. Just seems too quick for her to learn
Date: 19 Aug 2018 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow that went from fun and happy to sad but I hope Alice has learned her lesson
Date: 19 Aug 2018 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope Alice got just enough of what she needed to pull her head out of her ASS and enough not to guilt Charlie and Bella to taking any more of her shit.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED???
READ YOU SOON : /
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED???
READ YOU SOON : /
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED???
READ YOU SOON : /
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED???
READ YOU SOON : /
Date: 19 Aug 2018 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'M NOT SURE IF I SHOULD HOPE ALICE IS OK OR HOPE SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED???
READ YOU SOON : /
Date: 19 Aug 2018 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
I knew she wouldn't last long on the streets.
Date: 19 Aug 2018 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 18 Aug 2018 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love this story I check weekly for updates! Thanks for writing!
Date: 18 Aug 2018 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
Maybe this will be a wake up call for Alice.
Date: 18 Aug 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm hoping that Alice got a huge dose of karma and has learned her lesson. Hopefully she will be nicer and more grateful for what she had. Super happy that Bella isn't going into that situation.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
I see Alice being the biggest brat and causing all kinds of shit. She'll go to the press and tell a ton of outrageious lies. Although Charile did the right thing by kicking her out.
Sherry
Date: 15 Aug 2018 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 21
I can't imagine what a mess Alice will create meeting the royals.
Sherry
Date: 15 Aug 2018 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
You wrote the perfect first time for them.
Sherry
Date: 15 Aug 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so happy that Charlie was strong enough to be tough with Alice. It was hard but with Linda's support he will be fine. They might get Charlie a visiting nurse to check on him during the day when Linda is at work and at night when he is by himself. Bella called her place with Edward home. I wonder if she realized she did that.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
Will Alice ever learn? I noticed that Bella called Edward's place "home". I glad Linda is there for Charlie.
Date: 15 Aug 2018 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 14 Aug 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
So glad she got what was coming to her, but she was a bitch to have pushed Charlie.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
Alice will not change unless this writer bales her out. I see this type person riding her behavior all the way to jail.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Alice is going to be a total pain in the ASS. I am so proud of them for kicking her out but my heart breaks for Charlie.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think they are just pushing a druggie into the corner. She is already hateful and spiteful. I wouldn't put anything past her even murder.
Date: 11 Aug 2018 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow it was needed but it still hurts deep
i loved it thank you
Date: 11 Aug 2018 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for the update. .Poor Charlie I'm happy he has Linda...what is Masen going to do..his mom wants to meet everyone including Alice...I don't know how that's going to work out...Jake is the man...He flashed that badge so fast Jasper took off..lol..I wonder how long it will take Alice to get her shit together..until you post again
Date: 11 Aug 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
IT SUCKS THAT JASPER IS INVOLVED WITH DRUGS.
READ YOU SOON
Date: 11 Aug 2018 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Charlie will give her another chance unfortunately. Parental guilt and all. Great chapter.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Once Esme meets Alice she will understand why he called her a bitch. Bella is so happy I only wish she could stay that way.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
About time malice got a kick in the arse. Nice that Charlie has someone to talk to besides Bella
Date: 10 Aug 2018 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
They are just perfect together.
Date: 07 Aug 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Anyone with any sort of heart would love Bella. Her sister is heartless, so she doesn't count. It would be nice if Alice didn't have a passport and so she could not go.
Date: 05 Aug 2018 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you for the update..Well done..I hope the Queen will put Alice in her place and that she likes Bella..Me. Linda will not be happy that she won't be going also..maybe she'll get to go..until you post again
Date: 05 Aug 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 04 Aug 2018 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
:O :O :O MORE PLEASE
Date: 04 Aug 2018 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
I sure wouldn't take Alice on the plane out of the country. I wouldn't let Alice within a football field length from Bella.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well dont take Alice that way you might enjoy the trip
Date: 04 Aug 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Booboo! You tease me with the shortness of this chapter, but I loved it regardless.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well hopefully Esme won't take out any issues Alice causes on Bella.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
Well, that went better with Edward's mother than I thought. Alice going with them kind of scares me.
Date: 04 Aug 2018 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ya malice is going to do something nasty. At least esme seemed to take it well
Date: 01 Aug 2018 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story. It is so sweet.
Date: 30 Jul 2018 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was as lovely as they are. It was nice to also have a 'commoner' appove of the relationship. It also appears that Bella is finding her worth. I love their story so far. But i am at odds with Alice. I do not know if I want her dealt with or to come around and repent for her actions. Obviously the latter would be best, but the former more likely and dramatic. I just hope that ends well and is balanced.
Date: 28 Jul 2018 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was a really sweet, romantic and sexy date. I hope Edward is ready to head off potential trouble makers.
Date: 28 Jul 2018 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for the update..Well done..I think you did a great job of telling us what happened ...From the dinner to show to the carriage ride to his place..I loved it as much as Bella ..until you post again
Date: 28 Jul 2018 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for the update..Well done..I think you did a great job of telling us what happened ...From the dinner to show to the carriage ride to his place..I loved it as much as Bella ..until you post again
Date: 28 Jul 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
thanks.. sweet love